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Telepathy and Love (maan geet) #1 (Page 130)

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
its okkkkkkkkkk n will b waitingggggggggggggggg

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=smj1977]
SORRY NO UPDATECry
will update on 11th feb
all 4 ff's
sorry dear there will be no Angryupdate for a couple of days
there is a problem is I busy, today there was electricity cut for 9 hrs so lot of my work is pending Angry
and office first or else will be firedAngry
so no updates none can be updated Cry
sorry againWink
 
SPARE SMALL TIME FOR THIS FF .... AND TRY TO UPDATE ................ THANKS

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were ar u dear  i have been witing fr ur update...plz do it

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
 Part 29
 

He went near her, she was having tears on her cheeks roiling down her closed eyes, traces of pain were clearly visible on her forehead.

 
He wiped her tears and smoothed the traces on her forehead.
 
She calmed down, feeling at ease; she sensed his presence his touch even in her state of coma;
 
the two doctors were speechless by this, their science had no answer for this, they were relieved and their trust in the Almighty strengthened.
 
They were convinced that in a matter of few days she will come back.
 

They returned the CD to Satish and all four took their leave. Maan sat near Geet holding her hand.

 
It was past afternoon and Dadi was worried about Maan, though he was out of trance he had not even had a glass of water since he came,
 
just then she saw Gayatri coming with a jar and a glass
 

Gay: Maa, you please go home and take rest, I'll just accompany you after Maan haves something and he needs to change also, I have brought few clothes for him as I know he will not leave her side.

 
DM: Gayatri you understand him so well
 
Gay: he is my son, after all
 
DM: but he was
 
Gay: away from me, he may be away from my eyes he may not be near me, but he is my son and I know how stubborn he is
 
DM: just like you
 
Gay: yes and laughed, let me give him some juice
 
She enters the room to find Maan sitting by Geet's side staring at her fragile form.
 
Gay: Maan, have some juice
 
M: no, Maa I don't feel like having
 
Gay: but you have not had anything since you came here and as far as I remember you did not had dinner also.
{Guys did you forget that Geet went to Coma last night only :)}
 
M: no Maa I am ok
 
Gay (noticed a smirk on Geet's otherwise calm face): look even
Geet is not agreeing with your childish behavior
 
He looks at her to find an annoyed mark on her forehead,
 
he almost snatches the glass and empties it in one gulp.
 
Gay: easy, else you will choke
 
He looked at her relaxed face
 
Gayatri was surprised how even in her coma she was aware of his activities; these two are two body one soul.
 
A week passed with her healing physically,
 
though she was still in coma, her heart beats improved all physical signs of injury started disappearing,
 
her legs and hand healed, she reacted to him as if conscious.
 
He never left her side , the only time he left her was when he had to use the washroom or when the nurse came in to change her.

 

Adi came to Luck now, a project needed Maan's immediate attention, work at KC was suffering first Geet's accident along with Anvesha's marriage and now for the last whole week Maan's being missing.

 
A: hi, I am Adi; I want to meet Maan Sir
 
Receptionist: let me see, sorry sir we don't have any patient with
this name, can I have the full name pls
 
A; patient, but he is not hospitalized
 
R: then why are you asking me, excuse me sir, this is a hospital, and we keep record only of patients and if he is here visiting some patient you need to see the guest list, go its there scan it (mumbled god these people are so weird, what do they think this is a hospital or hotel)
 
Adi went to see the guest list, it was very long, I should better call on his cell
 
M: hello
 
A: hello, sir Adi here
 
M: yes Adi
 
A: sir I have reached the hospital, where can I find you
 
M: come to Room No #
 
Adi came in the room, Maan put curtain in front of her bed
 
A: sir, it has been a week and Mr. Chopra is raising hell, their project is being delayed because of us
 
M: so
 
A: (baffled) sir you need to see it now
 
M: Adi, I can't, you just tell him I am not well and you will see to it,
 
A; but sir, he wants you, else he will cancel the deal
 
M: I don't care
 
A; but sir, all the effort we put in it will be wasted plus there are assets on stake
 
M: I WILL NOT COME
 
A: sir, 15 crores of earnest money, 68 crores worth assets and 123 crores of shares plus
 
M: that is just money, we will earn again
 
A; and sir what about our reputation
 
M: ADI PLEASE (shouts) I WILL NOT, I will not come until she comes back and THAT IS FINAL
 
A: sir (stunned)

 

Maan............Maan................ some one calls his name

 
 
who called out Maan?
do you know?
 
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part 30  http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1574211&TPN=142



Edited by smj1977 - 14 February 2011 at 8:13am

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
yeyyy...1st one...once again...
loved it...
geet is coming back...yeyy...it better be geet only calling him....
enough of the comaAngry...she has to come back now....Approve
and yes i actually did forget that geet went to coma a night ago only...D'oh
loved how maan's mom took care of him even though he was far away from her...Smile


Edited by jyoti_l - 11 February 2011 at 7:02am

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 12:04am | IP Logged
nice ff good job..............Thumbs Up

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Yippee! U updated! Yaar i love ths couple, wat an amazin chemistry they share, who calld out hs name, plz let her be geet, waitin 4 hr comeback. Tat juice scene was too cute.

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awesome update....

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