Originally posted by ...Aphrodite...
First off Miss Anita...apologies for not replying sooner. I saw your comments on thread one and loved them but I was on a race against time trying to get this chapter up so I couldn't reply. I'm getting to those comment slowly slowly. I'm so glad you came across this ff, I believe it was recommended to you? i might be mistaken! Anyway, you're already extremely valued by me! Your comments make me smile.
Now to this particular one...I'm trying so hard to make the story flow so thanks for noticing! it's really hard when you're chopping up your chapters with different scenes! Haha!! I don't plan on disappearing for that long again so don't worry. You're an AR fan I take it, you must have been somewhat happy with this chapter considering there was an extra focus on them after I got so many requests on 'more AR' lol. Hopefully the other couples were entertaining too!
The yoga scene is one of my favorites too! I don't now if you're familar with the story but I had actually written up chapter 14 months and months ago and somehow lost it on my computer, this was one the scenes I recreated from the original.
AR bonding was fun to write too...I'm trying to keep it as natural as possible! I love the way you quote my writing...it lets me know exactly what you like! Fantastic.
Your comment was not at all essay-like...I like them to be long!! Thanks for commenting honey and I will try to update asap!
Aww don't worry about replying to those comments lol, I know you were trying to do so many things at once! And yes, this FF was recommended to me by Preeti_285 which was recommended to her by ..Mira.. LOL So it went from one person to the next..and I'm so glad I read this!
I really REALLY dislike reading FF's that aren't clear in story, that jump unpredictably, that have no purpose, and no consistency but this one has a really intriguing storyline, so I just have to say that the title of your FF, is so apt!! The chapters leave me breathless for real, believe it or not. By the end of it all, I want moree!
Your chapters are beyond amazing, each chapter has something new to offer while the gang is in goa! Its really hatke! I love how you manage to remember all the characters personalities and keep them in check in your writing, it really shows that you understand those characters, and I value that! Yes, I'm a diehard AR fan so im glad the focus was on them a bit more
, but I ABSOLUTELY love the other characters of DMG TOO! lol...So I really love how you transition so beautifully between RM and AA and then the girls and guy gang! I absolutely love reading each bit of this FF! It's like I imagine it in front of my eyes!
AND boy am i glad you included the Yoga scene LOL, that has to be my absolute fave bit from this update lol, cause Armaan was being his typical self and its LOL how Atul's read Armaan's books
Like I said, everything in this FF is amazingggggg..Im running out of words LOL! Everything is natural, and you have loads of talennnnnnnt! LOVED the GYM angle a lot here :D Can't wait to see what the next chapter focuses on!
Please don't make us wait 7 months lol