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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 3 (Page 143)

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrsharma

waitingggggggggggg muskaaaaan


hey vidya...how r u pal????

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged
doing great. what abt u
 
why u didn't visit maanpreet thread. sana and me had nice time with maanpreet.

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrsharma

doing great. what abt u
 
why u didn't visit maanpreet thread. sana and me had nice time with maanpreet.


wen dear???

she is online???

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~deewangi~
part 29

he knew she can't miss that question - it is making love but the word is generally considered profane
geet - tho main pyar se woh word use kar sakti hoon kya, sirf aapke saath
maan rolled his eyes

geet had her final exams in 9th & summer holidays while maan had his 2nd semester exams. 
Geet was getting geared up for her 10th. She was little nervous with the board exam term lingering in back for her mind. Maan always eased her by saying it was similar to the exams she had written so for. Expectations where really set very high from her.

2 continuous years geet had avoided holidays in HP. So this time the family decided to visit them in delhi. rano was really scared & anxious. It was the first time her in-laws were visiting them after her love marriage with Mohinder.  Family was little apprehensive but finally accepted her since she was from the same cast & similar back ground. But still the tension did lingered when ever they all stood under one roof. Only thing that worked in their marriage's favour in front of the family was Mohinders  immense groW*H in business he started all by himself after leaving HP with rano. He had grown to a height no one could touch him. In fact it did bring in little bit of greediness within the brothers. Mohinder & rano ignored all that, what mattered to them was geet & three of them together now maan Embarrassed.

Rano - jab who log aayenge tho ghar main ri rahana
geet - kyun?
Rano - samjhne ki khoshish karo geet
geet - mujhe nahi pata, meri chuti hain main unke office javoon gi
rano rolls her eyes

rano calls maan
rano very reluctantly - woh HP se darji, thai sab aa rahen hain
maan - ji
rano - woh woh geet
she didn't know what to say
he understood those unsaid words - ji mama, main samjh gaya
she sighed in relief & said - I am really sorry, I don't want to hurt you lekin woh log sab
maan - I understand mama.

Geet got ready next day in the morning at 8am. She kept calling maan to pick her up.
Maan - tumhare ghar guest hain na
geet - umm
maan - tum unke saat thoda time bitavo I will meet u latter
geet - kab milo ge
maan - shaam ko
geet - paka
maan - umm

Brij took active interest in knowing mohinder's side of business. Thai ji closely watched geets moment. Raji was very thrilled to see her room & her photos. She saw maans photo


raji - wow yeh kaun hain
geet said proudly - Maan Singh khurana
raji was now in 2nd year college - kitna cutely HOT hain
geet went & touched the pick - hot tho nahi hain
raji closed her eyes in disgust - thu abhi bhi jhali hain kya, terko dehke tho nahi lagta
geet blushed thinking raji could finally felt she is grown.
Raji again started looking at the different picks of maan in the room, with her other friends.
Raji - yeh tera BF hain kya?
Geet - nahi yeh tho mere husb...rano comes in giving a stern look to geet
rano - maan takes her tuitions
rano gives the drink & snacks to them & goes out still telling geet to be quiet with her eyes.

Raji - this maan is really chikna types, inhe dehko tho nahi lagtha ki yeh tuition teacher hain
geet gets annoyed - woh college jate hain
raji - phir tuition, oh!!! extra income, bichara finance problem hain kya, dehkne se tho koi shyazada lagtha hain
geet angrily - woh sirf meri tuition leten hain
raji - tum dono alone hoten ho?
geet - hain humesha
raji - how can you be alone with such a HOT guy & not feel any thing geet
raji shakes her
geet made a baby face still not sure what more to feel.

Raji takes geets phone & starts calling her fiancee
raji - ji, yeh geet ka number hain, aap isse main hi phone kijayen ka
guy - umm
raji - aacha main rakti hoon
guy - give me a kiss please
raji blushed & placed few wet kisses on the phone
geet felt it gross & looked away.

Geet wipes the phone & looks away.
Raji - tu mere engagement main kyun nahi aaee
geet - woh
raji - pata hain ladka canada se hain
geet - phir gurvinder ka kya huwa?
Raji - veerji ne maan na thodi tha
geet - but u love him
raji - dere bol jhali kisi ne sunliya tho meri shamat aani hain
geet - how can u do this?
raji - pata hain channi meri friend thi na
geet - unki tho shaadi hogayi na pichle saal
raji whispers - actually she ran away with some on aur abhi woh la patha hain
merko lagtha hain her brother killed her because of that.
geet was shocked nothing made sense to her. She went out & immediately made a call to maan & started to cry. She didn't know but she felt like crying. Her innocent mind could not understand  the brutal lifestyle of HP. Maan became restless.
Maan - KYA HUWA
geet - mujhe HP nahi jana
maan - tumhe kaun HP behj raha hain
geet - mujhe kabhi nahi HP jana
maan - nahi baba you will never ever have to go there, I will not let you go there
geet twisting her nose - paka
maan - umm
geet - mujhe aapse abhi milna hain
maan - lekin
he didn't want tell her what rano had told him.
She cuts the call crying. Maan closes his eyes & hits head on the table for refusing her first time ever. As if he could stop her, with in 30 mins she was there with her teary eyes & hugged him kept crying. He couldn't have seen her crying - STOP IT NOW
she wipes her cheeks in his shirt & rubs in closer. Her hand slide behind him feeling differently comfortable. She gets carried away in the warmth & holds him closer & closer. Maan immediately feels the difference in her hold & he smiles naughtily & turns away. Geet looks down feeling oddly nice & embarrassed for the first time ever & clutches her duppata. She was speechless, he smiles realizing her feelings grow differently, one side he feels very nice & other side he feels he is definitely going to miss her deewangi. He cups her face & places a soft peck on her forehead & she actually blushed, he noticed those cheeks turn deeper & her eyes looking down & not meeting his gaze. He teased her - kya huwa
she shook her head & hid it inside his arms.

PRECAP
Embarrassedgeet feeling feelings!!!Embarrassed

~PREV   PART 28     NEXT LINK TO THREAD 4~
PHOTOS BIG THANXS TO 18mypride
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan


Edited by muskanp - 11 January 2011 at 10:22am

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
she was, now i am not sure

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
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awesome update..loving geet new feeling Wink

ab maan bechare ko torture nahi sahna padega..lolz

pls continue dear!!!


Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 07 January 2011 at 11:45am

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged

yayyy me 3rd woohoo lol anyways awesomeeee update hayeee da last part was so cuteeee geet feeeeling "feeling" hayeee she was all blushing awww our deewani is growing up bt dekhna her deewangi will increase as her age increasing lol n den hayee maan pic so cutee n ufff dis raji naa hateeee her plzzz send her back jaldi and aww maan he is so so understanding rano didnt even finish her sentence bt he understand wat she meant awwwww anyways do continue soooon now



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Awesome update......... loved it

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