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Telepathy and Love (maan geet) #1 (Page 32)

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged
great updateEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
so maan wil not be comfortable by her presenceLOLLOLLOLLOL but their destiny will make them 2getherEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
awesome
continue soon

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nice part....do cont...

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Part 9

awesome update

loved it

congrats geet she topped

Going for sameera

They should become really good friends

Can't wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

part 10

awesome update

loved it

maan is afraid to have her nearby

loved the way he confessed it to her

can't wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

 

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the story beautiful  how they can understand each other without face to face pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnn

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what a different concept.........loved it.......just finished reading......update soon......want to see what happens nextWink

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 5:57am | IP Logged
 remember who this Ram Kapoor IS?

So did you guess who this Ram Kapoor is?

 
I don't know much about Luck now so readers most locations can be fictitious if possible I will mark a star on such places

 

Part 11

 

All the online counseling was done and Geet secured a seat in SPI Luck now.

 
Soon the day came when she had to leave, she went with her Papa ji and Maa to the city of gardens, the city filled with monuments of Islamic Architecture, the city of quite Gomti river, the city of royals, the city known for its THAZEEB (etiquettes).
 
They boarded Sealdah Express from Mukeria at 10:40pm, will reach Luck now at 6:05pm next day. They were carrying food for the 20& hrs journey. They also took gifts for the Kapoor family.
 
Next evening when they reached the CHAR BAGH station Luck now they found Ram and his son Prem waiting for them, both friends hugged each other, followed by introductions, Prem took their luggage and kept in the car.
 
They soon reached Kapoor Mansion, it was a huge house, though not as big as the Handa Mansion but quite big as per city standards, the house of near the banks of Gomti, in one of the most luxurious colonies of the city,
 
the good thing was the college was near by and Gauri was joining the same institute, the dental college.
 
So it was decided that Geet will stay with the Kapoor's instead of joining the hostel
 
Gayatri was quite impressed by Geet. She accepted her as her daughter.
 
Soon it was night, next day Geet has to join the college, she was all the time aware of Maan becoming restless,
 
she had to ask him why was he not at ease,
 
She went to the bathroom as today she had to share room with Gauri and while talking to Maan she wanted no distraction,
 
Hi are you there,
 
no reply,
 
I know you can listen, you seem very restless, can't you share
 
Hi, yes I am quite disturbed
 
What happened? I thought you would be happy that I finally came here
 
Yes I am happy but
 
What but?
 
You are to stay at someone's house and not hostel
 
Yes, he is my father's friend; Darjee agreed on this condition that I will not stay at the hostel but at his house
 
You know who they?
 
Of course my father's friends, I told you, why are you so restless? Something wrong.
 
Forget it so you will stay with the Kapoor's
 
Yes, do you know them?
 
Forget it
 
You are trying to hide something, tell me
 
Look I am not hiding and if I am its non of your concern
 
Look as if you can hide, sooner or later I will find out, you just have to think about it for me to know and mind you I will be attentive not to skip your thoughts (angrily)
 
Geet never read my thoughts without my wish
 
Oh such a secret (sarcastically)
 
Geet please don't test my patience
 
Oh now I am sure there is something you are not telling me, but I will find out
 
I will not let you
 
And how will you do this?
 
I will find means to close my thoughts to you
 
You are going to close your mind
 
Yes I will, though I don't know how, but will find out
 
Try yourself, (frustrated) after all these years you suddenly want to get rid of me ok I will not disturb you, bye
 
Bye and don't try to penetrate my mind
 
Same to you

 

Both were quite annoyed Maan s he had some secret he does not want to share  and Geet was hurt by what he said

 
so can you guess what the secret is?
why is Maan restless by Geet's stay at the Kapoor's?
do answer if you have guessed else wait for the future updates
 
 
...... if you find something disturbing do write and if you find it nice encourage me by commenting and of course by hitting that LIKE BUTTON

pls continue commenting, it feels really nice to read you all

don't ever forget to hit the like button, the silent readers it takes only a second to hit it, so pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeeee hit the like button whenever you like the update

 

hope you like it
part 12 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1574211&TPN=36&#37903342

Edited by smj1977 - 08 January 2011 at 2:35am

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