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Guilty Conscience (SR FF ~Part 23: Page 86) (Page 23)

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 2:43am | IP Logged
awesome update






Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 3:18am | IP Logged
It is Awesome Zohal.......Riddhima has a son named Aryan....Nice
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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 8:32am | IP Logged
gosh Zohal!!
ur updates just kill me yaarROFLROFLROFLROFL
i never read such a fun FF before ur tooo good!
Sid n his Con are really hilarious...and this boy cant even lie...the giraffe part was mindblastingROFLROFLROFLROFL
u know the moment Aryan said dont touch my hair i was like hailaaaaShocked..Sid ka betaLOL
now i cant wait for SR to meet
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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Zohol!!
Awsum update....zeeraf scene was very funny....lvd sid-con convo....omg aryan is so chweet n look like his father...now cnt wait 4 sidhima meeting....plz update soon....
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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 5:44am | IP Logged
If am not mistaken, Aryan is Sid's son... N Ridz was her GF!!!! Cool....Wink
Cute scene between father n son!! Both wid sid-Father... N Aryan-Sid...

I am so eager to visualise Ridz being Angry at Sid!!LOL

Zohal!!! Update soon yaar!!!

Thanks 4 d pm dear!!! God Bless!!

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 3:53pm | IP Logged
aww ...first of all id like to say im soooooo sorry for replyin gthis late bt had been really busy...n will be for next few months..esp during weekdays..so sorry in advance for my future late reply

this was great..so ankita's the new grl..lol..how many grls did he mess with..he seems to be in freaking double digits...i hope he doesnt have to fix the prob for all of hte girls...ohh..the kids hit him with a ball..aww i love aryan... hes sooo sweet..like his dad o course :)....oh n then sid n adolf hitler...lol...i hope that prob gets solved soon n then SR..ya im very very very impatient...n this is prob the only time i feel bad for rids..she has to face the hatred of her family..cant go to her sis's wedding ...n she prob raised aryan by herself...must be a tough job being a doc...boy she isnt gonna forgive sid so easily....cant wait till they meet:)...thanks for the pm n plz continue soon Smile
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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged
I comment and you updated.............and I am soooooooo sorry I did not get down to reading your FF till now every time I used to say to myself I want some real peaceful time to read this I do not want to rapid read

and today I did .............super awesome ............

Sid: hey u can say bad words?

Con: I am a reflection of ur deeds. If u can say bad words. I can too. Wht ever u do I do.
 
actually you have portrayed it well how we are a mirror of our conscience and vice versa

But the best is your sarcastic words and pinching comments of the conscience

Sid: Dimple Sisodiya.... I think I know her.

Con: I am nt surprised.

Con: ussey pata nahin keh yeh tera dost hai warna iski halat terey Land Cruiser ki tarha hoti.



Con: so much for ur irresistable charm.

And Sid's dialouges are the best full of humor arrogance charm also you have written them wonderfully

Sid: betey ki shaadi ki umar hogayi aur apney abhi tak sapney dekhna nahin choda?

Sid: chilla kyun rahi ho? tumharey ghum mein main behra nahin hua tha.


Sid: style statement? ( So apt for Sid attitude its more like How can anyone have such style and attitude other than me ..........I am the ULTIMATE NO ONE CAN BEAT ME WHO IS THIS ONE HERE?)LOL

Sid: please take a seat. Aap ka hi ghar hai.
LOL Kya attitude hai bossLOL


Sid: tujhe kaisey pata? woh kya tujhe apni personal diary chod keh gaya tha?



and the conscience dialogues compliment Sid's so well

Sid: Is tht kid on drugs??! How can he hit like tht?!

Con: I dnt know abt him bt u definitely need drugs.


Best scene I was trying to imagine this scene ..........super hilarious

(And they all start shooting at soccer balls at Sid. Sid ducks a few bt thn a fat kid runs with great speed and hits the ball exactly at Sid face. Sid collapses on the floor. The kid becomes an instant hero to the team.)



and now my complaint about your OS actually two

Riddhima ka itna short scene kyu.............

aur

Update sooooonnnnnerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrLOL

but super awesome God I am loving this ................

Take a bow mate YOU ARE A SUPER AWESOME WRITER   Clap







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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
Zohal plz update soonEmbarrassed

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