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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 8:05am | IP Logged
nice.. i was so expecting Prithvi to come and hug her from behind....

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 10:24am | IP Logged
great start Khwahish!!! Very well written.....do give us the next part...soon

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Honey u didnt see my vm??
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Rads,
 
 
Interesting choice of song for PriDa....like I mentioned earlier...great 1st attempt. Some nice PriDa scenes.....Do continue....
 
 
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Khwaish,
 
 
arrey wah....OS....very nice. Damini & her connection to rain is Well described. Agree with others though...its too short.
And I hope she will make Pri suffer a bitTongue....whatever happened I am sure it's his faultWink.
 
Now that you know everyone likes it....please update fast.
 
 
 
@Honey Bunny - Good to see you here after ages.Big smile

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
@Rads: Have been high on this song for a few days.. LOL Anyway...Nice attempt. To be honest for me the song speaks about something else.. The scenes you used capture the next phase leading from this particular set of emotions. The song for me speaks of a man who is alone, who has nothing but his demons and even when he's surrounded by people he still doesnt really feel a part of it all and he wants someone special to come and take him away from all the misery. In short he needs that person to come and heal him and that is what you showed in most of the scenes you showed Damini healing Prithvi which i believe is the next step from the set of emotions the lyrics are talking about.. It was nice for a first attempt really.. Some scenes really seemed to fit well but when put against the backdrop of the song it didnt really go.. That's my opinion purely since you wanted my feedback and i could be totally wrong.. maybe i just failed to see what you were trying to show.. that can happen too.. Just trying to be honest here.. I hope you dont mind.. Really really sorry if you do. Ouch 

@Khwahish: Err where were you hiding?? Really?? I mean howww can u bug everyone here when you can write too??? That is SO totally unfair! I loved this! Loved the beginning.... the buddhu part was so cute! Loved that scene in which she sees him for the first time.. Hayeeee.. can totally imagine it... Man Prithvi Saxena is HOT.. LOL And yeah i agree with Khush.. I bet its his fault only :P

Can understand Damini's love for the rain.. I know a girl at University who's totally like that.. Heck she didnt even want to complete her admission test just because she realized that it was raining outside.. LOL

Update soon!

@Khush: I thought someone was supposed to go to SLEEP! *glares* Angry


Edited by ...Maham... - 27 March 2011 at 1:59pm

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sparklin_star

hey pplHug
i m on an experimenting spree these days
have made my 1st vm ever.........................hope u all like it Wink


hey der'
so finally u take a dip into da VM creative pool yaY yaY !!

so da song is wow n ofcourse we all love da set of PriDa scenes used.
since its ur first attempt at making a vm...  remember da success of a vm is in da sync between da audio track n da vdo track. To many many more creations from you'

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by khwaish.e.arsh

The Saga of a Rainy Night

This sense of connection grew even stronger when she met him ' her husband Prithvi on a rainy night. She fell head over heels for him the moment she saw him that night in the middle of the empty road getting drenched in rain , arms outstretched, face to the sky , his white shirt clinging to his muscular body highlighting his broad chest and well toned abs,. It seemed like he was lost in his own world, just like she was lost in him.
KhwahishSmile
 


i have alwaz liked da idea of an OS more den long saga stories.
a small scene dat impacts on our minds in da best way possible.

da way u started n i have quoted da text i LOVED. such a beautiful way to blend wot actually happened in da show n da way u have incorporated it in ur OS.

its so believable. n an OS dat can make u imagine jus DAT is in mah mind a successful creative scene. If dis is ur first write up... i abso-freakin-lutely loved it.

u have written an OS. but u have ended it wid a cliff hanger, so i am assumig u r gonna add here in further chapters. keep up da blend of real + fiction + mystery in ur writing.

skorpion.

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