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Telepathy and Love (maan geet) #1 (Page 93)

-shamima- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
Loved it the way maan commanded everything into place like raj going in jail and reopening the case and getting shiv and gauri married and prems relationship with heer up and running and awe how sent his mum home with Annie and awe bes part was the end convo between maaneet anyways great update and camt wait to read more Smile

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smj1977.shruti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 12:28am | IP Logged

want an update???????????

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maansee IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 12:31am | IP Logged

want an update???????????

thanku ji. thanku ji. .thanku ji. thanku ji.thanku ji. thanku ji. .thanku ji. thanku ji....................desp. waiting for update u know we love this ff a lot..............

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 12:46am | IP Logged

am editing and posting

heermeher IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 12:51am | IP Logged
luv u so much

You should not ask want an update its something like asking for oxygen to breath atleast for me to telepathy

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smj1977.shruti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 12:53am | IP Logged
please long comments needed I need your morale support to write furthur
Part 23
Maan sat by her side dazed with the days happenings,
he was so excited that he would finally see her,
and here she lies like a crippled, her face was a swollen piece of flesh, her arm had been dislocated, her jaw broken, even her legs were badly bruised and had deep cuts on her knees,
he cried his heart out.

No one understood his plight everyone knows that they have never met before then their was no question of such emotions that welled in him, his act was termed as sympathy.

Shiv was the only one who could read the pain in his eyes; he had no previous prejudices to hold him from recognizing the emotions this strong man had for this sweet girl.
He went forward and patted his shoulders assuring him that she will be ok

S: Maan have some coffee, you will feel better

M: thanks Shiv, (he looked earnestly in his eyes)
S: you are worried,
M: um, why she is not able to talk?
S: let me explain the situation she is in, her jaw is broken and day after tomorrow I will fix it, than say after 7 days she will be able to move it and then eat and talk and with in next 7 days it will heal completely
M: and (tears welled out of his eyes) her other injuries
S: broken bones will fix up in 15days maximum and swelling will get away in the same time, by the end of 2 weeks all physical injuries will disappear
M: physical, what do you mean (shocked) has she some internal injuries also?
S: Maan you have to be strong
M: what happened to her? Tell me Shiv, will she be ok? (He looked so helpless)
S: Maan, the injury she had on her head it's
M: it's what?
S: relax Maan,
M: how can I relax? My life here is lying lifeless and here I am still able to breath, she in so much pain and here I am having this damn coffee (throws the cup in the bin)
S: Maan, we still don't know anything, she may have to be operated in next 3 days, she has a blood clot on the right side of her brain
M: is it fatal?
S: 50% cases it is not fatal
M: damn, I don't want statistics
S: hold your anger Maan, this is a wait and watch position, all depends on how alert she remains, we can't give her painkillers or sleeping pills as they may do further damage
M: I never felt so helpless
S: you love her
M: love is a very small word for what we are for one another, she is my mind my soul, she a compulsory part of my being, you will not understand
S: what I understand is that if you break than, she will also break, so at least when you are with her pretend to be normal
M: I am telling you, you will not understand I can't pretend anything in front of her, whether I ma near her or far away from her, no one can understand


Just then Ram comes with Mohinder and Rano.
 R: Maan you may go and take rest her parents are here
M: ok (so helpless poor Maan can't even sit by her side can't even hold her)
S: come Maan, let's see the reports and arrange Dr. Bakshi's appointment for her surgery


By the time the appointment was made Maan completely broke down,

Shiv took him to his house as at present he was in no condition to face the families
Maan was crying like a baby Shiv did not know what to do, there Geet in her semi conscious state was aware of his sorrow she gathered her wits and called him
(he jerked) Geet you are coming back
I was always there but was not able to gather my thoughts all seems so disoriented
Geet just be with me you will feel nice
Talk to me Maan tell me about Anvesha's marriage
You already no every single detail
Still I want to
So Maan started narrating all the details in between he wiped his tears
Maan you don't look nice when you cry
Ok tell me hat you did to that jerk Raj I missed that part
He told her everything
Did you talk to Ram uncle about Prem and Gauri
Tell me all about that also
He told her every thing
Maan I am feeling sleepy
Geet only sleep don't loose your consciousness, remember if you did anything like that I will
Maan you are threatening a sick girl
No dear you are my life how I can do this to you


Anvesha's marriage was due in 1 month Geet convinced Maan to leave for Delhi and after much telepathic talks threatening and all Maan said ok but was their when her surgery was
Everyone expect Shiv were surprised by the concern Maan had for her
Geet was on here way to recovery last Maan saw her she was bandaged heavily on her head, the surgery was a success but chances were still not bright, Rano and Mohinder lived at the Kapoor's
Finally Anvesha got married to Arjun Ram did all the rituals of the father.
When the marriage works completed Maan relaxed and so did Geet, she knew if something happened to her during this time Maan would leave everything and come running to her and even go insane.
Now that marriage was over so was her responsibility
Maan was entering the Mansion after seeing off Anvesha, he suddenly felt that Geet was sinking
He shouted GEEEETTTTT, everyone turned to look at him
He immediately called Shiv
Shiv where are you?
At my house
Geet, go to Geet
What happened Maan, she's ok I just saw her an hour ago
No she's not
How come you know
Just go Shiv she's sinking just go
Ok I am going
I am on my way to Luck now I'll be there in an hour
Maan I am here and she will be ok (said rushing to her ward)
OMG nurse call Dr. Bakshi immediately, oxygen, fast Hey Maan I am sorry but
Don't let her sink Shiv (pleading) I am on my way and don't cut the call
He from the other mobile asks his pilot to get the helicopter ready and come to their terrace he will be waiting for him
Then he tells Gayatri that Geet was sinking and he will immediately leave
All were confused, Ram called Mohinder to tell her condition and within 15 mins Maan left.
Hey Shiv she's not responding why?
I don't know Dr. B is here
No Shiv you don't understand, please place the mobile near her
on speaker mode
He places the phone near her ears
Geet you are there Geet, honey please don't go anywhere please Geet
By then Mohinder and Rano had come and were listening to all this
Geet remember when you said you want to see me, sweet heart if you will sink how will you see me, Geet please respond Geet

Shiv do something Shiv bring her out of trance please he cried loud

Finally Maan was there he rushed to her ward the nurses were winding up the instruments
Shiv patted his shoulder Maan we have to wait for some miracle
M: no she is
S: she has gone .....(before he could complete)
M: no, she can't do this to me; I will not let her go I'll get my Geet back
He ran to her ward
my heart is paining, I am in tears, please give me strength by commenting, I need your support and love
...... if you find something disturbing do write and if you find it nice encourage me by commenting and of course by hitting that LIKE BUTTON

pls continue commenting, it feels really nice to read you all

don't ever forget to hit the like button, the silent readers it takes only a second to hit it, so pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeeee hit the like button whenever you like the update

 I know you are sad but still pls comment pour your sorrow in  your comments

part 24

Edited by smj1977 - 01 February 2011 at 8:41am

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maansee IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 12:53am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=heermeher]luv u so much

You should not ask want an update its something like asking for oxygen to breath atleast for me to telepathy

yes same with me
 i was happy that i was first one to reply my loved telepathy ,......... but i m heart broken with this part .......... shruti ye kaisa update hai............

Edited by maansee - 01 February 2011 at 1:11am

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 12:54am | IP Logged
hey shruti wants one more update today with happy ending. plz sweetheart its really heartbroken............. i m cry while reading it.... i cann't bear maans pain ................... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz one update today.................................. one more  with fill with their love

Edited by maansee - 01 February 2011 at 1:13am

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