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FF - Rudra-Gauri - Bhoolna - Introduction

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I am for the first time trying a fan fiction on Rudra and Gauri...
Couple of days.. I have been thinking about fan fiction related with Rudra and Gauri. It's based on emotion and revenge. Its journey of a daughter who's sabki laadhi, but one event changes her entire life. It's about a guy who believes.. everything around him.. belongs to him. Its about two undesirable people brought together.. over huge misunderstanding created by destiny.. itself.

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Characters of Maa Baap Ko Tum Mat Bhoolna

Rudra (Iqbal Khan).. is a person who cares only about himself. His happiness revolves around him and whatever he claims.. can only belong to him. Anyone tears don't melt him. It's only about his male ego that can across any limits without realizing the destruction he caused in other people lives.

His relationship with his family is sour... maybe because of his past. Rudra hates talking about his past with anyone.

Gauri Sharma (Binny Sharma).. is a daughter who knows the value of family. She watched her mother struggle against life.. only for her. She was nine and half when her father passed away. She's sabki laadhi..

Radhika Sharma (Rubina Dilaik).. is a mother before a wife. Her husband (Dev Purohit) meant entire world to her (but for her daughter's future she kept her past hidden from Gauri). After his sudden death left her shattered.. she left her past and moved to another city with her daughter and mother to her Nani's place in Haridwar. Biggest devotee of Lord Krishna.

Devki Sharma.. is daughter of Kalavati.. is mother of Radhika.. is Nani of Gauri.

Kalavati Sharma.. is mother of Devki.. is Nani of Radhika.. and great Nani of Gauri.. is biggest classical singer.. and money-minded person.

Other Characters

Rajrani (Aruna Irani)... is mother of Rudra.

Dev Purohit (Avinash Sachdev).. is Radhika's husband and Gauri's father. Is the youngest member of Purohit family and people say he died in accident, but his wife believe he's murder.

Samrat Shanker.. Guy who Gauri is getting married to..

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Introduction..

"Hi.. main hoon sabki laadhi.. Gauri Sharma. My life revolves around my mother.. Nani.. and Big Nani too.. but today I am unhappy. Why? Because I am getting engaged to.. some person I don't know. I mean Maa wouldn't choose random guy for me.. she knows my taste.. phir bhi leaving behind my mother is most painful process in my life." she looked at herself in the mirror.

"Gauri.. I can't believe that you are getting engaged" her mother.. comes into her room.. excitedly "By the way, Guruji has come to fix the wedding date".

She looked beautiful dressed in dark orange lenhga.. looking around for the best accessories to go with the outfit "How much will you adorn yourself, Samrat's getting impatient." her mother complained.

Gauri: Tell him to wait, this bride will take sometime..

(Switch to hall area)

People running down the stairs.. laughing as well singing "Kabse aaye hain tere dulhe raja
Ab der na kar jaldi aaja" throwing flower in welcoming the groom.

Girls are covering him "Tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene
Dil ke badle mein dil ka nazraana dene" turns around "Tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene
Dil ke badle mein dil ka nazraana dene" twirling around in circle "Meri har dhadkan kya bole hai
Sun sun sun" awaits for his bride to come down.

Girls come towards him in excitement "Saajanji ghar aaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye
Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye"

Gauri comes down the stairs with her friends "Ay dil chalega ab na koi bahaana" Samrat comes toward Gauri.. give her his hand.. "Gori ko hoga ab saajan ke ghar jaana" but she runs pass him "Maathe ki bindiya kya bole hai
Sun sun sun" she playfully slaps him on his cheek.

Girls dancing with Samrat "Saajanji ghar aaye
Saajanji ghar aaye
Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye"

Gauri complaining to her friends "Deewane ki chaal mein
Phas gayi main is jaal mein Ay sakhiyon kaise bolo bolo " he confronts her "Mujhpe to aye dilruba
Teri sakhiyaan bhi fida
Ye bolengi kya poochho
Poochho" she teases him "Ja re ja jhoothe
Tareefein kyon hai loote
Hay ja re ja jhoothe
Tareefein kyon hai loote" he tease her back "Tera mastana kya bole hai
Sun sun sun"

Their friends come running towards them "Saajanji ghar aaye
Saajanji ghar aaye
Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye"

Samrat tries copying some of her moves and she pushed him away "Na samjhe nadaan hai
Ye mera ehsaan hai
Chaahe jo isko keh do
keh do" he replies her back "Chhede muhko jaan ke
Badle mein ehsaan ke
De diya dil isko keh do
keh do" suddenly Gauri becomes sad "Tu ye na jaane dil toote bhi deewane
Tu ye na jaane dil toote bhi deewane" par Samrat cheers her up "Tera deewana kya bole hai
Sun sun sun"
Their friends circle them "Saajanji ghar aaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye
Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye" while Gauri dance with Samrat.

Radhika gets emotional seeing her daughter smile "Mehndi laake gehne paake
Gehne paake hay roke tu sabko rulaake
Savere tu jaayegi tu bada yaad aayegi
Tu bada yaad aayegi yaad aayegi" Radhika kiss Gauri on her forehead "Mehndi laake gehne paake
gehne paake hay
Gehne paake hay roke tu sabko rulaake
Savere tu jaayegi tu bada yaad aayegi
Tu bada yaad aayegi yaad aayegi"

Samrat ignores Gauri and dances with her mother "Tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene
Tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene
Dil ke badle mein dil ka nazraana dene
Meri har dhadkan kya bole hai
Sun sun sun"

Samrat twirls Gauri around while their friends circle them "Saajanji ghar aaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye
Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye" Gauri frees herself from Samrat's grip and runs away.. Samrat runs after her.. Gauri trying her best to keep herself away from Samrat.. she runs outside the party hall and collide into someone..

Gauri huffing and puffing "I'm sorry" she mumbles "I wasn't looking" but the person kept on starring at her beauty "where I was going. Please forgive me" she heard her name being called "Gauri" she ran away without looking at the person she collide with while he kept on looking at her disappear.

Preview of First part "I need her" Rudra told himself while recalling his encounter with Gauri.

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 9:12am | IP Logged
ClapClapClap  Very beautiful written Miketa.Please post more , your FF is very interesting!!!And loved the idea of using the song from KKHH!!!HeartHeartHeart

Btw whom should we imagine as Samrat?


Edited by OrientalDancer - 28 December 2010 at 9:12am
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 9:48am | IP Logged
very nice...plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Aww so cute story. with my actress on it Rubina.(Radhika.) pm me when update it. I love it. Heart
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Again loved it. great job.
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please update.

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