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Telepathy and Love (maan geet) #1 (Page 71)

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
hey wen r plang 2 update

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
thanks for the overwhelmed response 76 likes, 68 comments, 22 pms OMG unbeliveable
So as you all said the majority was saying that their meeting should be unplanned, they should meet by chance, and they went for Luck now some even said Delhi.

So let's see when they meet


Part 19

Things were not as easy as they seem to be, Sameera's presentation was appreciated by one and all, many companies came forward to inquire about KC, Maan was overwhelmed by the response, he was a short while forgot about the fact that he was here to meet Geet.

Geet was nervous, very nervous, the result were due to be announced in half an hour, their group was sitting keeping their fingers crossed, the cultural going on were not dampening their nervousness. All were sitting together holding each others hand and praying to the Almighty.

The results were to be announced any minute, suddenly Maan's mobile buzzed; he reluctantly looked at the number and received the call which was from Arjun, hello

Hello, Maan Arjun here

Yes Arjun, what happened? you sound disturbed
Maan, come back immediately
Every thing alright
No, Pammi aunty
What happened to her?
She had a stroke
Stroke, how?
She fell down the stairs, and hit her head, some internal injury
How did she fell?
NT, what is she doing there?
Oh she came to visit, and had some heated discussion with aunty and when she was calling out Dev she fell down
Dev is also there
I just have to move out of Delhi, and this wait I am just coming, let me talk to Sameera, she will wind up things here.
Sorry, dude
Why are you sorry? It's my family I should be the one feeling sorry.
Maan hangs up and calls Sameera and tells her he has to leave immediately, she has to wind up things here
Then he recalls Geet and says sorry Geet, but gets no response, he senses there was pin drop silence inside the hall,
oh the result is to be announced, she might be too occupied to sense my disappointment, he leaves the premises,
as he was getting in the hired car he hears the crowd shouting, Geet's college has won the trophy,
famous five were heading towards the stage with the rest of the team, then he heard Geet thanking every one
he softly said congratulations and sensed her immediate reaction she now being out of herself heard him and said thanks, where are you?
Heading to the airport
Why? (She gave the trophy to Pinky and came out of the hall)
Oh Maa SI had a fall and now she is suffering with stroke due to head injury
How this happened? And why did I not realize it?
You were busy and your mind was occupied with that announcement
Sorry, tell me how this happened?
After wards, you go inside and join the celebration
No, I want to hear everything, this is the first time I missed something, and I don't like it
Ok, honey listen then he told her everything, this is what Arjun told me, rest I have to find out when I go there
Take care, and don't stress
I won't you go and enjoy it's your first big success, don't let any one else take the credit of your hard work, and stay away from
I am away from him
I know, but when you were heading to the stage he almost hugged you, and I did not like it
Ok, Mr. Possessive, ok
Take care
You too, bye
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Edited by smj1977 - 28 January 2011 at 2:26am

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 5:46am | IP Logged
nice update so finally u chose not to let them meet i think its the right decision as if they meet the thrill in their telepathy conversation will die i think it wud b better if they dont meet until she finishes her graduation or something...........but he address geet honey and sweetheart does it mean he has some feelings for geet or its just the way he speaks to her..........bcoz yet now their feelings towards each other is not stated clearly right...............

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
loved it yaar..awsome one !!! i guess maan gonna do something for NT

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 5:53am | IP Logged
loved it............

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kirannaryani Senior Member

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
that was really nice update ....... loved it .cont soon 

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
awesome part. loved it.
hope pammi will be alright soon.
maan will not leave nt.
aww first time geet miss something and disappointed about it.
I guess maan have some feeling for geet.
update soon.

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Wonderful one................loved it
i'm so glad tat u didn't let them meet there

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