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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 3 (Page 49)

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Originally posted by komlika

i dont know.......im missing everyoneCry Cry Cry.......finally u show up so tht made me feel good Embarrassed
tu tou meri rockstar hai,tune pukara (yaad kiay) aur hum chale aye,jaan hatheli py lai aye .................something like tat hainaLOL[/QUOTE]

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kia daant nikal rai hai ok ok i know u still havent turned 80 hahhahah 32 k 32 hain tere mun mien oye hoye aaj mera maaaan yaar kia lgra tha koi itna hott ahemz ***y kaise hosakta hai yarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

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muskan thanxs all the readers for their lovey comments & best wishes!!!
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~deewangi~
part 24

maan didn't bother explaining - mujhe BBA karna hain bus
daadi was not sure why he took such a decision.
daadi - tum chaho tho kuch bhi course kar sakte ho, why BBA?
maan - mujhe BBA hi karna hain
daadi saw the determination in his eyes, she knew nothing could change his mind after this.
Daadi gets ready to leave to office after the breakfast. Maan wore a jeans & t-shirt & tags along.
Maan - I am joining KC today.
Daadi was dumb stuck, it was her dream but never expected it to come true
he took the files from her hand & put it in his laptop bag.
He put his hand around her & walked out with her to get a cab.
Daadi actually felt really nice being cared for. She doesn't even remember when was it last that someone shared her responsibilities. She seem to understand now why he was wanting to do BBA. It was not a very demanding subject & with his capabilities he could easily manage BBA & learn the business. He walked in with daadi to KC, he still remembered the last time he came there. How could he ever forget that day, how the staffs head was all down in shame hearing about his father selling, his final few khurana's family shares. Literally washing off his responsibilities.

Things looked really sad, but some thing was admirable was the respect they held in their eyes for daadi, she really had given her heart & soul to the company. He walked in with the attitude that the staffs automatically raise to greet him. He maintained a straight look with confidence. Daadi took him to Mds cabin & offered him to sit in her seat. He smiled at her sweetness. He held her from her shoulder & made her sit there. I need it to earn it daadi. Nothing comes easy. Daadi was pleased at his modesty. But promise you to relieve u soon of this. His words were more than enough for her, she knew he definitely will.  She never expected in her widest dream that Maan will take over the family business like daadaji wanted. She lost that hope long ago. She just hoped he would manage a good IT job for himself but shouldering her with KC was way too far from her expectation. She looked at daadaji's pic with moist eyes. She turned her face away wiping her tears so what do you want to do? Maan had not seen daadi so emotional in last few years, she always puts up a brave face for him. He cleared his throat I want to know what we do, our company history, our clients..actually every thing he suggested. That will take months beta munshji  mocked. The name is Maan Singh Khurana..he shot a glare to the man who stood holding a bunch of files in his hand ..MONTHS well I am here now lets start it then. Munshi ji was little shaken with his attitude, reminding him of daadaji, the confidence used to just ooze out of him & the young munshiji used to feel timid standing in front of him, exactly what he felt standing in front of the 17yr old boy claiming himself Maan Singh Khurana exactly the way daadaji would pronounce Khurana after his name. Maan spend the rest of the day just reading about the Khurana's history & journey so far. He had to rush home before geet comes for tuition. He was winding up at around 5pm
munshi ji -  abhi tho office band hone main der hain he said teasigly.
Maan continued closing the files & didn't bother answering him.
Munshi ji - tumhara school nahi 5 & u can pack your bags, smirked a winning smile.
Geet kept the hands in between the closing files. Yah kanhi nahi jaa rahen in a attitude more than Maan could offer.
Maan was shocked to see her here. He decidedly didn't want her to see KC's in this condition. Munshiji left them alone feeling lost to that little eyes flooding with respect & honour for Maan Singh Khurana. She banged her school bag on the table & crossed hand over her chest & made a angry face. Maan was not sure what bothered her, may be the pathetic condition of the office, he felt ashamed , felt he failed her. He couldn't fulfill her dreams, he hated himself. She groaned under her throat making faces to catch his attention indirectly. Maan was still feeling let down, he shouted in frustration WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE? She cried ek tho main naraz hoon aur aap mujhe pe chilla rahen ho?
Maan immediately softened - tum kyun naraz ho?
Though he thought the answer was KC, but she never failed to surprise him with her deewangi
aaj aapka office main first day hain & you didn't even tell me cribbed making a baby face.
He was caught off guard he never expected that coming - woh main he fumbled
woh tho main by chance subha ghar gaye tho pata chala, then  I went to gurudwara with mama & prayed for you. Dehko mama bhi aayen hain aapko all the best kahene ke liyan. He stood up immediately to greet rano.
Rano caressing his head with all the love & warmth - all the very best
he hugged her and took her to meet daadiji
daadji immediately knew looking at the bliss in maans face that this was rano. She raise to welcome her in, rano took her blessings daadi held her & hugged her, conveying all the gratitude she had for Handa's  . The older ladies spend some times chatting while geet insisted maan to show her around. She jumped around the whole office exploring the different corners. Aab main tuition ke liya yanha aavonghi she jumped & clapped. He couldn't stop admiring her & her acceptance of every thing about him. After seeing the whole place they sat in his cubical pulling an extra chair for her. I am so excited we will work here together she pulled her chair closer to him. You still want to work here? he blurted out in shock. Aap ne aise kyun kaha she questioned. He was never good with words to express, how could he tell her he was ashamed. She didn't understand but still touched his soul by saying dehkna ek din you will make this number one construction company in delhi..kyun india nahi nahi..the whole ..maan closed her mouth...ho gaya..aur kuch mat bolna!!! (muskan wondered bechara how could he fulfill what she was about to utter) she made a baby face & kissed his palm that rested on her lips.
   
PRECAP
maans first achievement as a business man
~PREV     PART 23         NEXT     PART 25      ~
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Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
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at last i got the first place to comment......phew anyways coming to the update.......it is a cute update.....today i loved every character......even dadi was happy.......i wanted her to smile from past updates because of maan but it happened today.......there r no words to explain abt geets deewangi......she always utters what maan never expects......now maan should atleast start expecting from her......love the last scene.......where he stopped her from saying more......i can understand him......what ever she utters he has to full fill and geet doesnt stop utteringROFL......loved her cute kiss.....anyways love both of them today.......waiting for maans big achievement......love u jaan for giving us such nice updateHug

COMPLAINT: updates getting shorterROFL just kiddingWink


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Loved both parts baji...Hug
 
Aww Maan considered the choices Geet chose, and she wants to work with him ...
Maan calculated how long it will take for them two to be working together Embarrassed.....
Love their cute little scenes...
This ff is soooooo real, the way you have described his options, and how he goes thorough all the options..... Clap
 
Daadi-Maan scene was really emotinal, love Maan in the office, he really is like the "MSK", but 17 LOL, don't like the rude munshiji .Angry, but Maan will surely shut him up with his MK style soon. Tongue...
 
Poor Maan he is ashamed of where the office is at that he thinks she is going to ask him about that, but she is angry with the fact that he never told her about his first day in KC Embarrassed...
Awww.. Is this the first time Maan puts his hand over Geet's mouth?!!?!?, can just imagine it, but they are just younger Day Dreaming Embarrassed.....
 
Update soon, thanks for the pm baji.....xx
 
 


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amazing update!
loving his attitude!
n geet never fails to surprise him
lovely update
n dadi n rano also hav met now
nice..........
n dadi wmust b so proud of maan
really nice update!
loved it loadzzz!
update sooon!

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