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Telepathy and Love (maan geet) #1 (Page 98)

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 7:11am | IP Logged
lovely update shruthi....sad part but sure maan brings his geet backWink

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
very well written
me too sad.....
I know how it feels writing such a painful part.....
wonderful work...I can understand...
why do I feel geet will lose the connection with maan or a memory loss..................NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHIIIII
pura dramatic style main

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Yipeeeeeee.............me waiting

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yippeeee  Dancing

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better make everything alright or else Angry

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that was awesome update as always...
really painful and hearthwrenching...hope geet is fine

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 8:37am | IP Logged
please long comments needed I need your morale support to write furthur
 
Part 24
 

The oxygen masks have been removed, they were just about to lift her, when he came in and shouted

 
No one just no one touches her, she will remain here, and you all just get out
 

Mohinder and Rano who were standing there crying were shocked Shiv came running and asked everyone to leave expect Maan

 
He tried his best to console the Handa's but was at loss of words
 

He called the Ram and informed him of the present condition; they were on the airport about to board a plane for Luck now Sameera who has come to attend the marriage was with them.

 
Within a couple of hours all were there consoling Handa's Sameera was shocked to know about Geet she was told that Geet had an accident and will soon join there was nothing to worry about,
 
she went to Geet's room and found Maan sitting beside her holding her hand, she touched his shoulder
 

He looked at her

 
She was shocked to see his condition, his eyes were like two hollows they were completely blank as if not registering their surroundings, he kept on gazing her
 
She was not able to hold his disoriented gaze and shook him
 
S: Maan, MAAAANNN
 
M: Sh'.sh' Sam you will disturb her
 
S: Maan, she is beyond disturbance
 
M: Sam don't shout, (after a long moment) Sam extend her leave and as its about a month make it leave without pay, may be for few days until she rejoins
 
S: Maan, come to your senses, you are not getting it?
 
M: sh'.. I know everything you just leave
 
Sam ran out not able to bear the pain not able to bear his nerves, she cried once out of the room
 
Shiv: he loves her very much
 
S: loves her, who?
 
Shiv: Maan loves Geet very much
 
S: it's just not possible
 
Shiv: why?
 
S: they never ever have met before
 
Shiv: what?
 
Gauri: yes Shiv, bro met Geet for the first time that day
 
Shiv: impossible, he's your bro and have never met her, she lives in your house
 
G: yes but bro himself visited us for the first time that day
 
Shiv: wait, wait, there's some confusion, they might have met before
 
Mohinder: no, Shiv Gauri is right, Geet before coming here never left HSPur and Maan never came to HSPur
 
Shiv: there is definitely something missing. Maan has friends right some very close friend he may know
 
S: yes, Arjun, he is his childhood friend and also a psychiatrist
 
Shiv: good, call him
 
Gauri: I have his number
 
She called him and gave the mobile to Shiv
 
Hello, is it Dr. Arjun
 
Yes, may I know who is speaking?
 
I am Dr. Shiv from Luck now; I want to talk to you about Maan
 
Maan, what happened to him?
 
Look it's something concerned with Geet, you know Geet?
 
Yes, I don't know her but Maan told me about her
 
Good, now listen carefully'' then he narrated the whole incidence starting from Raj till how Maan has blanked out
 
OMG, I will be there by the very next flight and don't let Maan sleep
 
Why?
 
If he sleeps he won't wake up, it was Geet who used to wake him up every morning
 
How?
 
I'll explain every thing once I am there
 
Bye, come soon
 
Bye

 

Every one was more confused now how can Geet wake Maan every morning when she was here at Luck now and Maan at Delhi

 

Shiv was by Maan's side not letting him doze off he was very worried Maan never left her hand

 
Arjun came by at the early morning hours along with Anvesha and Dadi
 
He went to the room and
 
A: hey Maan how are you?
 
Maan just looked at him blankly; it killed his heart to see his
friend in such condition
 
A: Maan, how are you?
 
M: hey, Arjun come here (he shouted like a 5 yr old) you wanted to meet Geet, look she is Geet, just sleeping DW when she will wake I'll formally introduce you to her
 
A: Maan let her sleep, why don't you come out? I have some thing to discuss
 
M: no, I can't look how tightly she is holding my hand
 
A: Maan she is not holding you, you are holding her
 
M: so what? The point is that her hand is in mine and I will not leave till she wakes up
 
Arjun rubs his forehead and goes out thinking what to do.
 
By the time every one out was eagerly waiting to listen how these two know each other

 

Then slowly Arjun narrated various incidences hoping that out of them he may find some solution

 
A: you are her mother right
 
Yes
 
A: you stared waking Geet at 5 just after her first Birth day
 
Yes, but how do you know?
 
A: that's when he knew for the first time that there was some girl somewhere, Maan and Geet have a strange connection, like if you are talking to one the other hears it, means you use to talk to her in HSPur and Maan heard it in Delhi, it was always there, first we thought it was his illusion but gradually we realized no really somewhere this Geet existed and she too went through what He goes through, remember Dadi Dev, that girl was Geet. And he told them everything he knew even about Raj and, how afraid Maan was about her security?
 
Suddenly it stuck him Arjun went to the room
 
A: Maan, Maan why are you blank? Maan
 
M: what?
 
A: think about something positive
 
M: how can I? When her mind is blank
 
A: no Maan you have to think, try Maan try
 
M: no, I don't want to
 
A: you have to Maan that is the only way out
 
M: you are stressing me
 
A: think Maan can't you just see all this she kept herself from
going just because she knew that you will become insane that's why she gathered herself till the marriage, and you are behaving like a coward, you love her?
 
M: yes
 
A: then think, Maan this will help her, Maan, she's not dead she's just in COMA
 and you guys tuoght she died
 
please give me strength by commenting, I need your support and love
 
 
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Edited by smj1977 - 03 February 2011 at 7:47am

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