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Breathless ~2~...Note! Page 34 (Page 18)

Medha. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
Wow!  That was really good!  The boys are crazy!  Throwing popcorn at girls?  Seriously?  Riddhima is definately one of a kind!  Who eats nachos in a movie theater, well excluding me because I do sometimes. Embarrassed  Anyways.  I really like how Riddhima controls herself even though she goes completely weak in her knees.  Abhi and Nikki are gonna get started everywhere, aren't they?  LOL.  Please update soon, and thanks for the PM. 

sweet.melody IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 04 June 2009
Posts: 33482

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
Firstly, extremely late but Happy New Year! Hope you had a blast on New Years!

and yayyy update!! <3

lmao I love the character you have created for Muskaan in this ff. I can totally imagine her dressing up for something as simple as a movie.

Actually scratch that other sentence, I love how you designed everyone's character in breathless! You make them come alive, as if they are more than characters. There are differences between each of them, and the way you blend it all together through their interactions with each other, and their gestures to each other is simpley beautiful Shrinz! Sachi Muchi! :D

Eeek being a darpok myself of scary movies, I can imagine the situation Riddhima is in. My friends too a few weeks back dragged me off to Paranormal activities 2 and I had no other option but to go as all of them were going LOL! But goshh I wish hot guys came and threw popcorn and M&Ms at us Day Dreaming HAHA!

I didn't realize it the first time an m&m came flying over, but by the second time I could understand who the culprit was LOL

and that "Who goes to a movie and orders nachos?" ... I do!!! I usually end up getting nachos lol. But I definitely am gonna think about it twice the next time after getting the information from this ff haha.

"Oh okay...I'll keep that in mind. Next time I hate a movie I'll stick my tongue down some guy's throat. Point duly noted." Anjali said sarcastically.


"Call me 'Some Guy' from now on" Atul said causing everyone to laugh out loud

hahaha loveeee AA in here!! They are a riot! Especially Atul.. he rocks! hehe

And Riddhima's witty replies to Armaan's flirts are a total treat to read! He's finally found a woman who can match him in comebacks.

The RM part.. ahh love it!!!!!!! <3 I love love love love love love to the infinity times love their character in this ff!! Rahul's subtle flirtatious behavior, Muskaan feeling something due to them, but yet coming back with her own rebuttals. It's amazing!

OMG Armaan freaking Riddhima out like that.. damn I would probably hide behind someone if that happened lol.

and the end lmao Atul carrying off a screaming Anjie, and Rahul offering Muskaan the same ride!

Amazing update Shrinz! And I can definitely vouch for the amazing factor in it having read it thrice, and a fourth time once again while commenting.

Take care gorgeous and can't wait for the next round of Breathless!

PS. seriously if this were a show, it would rise to the top like whooosh!  ;)
sanjana25 Goldie

Joined: 02 October 2008
Posts: 2241

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
loved it
contd soon..
thnks for the pm
ksg_lovargal Groupbie

Joined: 26 October 2010
Posts: 82

Posted: 25 January 2011 at 2:09am | IP Logged
 it was amazzziiiiinggggg !!!!
cont. soon !
ObodroKargosh IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 01 March 2010
Posts: 16599

Posted: 25 January 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged
hey Shrina...

i just started to read your FF, i caught up with the previous updates
you have handled the story well with the multi-characters. I like that it's not just focused one like the other FF's, tho i would love to read just about AR LOL

love your writing, can't wait for your next update Embarrassed


Edited by Dr.BasketGupta - 25 January 2011 at 4:56am
ShelDev Senior Member

Joined: 29 May 2007
Posts: 810

Posted: 25 January 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Loved it loved it loved it
Awesome dear....What an awesome update...
Those boys are awfully naughty but cute...
Pls continue soon
pixie_n IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6766

Posted: 25 January 2011 at 11:00am | IP Logged
bushrayou Goldie

Joined: 06 December 2007
Posts: 1150

Posted: 25 January 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
i dont think i have smilled and laughed to myself as much as during your update!! oh man that was purely AWESOME!! people around me think i am crazy cuz of the huge smile i was giving to the computer screen! thank you for the amazing surprise of updating! I CAN'T wait for more like always!!

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