Originally posted by Kajenaliya
Comment soon honey!
Originally posted by oishi_ksgCongratulations for the new thread..You really deserve it
Your Breathless FF is really taking my Breath away......I Loved it
This Part is also very Good. awesomeee.
Keep it up & hope you'll be regular now to update
Thank you soo much! Haha...the title seems very fitting then! I'm glad you enjoyed the part and I'll definitely update more often now that I have time off! I really appreciate your comments! keep them coming xx
Originally posted by pinkss
Comment soon love!
Originally posted by anitamalik
AHHH Shrina I'm so glad you updated! First off, congrats on your second
thread :D Your FF is seriously one of the best..it has a proper
storyline, and it flows so smoothly, and the characterizations are
perfect to the dot! Thats what I look for in FF's! :D
to the part, if after seven months you give such an update, damn, I
don't mind you disappearing every 7 months! LOL Okay I kid. I would die
if you disappeared another 7 months, but this update was seriously
amazing! I can't believe you thought that it would not be upto the mark!
loved the whole Gym angle in this update and how you managed to jump
from each of the characters..My fave bits were AR of course, but it was
nice to see the interactions with RM, AA, and then the gang
You come up with some pretty clever lines! Some
of my faves..this yoga scene was really funny, and totally imaginable! I
love how you are consistent with the characters personalities, thats an
amazing part of your writing!
"Because I've read Armaan's copy
of the Kamasutra, and you Anjali, are the in-the-flesh replica of page
92." he chuckled.
"Definitely definitely page 92." Armaan stated in between
laughs. "Damn Anjali...we all know you'd be flexible in bed. You don't
need to show it off to all your admirers."
I loved the whole AR convo outside the
locker room..that wittyness, oversmartness from both Ridhima and
Armaan..trying to appear super cool from the outside and teasing each
other, I love that a lot! It really helps to see a bond forming
naturally between the two!"I woke you up when you were on the chair and you
kept whispering, "Take me Armaan,
take me now." and when I said no you kept throwing yourself at me.
When that failed you got in to my bed and tried to undress yourself, I stopped
you and then you eventually fell asleep," he told the story animatedly, trying
his best to conceal any inkling of what actually happened.
^^that was unbelievably funny!
Oh AND i absolutely love the little thoughts that go in everyones minds! lol very intriguing!
update has left me breathless again! <3 Loved it and hope you update
super soon...my comment is like an essay :| but couldn't control myself
First off Miss Anita...apologies for not replying sooner. I saw your comments on thread one and loved them but I was on a race against time trying to get this chapter up so I couldn't reply. I'm getting to those comment slowly slowly. I'm so glad you came across this ff, I believe it was recommended to you? i might be mistaken! Anyway, you're already extremely valued by me! Your comments make me smile.
Now to this particular one...I'm trying so hard to make the story flow so thanks for noticing! it's really hard when you're chopping up your chapters with different scenes! Haha!! I don't plan on disappearing for that long again so don't worry. You're an AR fan I take it, you must have been somewhat happy with this chapter considering there was an extra focus on them after I got so many requests on 'more AR' lol. Hopefully the other couples were entertaining too!
The yoga scene is one of my favorites too! I don't now if you're familar with the story but I had actually written up chapter 14 months and months ago and somehow lost it on my computer, this was one the scenes I recreated from the original.
AR bonding was fun to write too...I'm trying to keep it as natural as possible! I love the way you quote my writing...it lets me know exactly what you like! Fantastic.
Your comment was not at all essay-like...I like them to be long!! Thanks for commenting honey and I will try to update asap!