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RM/AK/AR/GM FF My Love,My Life GM Part1 Pg 25 (Page 2)

Cytherea IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
Just wanted to let you guys know that I am going to start off with Rahul & Muskaan's story..mainly because I've already written some part of it..you get to choose who you want next..bye for now and thank you sooo much for all the lovely comments

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
amazing charchter sketch
the charachters seem to be very intresting
cant wait 2 read the first part
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Awesome CS...waiting to read more...do add me to your pm list...
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 Chapter 1: Trials and Tears 

Armaan: Dude slow down! I know you haven't seen the family for 2 months now but that does not mean that you kill us before we get there.

Rahul: Look who's talking! You've been jumpy all day. And you didn't even flirt with the airhostess who was so clearly smitten with you which is definitely unusual. You're just as eager to get home as I am. Armaan grinned sheepishly.

Armaan: Yeah! 2 months is a long time, it's the longest we've gone without seeing the family. I've missed ma and pa! And I most definitely missed bugging little miss perfect.

Rahul: Trust me, if you keep bugging her the way you do she will most definitely kill you! We'll be scraping you off the wall when she's done with you. You haven't seen her loose her cool yet! Armaan raised his eyebrows in disbelief. No one knew Riddhima's anger better than him considering he had been on the receiving end of it for half his life now.

Rahul:  Don't look so skeptical; you haven't seen her loose it completely. She broke my nose when I was 10 years old just because I broke off the heads of all her Barbie dolls. She turns into an angry lioness when she is truly pissed off. Why do you think she's into Yoga so much? It helps her keep her anger at bay! Armaan laughed as he imagined a 10-year-old Rahul getting punched in the face by 8 year Riddhima with her hair in pigtails.

Armaan: OH MY GOD I can't believe this! How come you never mentioned this before? He asked laughing.

Rahul: Has le Saale! Do you really think I would go around telling people that my younger sister broke my nose? He made a sharp turn and increased his speed as his home came into view. Khurana Mansion, the place where he had spent all his life, and the place where the people he loved the most resided.

Rahul parked his car in the driveway and ran inside followed by Armaan. He was laughing at something Armaan said when he walked into the family room to be greeted by the sight of Muskaan crying. Muskaan sat in the middle with Geet and Riddhima on either side and was wailing loudly.

Sitting across her was his older brother Maan who looked bored out of his wits while Geet and Riddhima tried their best to comfort Muskaan and get her to stop crying. Rahul was immediately concerned and looked at Maan questioningly. Maan shrugged and shook his head to indicate that he had no idea what was going on.

Maan (whispering): She's been doing that for half an hour now! I was concerned at first and we've been trying to get her to tell what's wrong but she hasn't stopped long enough to tell us what's wrong. Angad is smart! He pulled a disappearing act as soon as the water works started. I'm stuck here till she spills the beans. Armaan and Rahul looked at him sympathetically. Muskaan was a total drama queen and her crying sessions could last anywhere from 5 minutes to 5 hours.

Riddhima: Ab bata na! What on earth happened? When we talked a few hours ago you were so happy! You were planning on surprising Jai with a home cooked meal! 

At the mention of the name, Muskaan started wailing more loudly and Geet and Riddhima exchanged concerned looks. Maan simply rolled his eyes and went back to playing a game on his iPhone.

Rahul (whispering): Who is Jai?

Maan: Her latest boyfriend and by far the longest relationship she's had to date. They've been together for 2 whole months.

Rahul's fingers curled up into a fist as he experienced a burst of rage towards this faceless Jai who had made Muskaan cry.

Muskaan: Jaiwsctngonme, she mumbled before bursting into another bought of tears. Both Geet and Riddhima gasped and looked at Muskaan sympathetically whereas Maan, Armaan and Rahul looked confused.

Armaan: What was that? All I heard was the name Jai and the rest was kind of a blur.

Riddhima: OMG Muskaan Jai was cheating on you? OMG you poor thing! What a total and complete imbecile. Please don't cry there! I never really liked him you know she blabbered while Geet nodded in assent.

Rahul: That's what all this crying is about? I thought someone died or something. All of the girls glared at him angrily before turning back to their discussion.

Geet: Start from the beginning! What happened when you went over to his place?

Muskaan: I got the groceries and went over to his place to make his favorite dish to celebrate our 2-month anniversary! When I walked in I could hear sounds coming from his bedroom, I walked inside thinking that he had decided to stay home to surprise me but instead he gave me the biggest shock of my life.

Armaan: You caught him in bed with another woman? He asked giving her an understanding look.

Muskaan: NO! I saw him in bed with 2 other guys, she said in a disgusted tone. All of them looked at her shocked and then burst out laughing!

Rahul: AHAHAHAHA! OMG you were dating a gay dude! That is hilarious! MUHAHAHAHA. Geet and Riddhima glared at him evilly but even they were having a hard time keeping a straight face. Maan and Armaan were rolling on the floor with laughter! They got up wiping tears of mirth off their face.

Muskaan: I'm so glad that my life is a source of entertainment for you guy! Saying so she got up and ran to her room followed by Geet and Riddhima who had their hand wrapped around their mouth to stifle their laughter.

Rahul: Man it's so good to be back home!

Maan: Good to have you back brother! It's going to be crazy around here now that you are back. How long are you guys here for anyways?

Armaan: Two weeks! Two whole weeks of relaxing, fun and hot babes! The three exchanged hi fives and went to their respective rooms to change and freshen up.


So here it is..the promised first part! i Hope you like it and that I didn't offend anyone. Thank you soo much for the lovely comments. Anyone who would like to be PMed can you please send me a buddy request (makes it so much more easierBig smile)

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
great love it..
muski is so fuuuny..
do continue plz.
thx
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
omg.........muskan was too funny ROFL ROFL...........poor maan got trap while angad disappear LOL..........update soon
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
loved it 
awesome one:)

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
amazing part
muskaan is really funny

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