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Guilty Conscience (SR FF ~Part 23: Page 86) (Page 80)

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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mamathasridhar

very nice update :)

Thank you!!

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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nine2

Wow..this was a great part..i really appreciate your effort in continuing this ff..and  am so glad that u didn't quit it. I really like these cute SR sequences...the playful proposal, SR in Circus and Sid opening up to ridz, and rids  to confiding her problem with sid..It was so nice to see both SR comforting each other..I really hope Riddhima forgives sid soon...and sid tells her how he feels for her..and now that he is free from Sanaya's burden..he can openly admit his feeling..oh and i really hope that his conscious friend speeds up realization. Great update and please continue soon! :)

Thanks! And nothing to appreciate! I lvoe writing! I'm glad u guys havent given up on me! 
And there will be more of SR sequences! 
And just thanks for ur detailed comment! You always tell me everything u like and it helps!! 
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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -veena.shona-

wowww such a romantic update Embarrassed

Sid falling for Ridzy Day Dreaming

n Ridzy blushing at his every little compliment Blushing

d proposal!!! i cld actually imagine tht!! Day Dreaming

do finallyyy Sid is done wid Sanaya!! Wink

n d last scene!! d bst part is tht dey r bth trusting each oder Big smile

Thanks Veena! 
Yeah he finally is falling!
Glad u liked the proposal! and yeah Sid let go of her!
Glad u liked all!!
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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 5:20am | IP Logged

Originally posted by neet06

You say romance isn't your forte but your writing proves otherwise dear Big smile

Sid falling for Riddhima... Haiyeee,,,,, I guess its true that when two people are meant to be the whole cosmos conspires to bring them together... Embarrassed

The proposal scene was sooo romantic.. Especially those lines... They were so unique, so heartfelt and so wonderful... I am saving those lines just coz I love them sooo much..

Poor Sid, my heart broke with his when he recounted about the incident with his mom.. 
I liked how Riddhima tried to cheer him up and simply loved the shooting scene.. Darn Adi man.. kya timing hai... I so wanna know what Sid intended to ask... 

Sanaya.. Well... I guess its understandable how she reacted given that this is something no one would except to come across in their wildest dreams.. As insensitive as it sounds, at least now Sid can romance and woo Riddhima without the guilt of betraying Sanaya weighing heavuly on his conscience.

I missed Sid-Aryan interaction but the update on the whole was so wonderful, I don't really mind it.. 

Oh and I most definitely loved how Sid almost kissed Riddhima and Riddhima opening up to him and saying that Aryan never was, is or will be a mistake and she'd go through anything or everything for him... 

Great going and pls update soon...

Cheers

Neet

Neet!! What can I say?!
Ur awesome! Honestly I think ur analysis of the update is better than the update itself! 
I was kind of unsure of line myself but after reading your comment, I guess I did it right!
And wht sid wanted to ask remains a secret Wink
LOL yeah yeah... I know everyone is rejoicing that Sanaya is out of the picture!
And Sid Aryan is coming in full form in the next update!
And Neet... THANK YOU!

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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mala1108

Finally an update!!!
Awesome update... Sid falling for Riddhima... the proposal was superb...
continue soon

Thanks Mala!! Glad u liked it!!
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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sr-medha

Zohal...another awesome update...!!

cant give a long comment coz of exams.. :(
 
P.S.> you forgot to PM me... :/

Thank you!!
And no worries as long as u like it I'm glad
And so sorry abt not PMing!
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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by loveSR

finally u updated...nice update...want more SR scenes...


continue soon...

Thanks!! And will try to write up better SR scenes!!
And will do!
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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Liashna

Update soon... I remember, i had reserved * Embarrassed*

Its alright!! I'm glad u liked it!!

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