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shreyshrey Senior Member

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Honey, if you write this good then i dont think you should reply to anyone's comments! (just kidding)
But really... the part was awesome!!!! I loooooooooved it!!!!!
Update soon

divan_arshi Senior Member

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 3:10am | IP Logged
i really like d way u write... keep me glued...SmileSmile

Thanks Clap

AshiYuvi4life IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 3:50am | IP Logged

DUDE! omg! I'm not supposed to laugh this hard at friggin 4:30 a.m.! I knew I should've waited to read this until later in the DAY! Guess my excitement got the better of me.

I LOVE Atul-Anjali!!!!!!!!!!! omg that was so ridiculous! First the guys and their stupid antics and then Abhi-Nikki... so predictable. I was waiting for it. I knew they'd go at it like wolves.

Have I ever told you how much I love how witty you've made Atul? Because I LOVE how witty you've made him! His little "call me some guy" line had me actually ROFLing and I was afraid my mom would barge into my room wondering why the hell I was cracking up like an idiot at this hour of night! That was classic! ROFLMAO!
Rahul-Muskaan... man you always seem to remind me why and how much I loved them! Rahul's "only in my dreams" comment to Muskaan and his constant advances, no matter how subtle, are like icing on the cake! They're hilariously attractive if that makes any sense whatsoever.

Hell even Armaan-Riddhima were cracking me up in this one. The nacho cheese... blood shot eyes, Riddhima's comeback, PERFECT!

Anjali and Rahul in the end were hilarious and again Atul-Anjali! my god! lol. could he be anymore unpredictable! and of course, Rahul's last advance for the night... or so I think. ROFL! dinner hasn't happened yet! ROFL!

Can't wait for the next update! We have to skype again! I have loads to tell you! MWAH!

Love ya, Gorgeous!


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sabihaa. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged

What a fantastic update! That has got to be one of the most interesting movies I've ever read about.. too bad no one actually knew what it was about. :P

Ahahahahahahaha. I <3 Atul; I think his middle name should be "Persistence". Hopefully Anjali will slowly stop resisting him. :)
RM were so cute.. & Muskaan's addiction to Rahul's cologne.. I'm faintly reminded of Davidoff Cool Water.
OMGosh, AN really, really need a room. I feel for Muskaan & Armaan, I would have probably been the same. That being said, Nikki's jealousy is so adorable - she's been with him for six yrs, but that worrying tendency will never leave.
AR.. what can I say about them? Ridzy is basically the male counterpart of Armaan, minus the Casanova personality. I love her wittiness.. it's about time someone got the upper hand of my favourite man. :P

Shrinaaaaaa. You are simply amazing. & this update was worth the wait. I can picture the dinner now, Muskaan won't be able to get enough of Rahul.. I mean his cologne; Riddhima will probably one-up Armaan yet again; Atul will do his utmost best to melt Anjali; and AN won't even go to dinner.. they'll sit in the car & makeout. LOL.

My love for you is as sweet as the caramel popcorn Abhi couldn't get enough of. :D


lil_desi_goddes IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 4:50am | IP Logged
gorgeous, thank god you updated, your update is a breath of fresh air whilst doing boring law assignments, as always, i simply loved the update!! please do continue and thanks for the pm!
Radhika Shah IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Great part!!
Thanks for the pm!!
NiksAngel Senior Member

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged

wht type of star u represent.....u disappear...n come back after ages.....gosh.....i didnt even believe whn ur site showed tht u updated the part..had to recheck it twice....ha ha ha....nice part.....cant even request u to continue soon.....hehe ....again u'll ages....
ARCaskettFan Goldie

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 8:03am | IP Logged
luvd it!!!!
plzzzz cont. soon

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