I comment and you updated.............and I am soooooooo sorry I did not get down to reading your FF till now every time I used to say to myself I want some real peaceful time to read this I do not want to rapid read
and today I did .............super awesome ............
Sid: hey u can say bad words?
Con: I am a reflection of ur deeds. If u can say bad words. I can too. Wht ever u do I do.
actually you have portrayed it well how we are a mirror of our conscience and vice versa
But the best is your sarcastic words and pinching comments of the conscience
Sid: Dimple Sisodiya.... I think I know her.
Con: I am nt surprised.
Con: ussey pata nahin keh yeh tera dost hai warna iski halat terey Land Cruiser ki tarha hoti.
Con: so much for ur irresistable charm.
And Sid's dialouges are the best full of humor arrogance charm also you have written them wonderfully
Sid: betey ki shaadi ki umar hogayi aur apney abhi tak sapney dekhna nahin choda?
Sid: chilla kyun rahi ho? tumharey ghum mein main behra nahin hua tha.
Sid: style statement? ( So apt for Sid attitude its more like How can anyone have such style and attitude other than me ..........I am the ULTIMATE NO ONE CAN BEAT ME WHO IS THIS ONE HERE?)😆
Sid: please take a seat. Aap ka hi ghar hai. 😆 Kya attitude hai boss😆
Sid: tujhe kaisey pata? woh kya tujhe apni personal diary chod keh gaya tha?
and the conscience dialogues compliment Sid's so well
Sid: Is tht kid on drugs??! How can he hit like tht?!
Con: I dnt know abt him bt u definitely need drugs.
Best scene I was trying to imagine this scene ..........super hilarious
(And they all start shooting at soccer balls at Sid. Sid ducks a
few bt thn a fat kid runs with great speed and hits the ball exactly at
Sid face. Sid collapses on the floor. The kid becomes an instant hero to
the team.)
and now my complaint about your OS actually two
Riddhima ka itna short scene kyu.............
aur
Update sooooonnnnnerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr😆
but super awesome God I am loving this ................
Take a bow mate YOU ARE A SUPER AWESOME WRITER 👏
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