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Part 9

 

It has been a month and Dev was faring well, NT's initial complains went unheeded as Dev was committed to impress DM and his bro, NT now knew she has to oblige Dev's wishes if she wants her married life not to ruin

 
Kamya was married to Vinayak, a clerk in DDA (Delhi development authority), as she always wooed to have loved him and said that it is the Khurana's who are against her marriage to him, she soon realized in how much comfort she was living at Khurana's but there was no going back as Pammi strictly instructed her to follow her martial status and try to make a happy life with her husband and in laws,

 

DM's full time presence with Pammi changed her a lot, and she was close to being a Khurana Daughter in law in words and deed.

 

In HSPur

 
It was time for Geet's result to be out, she was praying hard for good results. In the evening Rajji came running by
 
R: Didi, there are some reporters asking for you, please come
 
G: (confused and a little afraid) for what R? Is every thing all right?
 
Maan was in office, he sensed something was out of place
 
R: come Didi, there's good news
 
G: good news, what good news?
 
She entered the living room accompanied by R
 
Darjee called her: come my dear come here
 
She was shocked on hearing adornments from the person who always found reasons to accuse her, she walked slowly
 
D: she is Geet our pride (she looked at her pinching herself confirming if it was a dream or)
 
Male reporter to Geet: congratulations Ms. Geet you have topped the 12th in whole India, you have come first.
 
Female reporter: congratulations, we are here to take your interview and your family's also. Please be seated
 
She looked around and found her Maa and Aunt bringing tea and sweets for the visitors, there was a knock on the door, and there came her Principal and class teacher with bouquets for her, the principal Ma'am hugged her, it was for this ladies consent that she was allowed to study further, she told Darjee look I told you she's a gem
 
The photographer's took the family photo, to her surprise Brij hugged her, she was in complete shock, after the visitors left, she took her leave and went to her room
 
At last all alone she said to herself
 
Congratulations! She looked around
 
Oh its you, thank you
 
You are not happy. Why?
 
Who said I am not happy?
 
You sound shocked and confused
 
Yes I am. I am overwhelmed, and shocked with my family's behavior, just a month ago they wanted to get rid of me and today they are snatching the credit of my success by saying they always supported
 
Geet, papa ji did support you, R was always there for you
 
Yes, they were the only two not blabbering
 
Look, you are emotionally drained, you should sleep
 
May be you are right
 
Ok good night
 
Thank you for understanding me
 
Bye, sweet dreams.
 
 
Next day the whole town read the news in paper, whole day people came by to congratulate, Darjee was quite happy with the attention Handa family got

 

Only a week later AIEEE, results were out and in that too she topped, the same scene was repeated, this time she was prepared, took the praises positively and welcomed the sweet talks.

 

Maan on the other end could not take out the scholarship part that the day Papa ji was telling to her, he called Adi

 
M: Adi, come to my cabin
 
A: yes sir (this Adi does not stammer)
 
He comes to his cabin
 
M: I was just thinking that we need a junior Architect, as our business is expanding I within next 5-7 yrs we will be needing more hands,
 
A: I did not get you Sir
 
M: I was just thought why don't we sponsor some student for his studies and bargain him to work from day 1 in our office
 
A: nice idea, but which student
 
M: any student who got a good rank and still opted for architecture
 
A: I'll find Sir the online counseling is starting next week, I will find ASAP
 
M: ok I too will see if I find someone
 
So Maan you have done it he said to himself
 
Geet was quite busy to notice this quite talk

 

pls answer VOTE VOTE VOTE

do you want this Geet to go to the same college as Geet in Fate has it all set?
i would like keep some things same to avoid confusion.... pls guide me
she will definately not come to Delhi, I plan for her studying in a city where kC has a office
 it would be a good idea that she interacted with Sasha, Sameera or Dev
what you guys think
let me tell
Dev is in Amritsar,
Sasha is in Jaipur
Sameera is in Lucknow
all 3 cities have Architecture colleges, so where should she go
tell me pls............................
afetr your votes I will continue, meanwhile I will collect info about these 3 colleges
pls dont't vote for Maan.
in this ff the college will last only till 4-6parts may be less
in the other one I plan a long college
 
...... if you find something disturbing do write and if you find it nice encourage me by commenting and of course by hitting that LIKE BUTTON

pls continue commenting, it feels really nice to read you all

don't ever forget to hit the like button, the silent readers it takes only a second to hit it, so pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeeee hit the like button whenever you like the update

 waiting for your replies

part 10 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1574211&TPN=29&#37826119


Edited by smj1977 - 06 January 2011 at 2:19am

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:47am | IP Logged

GREAT PART THANKS FOR UPDATING  AS SHE HAS TO STUDY ARCH... SHE SHOULD GO TO LUCKNOW AS THERE SHE WILL BE ABLE TO INTERACT WITH SAMEERA

SMARTLY WRITTEN.......................... LOVED IT


Edited by maansee - 05 January 2011 at 4:55am

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:48am | IP Logged
lovely ff.
update soon

i am going for sammera… can u make them bes mate.. then bring in a twist lol
x


Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 05 January 2011 at 5:05am

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:51am | IP Logged
i think sasha or sameera would b fyn but not dev.......... loved ur update.

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
i was waiting for an update from this ff very eagerly...thnks for updating

loved it to the core....

i know u gave the options for her college but when she can travel to jaipur or lucknow why not to delhi with maan.....but since the option made it clear i will go with the sameera one.............i dont want geet to be anywhere near dev and then v hv seen geet with sahsa in almost most of the ff so i am going to vote for sameera

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
awesome updateeee
send her 2 amritsar as its in punjab n her family will also nt hv problem bt hope dev doesnt create a scene
even jaipur is fine as it has lot of historical structures which will help her learn more abt architecture

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Wow . Nice concept. Telepathy wat an explanation abt it.reali fab.lukin 4ward 4 new ud.

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 5:08am | IP Logged
superb partClapClapClapClap
 sameera wud b fyn
thnx 4 d PM
 
cont soon

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