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Sanju_ IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 01 October 2008
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
hey shrinzieHug
First of all welcome back and I'm so glad that I started reading BREATHLESS just when you were about to make a comeback because otherwise, I'd have been too restless like others I I'm just too elated that you are back and that too with a bang...completely loved the update...the fights, the attractions, the denials all characters are going through are absolutely intriguing and I can't wait for them, especially Armaan and Riddhima to realize and accept their feelings for each other.

Rapunzzel Goldie

Joined: 26 October 2010
Posts: 1729

Posted: 28 December 2010 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
i  read ur ff afew months  back and its really gr8.................
finally u updated ..............
but dont take tooooooooooooooo long for next update..........
Sani_Rani IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 09 March 2010
Posts: 16261

Posted: 28 December 2010 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
eekkksss the update was magical like no words. the way u explained everything was terrific.
haha that kamasutra bit killed itLOL
bbz that was AWESOME times 10 to the power of zillionLOL
how can someone write to simply yet so powerfully? just wondering hehe
plzzzzzzzz update more. i mean this ff leaves me breathless in every way.
anitamalik IF-Stunnerz

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Joined: 26 February 2008
Posts: 27958

Posted: 28 December 2010 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Aphrodite...

First off Miss Anita...apologies for not replying sooner. I saw your comments on thread one and loved them but I was on a race against time trying to get this chapter up so I couldn't reply. I'm getting to those comment slowly slowly. I'm so glad you came across this ff, I believe it was recommended to you? i might be mistaken! Anyway, you're already extremely valued by me! Your comments make me smile.
Now to this particular one...I'm trying so hard to make the story flow so thanks for noticing! it's really hard when you're chopping up your chapters with different scenes! Haha!! I don't plan on disappearing for that long again so don't worry. You're an AR fan I take it, you must have been somewhat happy with this chapter considering there was an extra focus on them after I got so many requests on 'more AR' lol. Hopefully the other couples were entertaining too!
The yoga scene is one of my favorites too! I don't now if you're familar with the story but I had actually written up chapter 14 months and months ago and somehow lost it on my computer, this was one the scenes I recreated from the original.
AR bonding was fun to write too...I'm trying to keep it as natural as possible! I love the way you quote my lets me know exactly what you like! Fantastic.
Your comment was not at all essay-like...I like them to be long!! Thanks for commenting honey and I will try to update asap!

Aww don't worry about replying to those comments lol, I know you were trying to do so many things at once! And yes, this FF was recommended to me by Preeti_285 which was recommended to her by ..Mira.. LOL So it went from one person to the next..and I'm so glad I read this!Embarrassed I really REALLY dislike reading FF's that aren't clear in story, that jump unpredictably, that have no purpose, and no consistency but this one has a really intriguing storyline, so I just have to say that the title of your FF, is so apt!!  The chapters leave me breathless for real, believe it or not. By the end of it all, I want moree! LOL

Your chapters are beyond amazing, each chapter has something new to offer while the gang is in goa! Its really hatke! I love how you manage to remember all the characters personalities and keep them in check in your writing, it really shows that you understand those characters, and I value that!  Yes, I'm a diehard AR fan so im glad the focus was on them a bit moreEmbarrassed, but I ABSOLUTELY love the other characters of DMG TOO! lol...So I really love how you transition so beautifully between RM and AA and then the girls and guy gang! I absolutely love reading each bit of this FF! It's like I imagine it in front of my eyes!LOL

AND boy am i glad you included the Yoga scene LOL, that has to be my absolute fave bit from this update lol, cause Armaan was being his typical self and its LOL how Atul's read Armaan's books ROFL

Like I said, everything in this FF is amazingggggg..Im running out of words LOL! Everything is natural, and you have loads of talennnnnnnt! LOVED the GYM angle a lot here :D Can't wait to see what the next chapter focuses on! 

Please don't make us wait 7 months lol

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qazplm IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 05 August 2005
Posts: 12953

Posted: 28 December 2010 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
Okie, I updated my reply. But wanted to thank you for this part again.Hug

Please do update soon. Will be waiting anxiously.Embarrassed

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qazplm IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 05 August 2005
Posts: 12953

Posted: 28 December 2010 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
oh and I hope the 'Breathless Beckons' make a comeback. Their my absolute favoriteEmbarrassed

I just went back and looked at the 'Breathless Beckon' picture your had posted for the gym...I could totally imagine all the action happening in there.Big smile

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desire_20 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 24 June 2009
Posts: 4090

Posted: 29 December 2010 at 12:09am | IP Logged
i love u soooooooo much for continuing and writing such a great part...keep them coming, and please dont go away for months again lol
kweetrockstar IF-Rockerz

Joined: 23 October 2009
Posts: 7233

Posted: 29 December 2010 at 12:25am | IP Logged
u r so back
n am super happy to c u back
i just missed all this too much
thank goodness it was such a beautiful chapter
hats off to u
everything, was just brilliant

thanks a ton for the pm
n plz do update soon


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