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Guilty Conscience (SR FF ~Part 23: Page 86) (Page 48)

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Hey ZohalHug
OMG...ShockedI seriously don't have words to say...I mean from the day I got to know that Aryan is Sid's son I kept thinking how? when? why? but the way you unfolded the story...you seriously deserve a standing ovationClapClapClap
I m seriously feeling bad for Riddhima after all that happened...I know even Sid wasn't totally at fault but whatever happened didn't affected Sid's life till now...on the other hand it ruined Riddhima's life completely...
Riddhima lost her family, her fiance...I mean a girl from high school getting pregnent in such an age ...I just felt really bad for her.
PLZ PLZ PLZ continue soon this time...I m dieing to know that what would Sid do now...I think he should tell Riddhima but I don't think that she would forgive him that easily...I know he wasn't at fault but it is not easy for any girl to forgive a man in such condition...
PLZ continue super soon...PLZ really soon this time...PLZ PLZ PLZ



Edited by sonia1000 - 08 July 2011 at 7:44am

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
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Ooohhh.. I mean just Ooohhh.. This is what I would call "It's complicated" - its definitely complicated. In a way its Sid's fault but it isn't actually Sid's fault if you know what I mean. Gosh! What is he going to do now? Confused
 
I really liked the scene where Sid is almost about to leave the whole mess and thinks about going back and living peacefully with Sanaya and Aryan's words stop him but he still does not remove his luggage from the car thinking he might leave after all. It was such a relatable scene. I mean haven't we all done that - want do one thing but end up doing something else while still hoping we will get to do what we initially planned to do?.. I know I have.
 
The revelation of their pasts was fabulous, the way Sid went back to college to find out, meeting the conductor, getting to know the story part by part and even as Kunal was telling him the story, his realization that he was the one and how conscience finally showed him all that had happened and how he wished young Sid wouldn't walk into the room. It was all so very well written..
 
Now pls pls pls pls pls continue super soon. Can't wait to see what happens next Smile


Edited by neet06 - 08 July 2011 at 5:39am

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
nice update :)
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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 12:49pm | IP Logged

ZohalllHug


so Aryan is siddhima's sonParty


i luvd d way u brought out d whole story of d nightClap


throughout d update, i was feeling so sad for RiddhimaCry


i hope she also gets to know d truth frm Sid of courseSmile


cont super soon

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
wow fantastic update continue soonnn
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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Felt bad for Riddhima throughout the update..Awesome update
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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
wow..grt update..this is prob one of those times where i feel bad for rids...n sid...oh what has he gotten himself into...bt i hope he soon goes to rids and tells her about all of this and she would forgive him...since both of them had ecstasy by mistake and when he found out the truth...he came and told her about it...plz continue soon!!! :)
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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Ohhh god...i really really dunno what to say...what ridhima did that she got this punishmant...i know its nt sid's fault nither ridhima's...both of them had ecstasy by mistake...bt it changed ridhima's world only nt sid's...she alone sufferd a lott & did nt get any 1 beside her...not fiance,nt faimily...though as a human being really felt bad for her...bt at the same time happy to knw she was strong enough to fight this world...after knowing the truth i hope sid ll tell ridhima what happend in that night & settle everything...thank you sooo much zohalll for this awesome update...

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