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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged

@ Khwaish- Very well written ClapClap.....Loved d description Star.....!!! Plot is nicely arranged....M loving it Big smile......!!! Now eagerly waiting for d story to unfold.....!!! So wen is nxt part coming upTongueEmbarrassed......!!!

 

On a different note.....Thanx for adding rain scene....Just imagining abt rains feels soo much better Smile....Its very hot here in mumbai....Damn..!!
 
 
 
 
 
-Nitika

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged

@ Panna- Cool calendar Star.....!!!

 

@ Panna and maham- Thanx for those VM tips Smile.....!!! Dey r quite useful.....!!! Loved d idea of writing d lyrics on notepad.....but for lazybones like me....its difficult to implement actually LOLEmbarrassed.......vill surely try dat nxt time.... if I decided to make moreEmbarrassed.....!!!
 
 
Well thanx again.....for help Smile....!!!
 
 
 
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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Panna's calender... Woowwwwwwss againTongue Loved it..
HOT smoky Koffee with PriDa, A perfect morning to start my day... Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Hey guys! posting something on the new thread for the first time.. thought it was about time.. *sheepish* Anyway this is really short and nothing special.. Thought of this at 2 in the morning when i got the thought in my head of how a few PriDa scenes would continue.. :P This was one of them:


Do watch the scene first because you'll get the OS better that way. Something's wrong with embing feature hence wasnt able to emb the video.

Here's my take on how it could have proceeded.. Hope you all like it.. Smile

This one's for Dee and KhushHug

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 Prithvi wished she would let go of him. Wished that she would stop thanking him. He did not deserve it. Any of it. Slowly he raised his hands and took hold of hers before turning around.

"I wish you wouldn't thank me." He said sadly.

Damini started at the sadness in his tone.

"Why?"

"Because I'm not perfect."

"I never said you were."

"And I make mistakes."

"What kind of mistakes?" She found herself asking.

"Just mistakes."

"Mistakes can be forgiven Prithvi." She replied squeezing his hand in hers.

"They can?" He sounded innocent then. And hopeful.

Damini searched his eyes trying to understand the quiet hope in them.

"Yes they can Prithvi. What's... What's wrong? Did something happen?"

Before he could respond his phone rang and the moment broke. Prithvi realized that he was still holding on to her hands, the grasp speaking of the need inside him... and the desperation to be understood... to be listened to..

He took his cell out trying to focus elsewhere... anywhere but her face... It was Sameer. He had gone too far this time... She had made him take too many steps towards her in just a moment.

"I have to take this. Excuse me." He said awkwardly, wincing inwardly at the disappointment that crossed her face. He hated this. Hated doing this to her. There was so much he wanted to tell her... So much he wanted to share... Starting with how completely and irrevocably he was in love with her. As the feeling engulfed his heart and mind rising above everything else for a moment he stepped forward and pressed a kiss against her forehead before turning away and answering the call. His primal instinct to just hold her then had been too strong. He would have found himself kissing her if had stayed a moment longer.

Damini looked at the retreating back of her husband as he turned and disappeared before sighing and absentmindedly touching the place where his lips had branded her as his...

She had gotten so close this time. She knew he had been on the verge of opening up. She had seen it in his eyes, the only doorway to his otherwise fortified soul. She had also felt in his grasp when he had held her hands in his'.

"Why were you sad Prithvi? I... I don't like you like that" she said voicing her thoughts out loud.

"I wish you would let me inside Prithvi. I wish you would let me take care of you just like you have taken care of me. I wish you would let me love you... Because I love you so much Prithvi... So much."


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Awaiting your comments/criticism. Big smile

Maham.



Edited by ...Maham... - 30 March 2011 at 4:16am

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
that was real cute Maham!!

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Mahammmm    !!
 
 
 
 
Awwwww..............   This is soooo Sweet........... but why soo Short  ??  
 
We are not used to such Short pieces from you ............ This is so Unlike you    LOL   Anything from you is such a Welcome Treat ........... but it should not be in such a small dose ........... This is just like wetting one's lips and then finding the Glass Empty  !!     LOL
 
 
But  really, Thank you for this Beautiful little Gem of a piece  !!    StarClapStar
 
I Loooovee this Concept of building up from the original scene ......... it not only takes us back to those Golden days but also takes our minds into these new Unchartered territories of   " IF Only ......... "  and not only makes all of us thrash out and analyse all their Feelings anew, but let our minds run amock with the thoughts of   " Did they mean this or was it meant to be this way  "  ( you know what i mean , Righttt )     Big smileBig smile
 
 
Aaaahhhh........... If only the scene had turned out this way and we could have seen his Struggle b/w his Love ......... his Urge to reveal everything.............. and the scene ending  with Kissing his wife before going away   !!      Day Dreaming   Sighhhh........... 
 
 
You have managed to Convey Soooo Beautifully the feeling of Sadness mixed with a tinge of Hope on his part    ClapClap   (  But then what is New in that............... you do it everytime .......don't you  )    Big smile   
 
And i soooo wanted  that  feeling of Sadness in this Scene which you have given ............... rather  than  our Pri being made to be Sooo Harsh and  almost Cruel to Damzie ............. Our Damzie loving him soooo much ............ Painful to see her  Confused and unable to understand why her Husband was not Opening up to her , why he was Shutting himself up behind this Wall ...........
 
Anyways , i better stop , because my respose is now Bigger than the OS  !!     LOLLOL
 
Needless to say that as always you are Brrilliantttt  !!      ClapClap 
 
and   Loooooved  it    !!      SmileSmile
 
 
 
 
Love
 
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P.S  :   I know that you are now Busy , but i just wanted to remind you that you had started a  "Journals of an  Addict "    !!      TongueBig smile


Edited by petunia121 - 30 March 2011 at 2:02am

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Maham...

after seeing the scene n reading ur scene.. wowwww cud totally imagine it... thnks for suchh a wonderful Prida treat.. ws imagining CS n GK in dat scene..totallyyyyy fantastic scene it wud be Tongue thqqqq sooo mch... 

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 4:20am | IP Logged
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Wat a siggieeeee... garma garam coffeee ke sath super hawt PRIDA...wat a way to begin a morning.. sara din acha jayega for sure..thnks for the lovely siggie Smile

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