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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
 
@  Ishaaaan    :    Soooo  Good to see you Backk   !!    
 
And you come up with such an  AWESOME  Siggy  !!    Clap    Beautiful   !!
 
Isn't that one of the Most  PICTURE PERFECT  Scenes of our PRIDA  ??  and you have Described it Soooo Well   !! ............. 
 
As for Turning the Clock Backk and going back to Square One .............  Aaaahhhh ......IF ONLYY........    Sigghhhh...........
 
Thanks for this Lovely Creation  !!
 
 
@  Sanaa  :     A Stacked  Avi ............ You are Progressing real Fast  Girl    !!  
 
 It is Lovely......... Great Going   !!      Clap
 
 
@  Sunn  :     Two  Super Siggies  !!     ClapClap 
 
Beautiful Scenes indeed................. and as everyone has already said,  you have penned some Lovely Lines to go with them............... especially the last one   !!      Star    
 
as for  PRIDA driving you Crazzyyy...........well are all of us not in the same Boat ??      Big smileBig smile 
well it is all for our Good............ since they are Inspiring you to come up with these Beauties  !! Smile
 
 
 
 
Amiya 


Edited by petunia121 - 08 February 2011 at 12:20pm

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
 Hello   Friends  !!
 
 
 
These days of PRIDA starvation are so tough......... and i am sure that i am not the only one for whom coming here to this Wonderful Thread  is one of the few ways to get a Smile on our face  !!   Seeing all the Wonderful Creations of all you Awesome people is a real source of Joy  !!    SmileSmile
 
Was Terribly Missing PRIDA , and since all our Talented Creative Writers seem to have taken a Break  ( Undoutedly a Very Well Deserved one )  Smile..........  so i decided to pen down something ............  and although i  think It has turned out Horribly   Ouch   and  Frankly i should not be subjecting you to  Torture like this ......... but since it is PRIDA .......... I thought that  you will bear with even this Atrocity ........... and hence i have decided to go ahead and Inflict this upon you  !!
 
 
So here goes   :   
 
 
 
       "  Aaaap  or  Tuumm ".............   PRIDA Scene TWEAKED !! 
 
 

We all love rewinding to the scenes of our Beloved PRIDA and the Post Proposal scene when both have agreed to the Marriage on being asked by Ela Gujral is of course one of their BESTEST Scenes !!   and our Perennial favourites  !! 

Aaaahhhh.......  our Damzie looking Absolutely Stunning and Regal in that lovely Red and  Pri at his Dashing Best in  Blue .......... it is one of those Most Beautiful Visuals and Golden Memories that are Etched Forever on our minds !!     HeartHeart
 

Folks ,  I know I am Absolutely Crazzyyyy to still Dream about their scenes  ( I know I am Pathetic  !! )   Embarrassed   but my only Consolation is that quite a few of you would be with me in the same Boat and understand this strange affliction   EmbarrassedBig smile

So let us talk about that Beautiful scene without much ado :

Those Subtle Expressions of Love and Joy on their faces  !!   Awwww....... coupled with a sense of Disbelief that their Secret Yearning of belonging to each other is shortly going to be fulfilled ....... all their  ( or rather more of us Besotted Viewers' )  Big smile  earlier Totally Unbelievable Dreams of they being MEANT  FOR each OTHER shall soon be turning True and that too in such an Unexpectedly Smooth manner..............  And Both of them Looking Absolutely Divine........... Ohhhhh........  Did they not give us some of our Happiest and Most Joyous moments  !!      HeartDay Dreaming

Well that is how Destiny has charted their paths and Ela Gujral , that  " Enemy " of the Saxena Brothers, herself,  has not only paved the way but actually Pushed both of them towards the  MARRIAGE ALTAR  ( or in this case the Marriage Havan Kund to be precise )  !!      Big smileBig smile 
 

Both have agreed to the Marriage, and on being asked by Ela both of them have  confessed in their Typical HESITANT and UNDERSTATED manner that they " LIKE" each other.....  LOL LOL    

and now Ela has left them alone in the room   !!   WinkBig smile
 

As can be expected from our two " DHAKKANS " (though highly Lovable of course!! )  Big smile Big smile     Both of them are SHY !!  Tongue tied and feeling Awkward !!about what to say to each other  !!   Tongue ..............of course it goes without saying that Hesitation and Awkwardness has never been as HAWTT, as SIZZLING and  Combustible !!  Big smile  and has never looked as BEWITCHINGLY BEAUTIFUL  Heart Day Dreaming

 
Having just taken this most Crucial and Momentous decision of their life ........ of getting Married to each other......... these two otherwise Supremely CONFIDENT and ARROGANT PEOPLE are at a loss of words and do not know what to say  !!    ....... see this is what even Thinking of Marriage does to the Best of them !!      TongueLOL 
 
And then as usual........  it is our Queenie who takes the Lead in ending that Sweetly Awkward Silence......... by saying that " Abse Tum Mujhe  Aaap ki Bajaye Tum keh Sakte Ho.......  "   Smile    which brings one of those Ohhhh So rare and absolutely Charming Smile on our Pri's face , which never fails to set our Hearts Palpitating   !!    EmbarrassedBig smile 
 
But then our Damzie......... never missing a chance to Tease him a bit...... asks him " To kyaa Ek Husband Apni Wife ko Aaap keh ke Nahin Bulaa Sakta ? "  Big smile   
and then he, who has never missed a chance to give back an Equally Good retort,  replies  " Of course Keh Sakta Hai , par Iskaa Ultaa bhi Ho Sakta Hai , aksar Maine Aisa Dekhaa Hai , Sunaa Bhi Hai......... "   Big smile   (Btw , please excuse me if the Dialogues are not exactly Correct as i have not seen this scene for quite sometime )     Smile   
 
and then our Damzie gets slightly Exasperated and  says " Ab Tum Phir se woh Ladka- Ladki wali Baat mat Shuru Karo "  and tries to Walk off........ but then suddenly he puts out his hand and Grabs hold of her wrist, not letting her go....... and the Look in his eyes !!  Ufffff.......  Totally Heart Melting stuff   !!     HeartDay Dreaming 
 

And although we Absolutely Loooove this scene and their Completely Adorable " Aap or Tum " exchange in this scene ............... but it is here that Inspired by our JIIP  Mantra,  my Very Meagre Imagination kicked in and I just had this idea of Slightly Tweaking this scene a bit , just a little bit   !!    EmbarrassedSmile      So here goes :

 
 
Prithvi could not believe that the Gods had been so KIND to him  !!  This was nothing short of a MIRACLE....... Damini Gujral had not only Agreed to marry him , but had said that she LIKED him........ The Woman who had Bewitched his Heart from almost the first moment he saw her......This MOST BEAUTIFUL Woman in the whole world........His Arrogant , Stubborn , Short tempered BOSS ........ but whom he LOVED soooo Completly Loved with all his Heart and Soul ........ was soon going to be his WIFE  !! ...... He just had to be the Most Fortunate Man in the whole Wide World , definitely the Luckiest Man alive !! 
 
And now She was walking away from him ........ but he could not just let her go away ....... and before he even knew what he was doing , his Hand had Instinctively gone out and Grabbed her Wrist , stoppping her !! preventing her !! not wanting her to Go away  !!   
 
Damini turned around Slowly and looked at him .......... at his Hand holding her Wrist.......... Strange Tingling Sensations were travelling up from her wrist and spreading ........ his Touch had always had this Unsettling Efffect on her right from th beginning  !! which she had initially tried to Ignore and then Suppress  !!
 
And the way He was LOOKING at her.......... as if his iNTENSE Gaze would just Completly Melt her insides like Wax.........  HIS EYES had always had this Strange Power to melt her with his Look .......... His Eyes so Piercing that they could Look right through to her Soul............ and now he was Gazing at her with those Soulful Eyes of his , Eyes that were Twinkling with Joy , full of a Strange Light.......the Light of Happiness and something else too ..........   as she looked at him, she found herself being Irrresistibly drawn towards him ....... she could not Look away as if HYPNOTISED  !!
 
She was Looking at him with those Deep , Doe like Beautiful Eyes of her........ and He did not know from where he got the Courage ........... it was as if he was under a SPELL , he was in a DAZE.......... but he was slowly Drawing her towards himself ,  Pulling her Closer ......... and suddenly he heard himself say " Aaapko Kya Acchhhaa Lagtaa Hai........ ??    Aaaap ya  Tum ??  "
 
Damini did not know what was happening , it was as if there were only the two of them in the whole world ....... as if they were under some kind of a Magical Spell .......... in a Strange and Enchanted World of their own !!  and he was slowly Pulling her Close ........ her Heart beat had suddenly started Soaring and she was barely Breathing when she heard him say something in that Deliciously Molten Voice of his .......... as if from somewhere far away ........ asking her a question  !!
 
She did not know what to say .......  " Err..... Kyaa..... Tum Kya Keh Rahe Ho ?? " she Mumbled and Fumbled  !!
 
On seeing the Usual Ohh Soo Confident Damini Gujral mumbling and Fumbling ....... Being so Unsettled , So Unsure of herself........ maybe for the first time in her life .......... he could not Prevent a small Smile from stealing on his Face  !!  Suddenly Prithvi felt his Usual Confident self again  !!
 
" Main Aaap Ko Kyaa Kahoon ??    Aaap ya Tum ?? "  He decide to Prolong his Dearest Boss's Discomfort a little bit  !!    TongueBig smile
 
He was looking at her with a Twinkle in his eyes and a seriously Killer Smile was playing on his face as he continued to pull her Closer to himself ....... and he was now Dangerously Close to her......... His Closeness was playing Havoc with her Senses , but Damini was as if caught in a Snare ......... Helpless to do anything except utter " Ummm ...... Woh .....  Kyaa....... ?? "
 
Her Proximity was playing Dangerous games with his Heart too and he was also unable to think straight ......... Without realising what he was doing , he had put his hand around her Waist and pulled her close, forcing her to look straight into his eyes ........... and as he looked into her Deep as two Pools of Chrystal clear water,  Eyes , he found himself saying  " Agar Main Aaap Ko Aaap Kehtaa hoon to kyaa yeh Hamesha Thoda Employer - Employee jaisaa Nahin Lagega .......  ??  "
 
and then with their two Hearts overflowing with the Deep Unsaid Love that they shared .........as his hand moved to touch her Beautiful Silken hair and as he gently Caressed the side of her Face , he mutterred " or Agar main Aaapko Tum Kehtaa hoon to Aaisa lagega Jaise Tum meri Damini ho......... " 
 
 
 
So that is it  !!
 
 
 
Pheww........   Ohhhh BOY !!  this is TOUGH  !!   Wacko  
 
Hats off to all you folks who write all these Beautiful FFs and OSs !!  
 
This was my Itsy - Bitsy  attempt and i know it is really Lame and SUCKS majorly !!  and my only defence is that it was my Very First ( and probably Last ) attempt........... 
 
Frankly never thought i would do this , BUT  Uffff PRIDA .........  " Maine Tere Pyaar Mein Kyaa Kyaa na Kiyaaaa...........  ??  "   SmileSmile
 
 
 
Love
 
Amiya
 


Edited by petunia121 - 08 February 2011 at 11:49am

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
@Amiya: Just finished reading... Very nice job... Pri pulling Damini closer and closer and closer... Cant help but remember SRK saying that dialogue in filmfare on sunday.. Aur paas aur paas aur paas.. LOL Crazy right? I totally agree...
 
No idea where that bit of randomness came from.. Anyhow... Liked your detailing of their emotions... Sweet end.. Tum meri Damini hoo... Day Dreaming Errr WHY did you not pen down her response?
 
Can totally imagine a blush creeping up on her cheeks on that sentence.. His breath across her lips... PriDa lost in each other.. and... and.. andddddddd..... Er they kiss? either that or someone conveniently interrupts them...
 
Hayeee i love it when PriDa seduce each other.. LOL
 
And err sorry about the break.. I did just write an OS too so lets not complain too much... Just a bit stuck in the FF...
 
Keep writing...
 
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Mahamm   !!
 
 
You actually managed to go through that .............  Thanks a ton Girll  !!    Smile
 
And  you thought of SRK while reading .......... OMG ..... what else does one need ??  Big smile
 
As for " Aur  Paas ....... Aur Paas .... "  that is definitely a Shah Rukh patent ........ and it is not random at all   !!    Smile
 
As for not pennning down Damzie's response ........ well it is simply because , i just can not write like that       Big smile   ........ Look at the way you have put it  down sooo Beautifully   !!  ......... Those two lines only are sooo Lovely  !!
 
Now if it is not asking for too much , why don't you give us a Small , Tiny , really Short piece only, about something on those lines ........... For you it shall be just a " Baein  Haath ka Khel "  you know.......  Big smile
 
 Please , Please , Plzz...........
 
  
Thanks once again for your encouraging comments   !!    Smile
 
 
 
Love
 
Amiya      

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Amiyaaaaa.....

beautiful imagination n u hav penned it down fantasicallyyyy ..omg..how i wish we cud get this onscreen..wat to sayyyy.. am stil having dat silly grin on my face wen writing dis yaar... thnks for sharing ur lovely imagination with us...plsssss do share more wenever u can ...  Big smile

@Maham... i also wud like to read frm u abt Damzie's reaction..plsssssTongue


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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
@Sun: wonderful Siggies!..the first one looks slightly compressed but lovely anyway! Star


@Amiyaa...I can remember every minute of that entire scene..it just plays in your mind like your watching the video..don't think any of us PriDaholics can forget that even if we want to :P..

Totally loved your version of the scene!..a little naughty and very PriDa ;))

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:06am | IP Logged

@ Sunnn- Awesome siggie's StarStar.....!!! Beautiful lines....!!!

Great work as alwayzz Big smile....!!!
 
 
 
 

@ Amiya- simply Fantastic job Thumbs UpClap....!!! And scene u selected.....one of d most MAGICAL scene of Prida.....!!!

I was imagining d whole scene while reading......U described dere inner feelings so wellStar.....!!! Loved d ending part too.....!!! Keep writing....!!!

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by petunia121

Mahamm   !!
 
 
You actually managed to go through that .............  Thanks a ton Girll  !!    Smile
 
And  you thought of SRK while reading .......... OMG ..... what else does one need ??  Big smile
 
As for " Aur  Paas ....... Aur Paas .... "  that is definitely a Shah Rukh patent ........ and it is not random at all   !!    Smile
 
As for not pennning down Damzie's response ........ well it is simply because , i just can not write like that       Big smile   ........ Look at the way you have put it  down sooo Beautifully   !!  ......... Those two lines only are sooo Lovely  !!
 
Now if it is not asking for too much , why don't you give us a Small , Tiny , really Short piece only, about something on those lines ........... For you it shall be just a " Baein  Haath ka Khel "  you know.......  Big smile
 
 Please , Please , Plzz...........
 
  
Thanks once again for your encouraging comments   !!    Smile
 
 
 
Love
 
Amiya      


Once again stop making it sound like you wrote on inder and Ria romancing rather then PriDa...  I couldnt help but think of SRK.. that aur paas was too apt for this scene.. LOL

Okay i did not write that so that you could start comparing Amiyaa... every writer has his/her own style.. No point in comparing..

Errr ummmmm @ writing the next scene.. I er dunno... Lets er see..

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