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RM/AK/AR/GM FF My Love,My Life GM Part1 Pg 25 (Page 4)

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
HII..thank you all so much for the lovely comments..i'm so glad you liked it..i'll post the next part tomorrow!!

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Originally posted by shiv-gauri4eva

HII..thank you all so much for the lovely comments..i'm so glad you liked it..i'll post the next part tomorrow!!


will be waiting........Day Dreaming
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interesting part.
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Originally posted by trishap

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thank u!! and done!!
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Recap

Muskaan was still in shock. She kept replaying the last scene over and over again. The look in the man's eyes had promised retribution. The chilling smile on his face would haunt her dreams for days to come. She was dimly aware of the paramedic telling the police officers that she was in shock, her mind was still reliving the past few minutes which really felt like hours to her. She did not snap out of her stupor when the paramedic pried her fingers off the cell phone that she was still clutching to her chest. He then dialed her I.C.E number and waited patiently for someone to answer.

Part 3- And So It Begins

Geet: Muskaan! You were supposed to pick me up 20 minutes ago! I've been waiting for you forever! Please don't tell me you're still at the mall

Paramedic: Ma'am I want you to listen carefully. I am a paramedic. The lady to whom this phone belongs is fine but I need you to come to the location to get her. I will give you the details when you get here. She was witness to a horrible crime, rest assured the lady is fine but she is in shock.

Geet was startled when she heard the unfamiliar voice on the phone, even more so when he informed her that he was a paramedic. She started having a panic attack when he informed her that Muskaan was in shock and the only thing she could think of was getting to her sister. Before leaving home, she called up Maan who did not pick up, she then called up Rahul who picked up on the very first ring.

Geet: Rahul! Thank God you picked up! Listen something is horribly wrong. I just got a call from a paramedic saying that Muskaan witnessed a crime and was in shock! She is still at the mall, I am on my way there but I would appreciate it if someone you or someone else could get there! They will probably tell you more details then me.

Rahul: Don't worry Geet, I'm on my way, he replied grimly before making a sharp U turn… he was close to the mall, had in fact been on his way home with Armaan when Geet called and could not help but suppress a chuckle. Muskaan had a way of finding trouble.

Rahul and Armaan arrived at the site just as the body was carried away by the morgue. The situation seemed more serious than Geet had let on, and he was concerned for Muskaan's safety. 

He saw her sitting on the hood of her car with a lost look on her face, her bags clutched to her chest as a shield. She looked so lost that he wanted to hug her and take away the pain.

Armaan: Its bad Rahul real bad! According to the officers, a woman in her mid twenties was attacked a while ago and Muskaan was the only witness. The officers believe she saw the face of the murderer and want to take her in for questioning.

Rahul flashed his badge as he walked up to the detective in charge of the case. He wanted to accompany Muskaan to the station and got permission to do so. He instructed Armaan to wait for Geet and take her home when she arrived. 

He then escorted Muskaan to the car and made her sit down, bucking her in. he pried the bags out of her hand and tossed them in the back seat then took one of her hands in his own and squeezed it reassuringly. Muskaan turned to look at him, her eyes still unfocused but she squeezed his hand back and held on, as it gave her a sense of security.

Rahul: Muskaan honey look at me. You are safe, you are fine! I'm here na. we just have to go downtown to sort some things out. Then we will go home and you can put this entire incident behind you. You understand what I'm saying right? She nodded her head slowly and he gave her a tight smile before pulling out of the parking lot.

Once Rahul got to the station he took charge of the entire investigation.

Officer: Female Caucasian, 23 years old. Name is Melissa. C.O.D; multiple stab wounds.

Rahul: Did we find any prints? Did he leave the murder weapon behind?

Officer: None. We checked all surrounding area. The unsub probably took the weapon with him.

Rahul now turned his attention to Muskaan who was had remained silent throughout. He hated to do this to her but he needed her to go through everything that had happened in order to get as much details as possible. The sooner it was over with the sooner he could take her home.

Rahul: Muskaan, Hun, I need you to tell me all that you remember. Anything and everything you can think of about what happened. The smallest details can help. Muski look at me, she lifted her eyes to look at him and he smiled at her to let her know that he was there. She took in a deep breath before blurting out.

Muskaan: I saw him, the man. God Rahul he killed her so calmly without a trace of remorse.

Rahul: Start at the beginning

Muskaan: I was walking towards my car, which was right across from the girls when I dropped my bags, after I picked my bags, the stuff from my bag spilled out. I picked it up and when I stood up I saw that man. He held the girl from behind. He held a knife to her throat. She was begging him, pleading with him to let her go but he laughed. He just stood there and laughed. He then took the knife and stabbed her, again and again and again. Muskaan's voice shook at the last bit. Rahul sensing her distress gave her a hug asking her if she needed a break.

Muskaan: No, Let me get this over with Rahul. She turned back to the officer and continued with her narration. 

After he stabbed her he wiped the knife on a piece of cloth then stuck in under his shirt. He was turning to leave when he saw me. He stared right in my eyes and I was too petrified to move. He started moving towards me and I ran. While running I called the cops and then hid behind a car. But he found me, he found me Rahul and he was going to kill me.

Rahul clenched the desk. He had no idea that Muskaan had come so close to death, the very thought terrified him and he clutched her hand tightly, a look of anger and pain on his face. Meanwhile Muskaan continued with her tale.

Muskaan: He stood in front of me and he smiled, the same smile he had on his face before he killed the girl. But then he heard the sirens and he put his knife away and left. God Rahul his eyes, they were so cold and the way he looked at me, it was as if to say that he would finish what he started. I have never been more terrified in my life. I will never forget his face, never.

Rahul: Shhh babes, it's ok. You're safe now. I won't let anything or anyone harm you. He held her close, rubbing her back in a soothing gesture.

Police Officer: Ma'am  do you think you could help us make a sketch of this man. The sooner we get him off the streets the better. Muskaan nodded in acceptance and went off to help another officer generate his picture.

 Rahul was joined by Armaan who filled him in on the details. Both of them were disturbed by the events but were relieved that Muskaan was safe.

Muskaan: Yeah, that's him! He's the guy, she said pointing at the computer screen where she and an expert had constructed the man's face.

Armaan: Let's go check this guy out. There is no way of knowing how dangerous he can be. Sounds like a psycho to me and you never know if he decides to come after Muskaan.

Rahul: I won't let anything happen to her, he murmured as he followed Armaan over to where Muskaan was seated.

At the very moment they were aproached by a police officer who drew them aside and confided in them that they unsub's signature was the same as that of a serial killer that the F.B.I had been looking for.  Rahul and Armaan were horrified for they knew that the man was meticulous and never left any clues behind, nor did he let any eye witnesses live—for long.

The newspapers were calling him the Triple Threat Killer, he surfaced once every three years and killed 3 women in a time span of three days before disappearing once again.  Rahul and Armaan were first introduced to his case two years ago when the police department got a break in the case and found a witness who had seen the entire incident and had come forward to report it to the cops.

 Overjoyed with the having their first real break in the case the department had made a mistake that cost them their only witness. The man was found dead in his apartment a week later while under police protection and the trail had gone cold after.

Rahul was extremely worried, not only was the unsub back, but both Muskaan and Geet were in danger. He could not trust the department with their safety therefore he needed to find a way to protect them and his family from this threat. He did not voice out his concerns but Armaan who had been his friends for so long automatically understood the unspoken message.

After wrapping things up at the station, Armaan escorted Muskaan home while Rahul worked out her security details with the local police department. Upon reaching home, Armaan called on an emergency family meeting and then waited for the arrival of Rahul in order to discuss their plan of action.

Rahul arrived shortly after and sat down to discuss the situation with his brothers. Muskaan and Geet as well as Riddhima wanted to be a part of the discussion so that they could have a say in the final decision. One thing was clear though, this unsub was clearly dangerous and was not to be taken lightly.

Rahul: I spoke with chief, as of today we are back on duty and officially on this case. He wants me back in Boston and I think it will be best if Muskaan goes with me. Muskaan opened her mouth to protest but he cut her off.

Look Muskaan the main thing is we draw him away from here, away from the family. We are worried about your safety as well as the safety of Geet. Since the two of you are twins it shifts the risk to her as well. Therefore you are coming with me to Boston. Armaan you have been assigned to protect Geet. You are in charge of her safety.

Armaan: Ok. Any extra protection assigned here? He asked.

Rahul: There will be extra security around the house. We need to draw him out. Muskaan and Geet being twins poses and additional problem. To keep Geet safe we will be sending her to a safe house with security personnel escorting her and her own personal body guard Armaan. Me and Muskaan depart tomorrow and Geet will depart shortly after.

Rahul: We depart tomorrow at 7. We will be driving down to Boston escorted by 2 unmarked cars. It's a 4 hour drive so be ready and we have no idea how long we'll be gone so pack accordingly. And that does not mean you pack 10 suitcases, he teased Muskaan. She glared at him but there was a smile tugging at her lips.

Muskaan: Fine, 9 suitcases it is then. She got up to go pack followed by Geet and Riddhima.

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