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Telepathy and Love (maan geet) #1 (Page 3)

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

pls don't confuse dev is same as in the series Junior to MSK

he is Samraat and Pammi's son

k thanks i was a bit confused

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:13am | IP Logged
nice character sketches,
update soon.
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Part1

 

He was sleeping peacefully, suddenly hears some deafening voices, some woman was waking him, shouting at the top of her voice, he could hear clearly "wake up, wake up" she shouted n number of times, "wake up or else I will pour this icy cold water" now one more women joined her she also had a high pitch voice shriller then the first one, she was louder, his ears were paining he could take no more, just woke up with a jerk covering his ears with his hand, shouting "SHUT UP, whose here", opens his eyes and finds no one around, he was surprised, he clearly heard the voices someone was standing near his ears shouting, some women, but here in this house there were only two women his Dadi Maa and his step mom and both spoke very softly, hardly shouted whatever the matter maybe.

 
He looked at the time it was 5:00am, no time for anyone to wake up, the 2 ladies woke at around 6:00am.
 

The 13yr old Maan was quite upset, what a disgusting way to wake up, damn this dream it seemed real. He was not able to sleep however hard he tried, so decided to leave the bed, he went to his fathers gym which was not used since his death last year, he saw the machines and decided to do some workout as his school does not start till 8:30 am, meaning he has extra 2 hrs before he starts to get ready.

 

Meanwhile in a far off town of HSPur

 

Ranu and Tayji are trying hard to wake Geet

 

T: Geet wake up dear its already 5:00am

 
G: Tayji its only 5 why should I get up so early
 
R: sweet cherry now you are 6 yrs of age and Darjee said you should wake up early and come with us to fetch water from the well and then accompany us to the fields for early watering etc, then before leaving for school help us in the kitchen
 
G: but Maa Rajji is also sleeping why I should only wake up
 
T: dear you are elder remember, when Rajji will be 6 we will wake her also, now come on good girl
 
Geet wakes up reluctantly and follows the instructions given to her

ps: hope u like it I made it short so that you may read carefully and grasp what the situation is ...... if you find something disturbing do write and if you find it nice encourage me by commenting and of course by hitting that LIKE BUTTON

pls comment


Edited by smj1977 - 29 December 2010 at 12:18am

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:22am | IP Logged
nice concept, so maan mother is still alive
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:29am | IP Logged
loved it ..continue soon !!!!
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nice partWinkWinkWinkWinkWink

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:29am | IP Logged
hey nice awesome update
he had a dream i thought it was real d waking up
n poor geet has 2 wake up at 5 even though she is just 6yrs
waiting for ur next update
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loved it............. plzzzzzzzzz continue soon

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