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RM/AK/AR/GM FF My Love,My Life GM Part1 Pg 25 (Page 3)

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wowwwwww luved it
muskaan was dating a gay haaaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaa
it is toooo hilerous

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Awesome part..... lol muskaan is so funny...
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great CS and part 1!!!!
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Hi guys..First of all Happy New Year! Hope this year brings happiness and prosperity to you and your family. So here is the 2nd part. I hope you guys like it..Just a request, all those of you who would like to be PMed please send me a buddy request..Please and Thank You


Maan: Good to have you back brother! It's going to be crazy around here now that you are back. How long are you guys here for anyways?

Armaan: Two weeks! Two whole weeks of relaxing, fun and hot babes! The three exchanged hi fives and went to their respective rooms to change and freshen up.

Part 2- Murder and Mayhem

Lunch was a boisterous affair with the entire family (plus Armaan, Geet and Muskaan) together again and was spent laughing and cracking jokes.

Padma was happy that her entire family was back together safe and sound and sent a payer of gratitude to God for blessing her with such a loving family.

The main topic at the dinner table was Muskaan's disastrous anniversary and even she had calmed down enough to see the humor in the situation. As per usual, Armaan and Rahul could not stop cracking jokes about it. 

After the elders retired, they moved their tormenting to the family room where all of them congregated to have coffee and talk. By this time Angad had returned home and was throwing in his share of the ribbing.

Angad: So tell me what happened! I want a minute-by-minute action replay. Muskaan shot him a filthy look but decided to humor them.

Muskaan: So I entered the house with my bag full of groceries and the first thing I notice is that the whole place was dark. The curtains were all drawn and no one was about. The next thing I hear is jazz music and this really loud thumping so I make my way toward his room and I saw him in bed with not one but two guys! The look on his face when he saw me was hilarious. If I wasn't so pissed off I would've laughed at it.

As soon as he saw me he goes like baby this is not what it looks like. I was like give me a break! He's like babe I'm just bi-curious. I did not wait to hear the rest I just left and came here.

Angad laughed and assured Muskaan that she was better off without the loser and went his way. Everyone decided to hit the club to celebrate Muskaan's new found freedom later that night and Muskaan immediately went off to get ready to go to the mall for some much needed retail therapy. She dropped Geet off at their apartment to grab a few things then made her way to the mall.

Muskaan bought two dresses from Guess, mostly because she could not decide which one she liked better and then dropped by at Victoria's Secret to get some matching lingerie. It was her guilty pleasure and she spent a good portion of her money indulging herself.      

Muskaan stepped into the parking lot, balancing the numerous bags while trying to dig through her bags for her keys. As she stepped out of the elevator she passed a pretty young girl who was putting her things in her trunk and turned at the bend to where her car was parked. 

Muskaan stamped her foot in frustration when the bags she was holding dropped to the floor. She bent down to grab them and all the entire content of her hand bag came tumbling out.

Muskaan gathered her stuff together and stood up with her key in her hand only to be greeted by a horrific sight. She stood frozen on the spot as she saw a young man grab the girl she had passed earlier and stab her in the chest repeatedly.

He stabbed her multiple times and what horrified her more was the look of unholy glee on his face. The blood drained out of her face but she could not tear her eyes away from the gruesome sight. The man turned and it was then that their eyes met. 

He stared at Muskaan and wiped the bloody knife with a handkerchief. He smiled and started moving towards her.

Muskaan finally came back to her senses and without a backward glance she kicked her shoes off and ran towards the exit. Her heart thudding loudly in her chest she clutched the bags she was still holding to her chest and prayed for divine intervention. Hands trembling, she drew her cell phone out of her bag and dialed 911.

Muskaan crouched down behind a car with her phone pressed against her ear. She could hear footsteps approaching and her feet turned to jelly. She could hear the operator talking to her but her throat had dried up and she could hardly breathe. She took a deep breath to calm herself down and whispered ever so lightly so that she could not be heard by her pursuer.

Muskaan: Help Me! The operator assured her that help was on the way. They had triangulated her coordinates by tracing the GPS in her phone and the operator told her that she would wait on the phone with her.

Muskaan could no longer hear any footsteps and she slowly straightened cautiously to see if the killer was around. As she turned around she came face to face with her worst nightmare.

 He stood towering over her and gave her a smile that sent chills down her spine. She instinctively raised her arms to protect herself and it was at that very moment that she heard the wail of sirens. The man looked disappointed and he gave her a lingering look before disappearing into the air.

Muskaan slumped down as her legs refused to support her. Moments later she was surrounded by police officers who lifted her off the ground and set her down on a stretcher. Muskaan was oblivious to all that was going on around her; the only thing that flashed in her mind was the look that the man had given her, a look that promised her that they would meet again.

She had never been so scared in her life and all she wanted was to rewind and wipe out the entire incident from her memory, forget everything and go back to the way things were half an hour ago. She was still clutching her bags in one hand and her cell phone in the other. 

Muskaan looked up to find a kind paramedic sitting next to her. He smiled at her and asked her if she needed anything. Muskaan shook her head and then became aware of another presence. A few police officers stood surrounding her and were now asking her questions.

Muskaan was still in shock. She kept replaying the last scene over and over again. The look in the man's eyes had promised retribution. The chilling smile on his face would haunt her dreams for days to come. 

She was dimly aware of the paramedic telling the police officers that she was in shock, her mind was still reliving the past few minutes which really felt like hours to her. She did not snap out of her stupor when the paramedic pried her fingers off the cell phone that she was still clutching to her chest. He then dialed her I.C.E number and waited patiently for someone to answer.

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iceprincess101 Goldie

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
awesome part...thank 4 the pm...
rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
awesome is muskaan d only 1 who falls in trouble
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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
awesum update do continue
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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
HII..thank you all so much for the lovely comments..i'm so glad you liked it..i'll post the next part tomorrow!!

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