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"Are both of you hearing yourselves speak? We've got exhibit A walking around in her bra displaying a glistening set of abs." She heatedly pointed at Muskaan. "...and we've got exhibit B sprinting on a treadmill like she's on the set of Baywatch." She pointed at Riddhima who gasped animatedly." LOL, HAAHAHHAHHAHAHA. I love love loveeeeeee Anji's witty remaks. Oh my god. I was laughing throughout most of this chapter, and smiling like a fool while I read the sweet interactions. Your updates leave me breathless, they really really do! I was so shocked at Anji saying that to both Muskaan and Ridhima, and I couldn't agree anymore. Oh man, it was possibly one of THE best bits of this chapter! I love you so much! Ahhhh.
"I told him what happened...you took me in to your room, sexually harassed me and now I am forever scarred and will never be the same again." she said nonchalantly."I woke you up when you were on the chair and you kept whispering, "Take me Armaan, take me now." and when I said no you kept throwing yourself at me. When that failed you got in to my bed and tried to undress yourself, I stopped you and then you eventually fell asleep," he told the story animatedly, trying his best to conceal any inkling of what actually happened. Now THIS was my FAVOURITE part of the whole chapter. I couldn't get over how witty, smart and playful these two are to each other. Despite the sexual frustration between them both, their interactions are absolutely hilarious, and I commend you for that! I was in awe of this little bit, and I was laughing really hard. I was grinning like a fool as I read Armaan's inner thoughts of Ridhima, and vice versa. I loved loved loved the way they both have so much naughtiness, but at the same time, they're so childish! I love how Armaan gets hesitant and nervous around Ridhima, and how Ridhima just craves to be touching/feeling him! LOL. It was such a cute little moment between the two, and I'm craving so much MORE. Stop tarpoing us D:
I LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE the way you write. I want to read so much more with the next chapter, PLEASE don't leave it for another 7 months, omg. I need some sort of relief from the stress of everyday life, please? I loved this chapter, it felt like you really never left! Update soon, love. I eagerly await another chapter! Thank you so much for this beautttt! <333
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hot and sticky and unbelievably gross."
Armaan scoffed at her last two words....Oh okay Riddhima.
^ THAT was um...REALLY HOT LOL!
laughed nervously, "I didn't know the guys in Goa were so.... attentive."
Armaan rolled his eyes.... keep it in your pants boys.
^ LMFAOOOOOOOO!! One does kinda wonder whether Armaan's advice here is for the other guys or himself ;)
Seeing how friendly and easy Atul/Rahul are around Riddhima, and yet there's that slight tension between Armaan-Riddhima even though they have become friends...lights the chemistry between AR on fiiiire! I LOVE that tension!
Armaan-Rahul's convo, with Rahul being slightly protective over Riddhima and wondering what she was doing in Armaan's room, was adorable! Armaan & Rahul's friendship is really cuute and real!
"I know...as much as you like to think I'm some kind of sex fiend. I can control myself, believe it or not." Armaan rolled his eyes at him.
ROFL ROFL ROFLL!
"Definitely definitely page 92." Armaan stated in between
laughs. "Damn Anjali...we all know you'd be flexible in bed. You don't
need to show it off to all your admirers."
Atul-Anjali's segment was adorable and Rahul-Muskaan's track is even cuter! Honestly, I'm a diehard AR fan and never read FF's of other couples...However, I've read every word of Breathless! Including the parts on RM/AA/AN...and they're equally well written. So hats off to youu! I found the part with Anji doing yoga HILARIOUS I was in bed LOL'ing (like actually laughing out loud LOL)!
Riddhima thinking of Armaan in the shower was /tehe I'm guessing that she, like Armaan, will also start realising there are some feelings there now ;) I LOOOOOOVED Armaan & Riddhima's little banter outside the changing room...Especially Riddhima's lie/joke about what she told Rahul ROFL! Armaan reacting, to her asking how she ended up in his bed, in a comic way rather than seriously..was totally Armaan!!
The chapter had the perfect balance of cuteness and hotness ;) I laughed lots and yes, I blushed (credit to Armaan) LOL Thank you thank you thank youu for updating! And I hope you update a bit more regularly because this FF has become really special to me. I guess after DMG ended ('my' DMG ended back in Sept2009) Breathless is one of the few things keeping alive the undeniable and unmatchable magic of AR's love for me! Taaake care, lots of love and PLEASE be back soon LOL! xx
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