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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 3 (Page 124)

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~deewangi~
part 28

geet - phir pimple kyun hota hain?
Maan - humne padha tha na 8th main, its because of hormonal changes.
Geet - hain.
She still looked worried & confused, he didn't want to say anything
geet - phir mujhe main aur aap main hormonal changes kyun nahi hota?
He closed his eyes & wondered what to reply
she shook him from the grip she held - batvoona hum mein hormonal changes kyun nahi hoten
maan murmured right thats why I get aroused every time u hug me!!! isse jada abhi isse aur kya hormonal changes chahiyan.
Geet - batavo na
he turns to face her & cups her chin with his hands - sab log ek jaise nahi hote na iss liya.
Geet - waise bhi hum tho special hain!!! hain na!!
he smiled - hain tum bahut special ho
she puts her hand around him & rested her head on his chest I love you a lot.
he repeated those words deep within.

Maan got the Noida deal after Mr. Sharma was convinced with the changes in KC. Maan very well knew that the success of this project will decide the future of KC. He left no stone unturned to get excel in this project. He personally visited the site every day to check on the proceedings. Geet tagged along with him. She insisted or some time even cried or some time cabbed it up, so he had to take her along. They left immediately let after her school at around 3pm & she sat in one corner & did her HW while he checked on the construction work. Maan always made her sit in the office but she would come out & sit. It was a month since the noida project started. Now daadi arranged to open an account for him & credited his salary in that account.

 
It was there 3rd anniversary & 2nd wedding anniversary
After going to the temple Maan took geet & went to the bank. He made her sign some documents, she was really excited with the whole bank thing, she never bothered what she was signing. Maan smiled at her blind trust on him.
Maan tapped her shoulder she was too lost looking at the bank environment.
Maan - don't you want to know what you are signing
geet - na
maan - dehka tho u will like it
she curiously peeped to see , he made a joined account & her name was Geet Maan khurana written on the account she jumped up & kissed him. Bank representative smiled & went to get the other document. He gave her bank card and the pin.
Geet - mujhe aapka card chahiya
he took his purse out & gave his card to her.
Geet - u keep my card, I will keep yours
maan smiled - yeh bank ka card hain we cannot swap it like that.
She made a face & crossed her hand on the chest
maan - aacha baba u keep both the cards bus
geet - nahi
maan gave up & finally ordered a new set of card for himself with name printed as Maan Geet Khurana
she looked at him in shock.
Maan - aab challo
she smiled & followed him - aap ne sachi main Maan Geet Khurana change kar diya
he took her to the ATM & showed her how to use the card.
Maan - new pin kya rahk na hain?
Geet - humara birthday
maan - that is easy to crack
geet - humara anniversary
maan smiled & set the 4 digit pin for both the cards as their anniversary date followed by month.

Geet went home & flashed the card & cheque book proudly to rano. 
Rano was speechless. She admired their trust & care for each other. Rano was happy for geet & really found a son in Maan. (muskan chi chi babji son nahi ...son-in-law)

winter holidays, geet & her friends went out for a movie. In the mall a guy misbehaved with ridz. All of them got wild & started abusing the guy ' khote, khamine..etc etc
the guy felt embarrassed in front of the who-e crowd. He quietly left from there, as he crossed them, he shot a glare to ridz & said F*** U.
ridz, meera, arohi & geet wondered what F... word meant. After going home, they opened the dictionary & checked. Ridz nahi hain yaar
geet pulled the dictionary thu spelling galat dehk rahi ho gi...she went...F....yah...fu......arrey
yah word tho nahi hain
meera - may be we don't know the spelling right
arohi - challo anji se pouch the hain
they all marched to anji's room who was now studying medicine.   
Meera - di F*** ka matlab kya hota hain
anji's eyes popped out in shock - who told you about this word?
Geet - mall main
ridz stamped geets leg
ridz - we heard some one say
arohi - di koi bad word hain kya like F*** U
anji - bahut bad word hain
meera - what does that mean?
Geet - humne dictionary main bhi check kiya, I guess we don't know the right spelling
ridz - di batvona iska matlab kya hain
anji totally cornered
arohi - aap ko bhi nahi pata di?
Anji didn't like that, she immediately snapped - offcourse mujhe pata hain
meera - phir batathe kyun nahi
ridz mocks - di nahi mallom na?
anji clears her throat & causally says - its something like making love
geet - pyar karna bad word kaise huwa?
Anji rolled her eyes - if you don't love some one & then say it, then it is bad na
geet - lekin if you love some one & then ??
anji - then its ok...
least did she know what geet was hinting at.
Maan came to pick geet from ridz place. She hopped behind & kept practicing the new word she learned..murmuring ...**** U , **** U
maan wondered why she was so quiet. He kept on distracting her asking about the movie, about her lunch, she still looked distracted. They reached the office & she still followed his thinking about the word & when to say it. When they reached his cubical, he took sipped water & asked kya huwa hain tumhe, why are you looking so lost? GEET!!! she excitedly said I **** U he puked the water !!! WHAT??? she said it again I **** U , I **** U , I **** U maan closed her mouth & looked around.
He was so conscious. She made a baby face & looked at his conscious eyes. U don't **** me thats why you are feeling so conscious. Maan chup ek dam chup. Dare you use that word again.
Geet - why can't I use that word
maan rolled his eyes controlling his anger he knew she definitely didn't know the meaning
maan - do you even know what it means?
Geet - yah
maan was taken a back
geet - it means making love
he felt like banging his head on the wall, he knew even making loves means what she doesn't understand - great yeh definition zaror anji ne bataye hogi
geet - aapko kaise pata
maan murmured I am definitely going to kill her.
She realized there was something wrong about it, like the pimple episode. She immediately held her ears sorry sorry sorry sorry mujhe nahi pata tha !!
maan smiled & kissed her forehead
geet - waise uska matlab kya hain
he knew she can't miss that question ' it is like making love but the word is generally considered profane
geet - tho main pyar se woh word use kar sakti hoon kya, sirf aapke saath
maan rolled his eyes


PRECAP
Geet in 10th !!!

~PREV     PART 27   NEXT  PART 29~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan


Edited by muskanp - 07 January 2011 at 11:25am

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THANKS FEELING THE HOLE EPISODE IN  THE HEART... LOVED U MUSKAN.... HOW EASILY U CLEAR ALL THE DOUBTS OF GEET.................... A IG HUG AND A ROUND OF ClapFOR U



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Phewwww finally u updated yayyy was waiting so bad for dis hehe anyways wowww loveee da update so awww maan made a joint bank acount for Both maan n geet awwww n in card it was writeen maan geet khurana n vice versa hayeeeeeeee yupp rano ji u r so so lucky to have such a awesomeeee son in law n den in mall aww poor ridz n oh noooo da guy said F u to her oh nooo n hehehe da gals started finding my meaning poor dem dey will never find dis word in dictnory thnx god n god dis Anjali Naaa Kya Kya bataterahti hai uffff n wen geet said dat word infront of maaan he kinda got mad good n told her real meaning thnx god bt our geet hehe she still wanna use da word hehehe she is too cuteee man do continue sooon yayyy geet in 10th now

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Nice update.. Big smile.. I couldn't help laughing..

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hhahahaahhaha muskan u made my day i was dying studing medicine but teri update so hilarious and refreshing hahahaha thanx uff geet na kuch naya learn karti hai maan ki shamat aajati hahahaah uff my tummy is aching now i laughed so much hahahahha u r tooo good mannn muahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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awesome part. loved it.
oh god. I feel sad for maan,
poor maan have patients and ans geet's all questions.
 geet is too innocent.
 I know it some dya maan told he will kill anji.
even me too want to kill her.
 ulta seedha baatein bolti rehethi hain geet ko aur uske friends ko.
aww maan made join account for both of them.
 he is so sweet. perfect hubby. caring for her wify dear.
update soon.

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