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Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 (Page 5)

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Hey i loved the OS... poor Riddhima she had to go through so much i seriously cn't imagine how parents cn think or treat ther kids like this... n omg wen he killed his elder daughter i was really in tears even i read a lot of stuff like this n it seriously breaks my heart thinking how cruel n inhuman cn some people be... n trust me u wrote the whole thing very nicely...
 
Now coming to the fun part tht's the running one... god it was seriously like a fairytale... i loved how they met like stranger n thn got along... i loved Armaan's talkative self soo much he was jst so cute... n thn wen the love seed started growing in ther hearts awww tht was such a cute part... n thn finally wen everything was ok n she was back to England i was like thnk god they are safe...
 
I loved the last bit the most specially the way he confessed... "we met like people meet in fairytales. I charged in and rescued you. We both spent a night of our life together escaping from that village of yours. We promised each other to stay together always. You still don't get it Riddhima" "miss Riddhima who just got a new life. Will be my girlfriend? Then after a few years my wife? And then after a few years the mother of my kids and then after a few yea" God he's jst so cute... i loved the confession the happy ending... u shld seriously write more often i wld love to read more frm u... thnx alot for the Pm :)

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Hey ! Thanks for the PM !
This is an amazing one shot, completley different to anything else in this forum :) You wrote a fantastic OS on such a touchy topic and showed Riddhima/Rihana emotions !
Its crazy that things like that still happen! Anyway, loved the whole runaway scene, AR - super cute :) Especially the river scene !
Freaked me out when her family where at the British embassy ! But lucky they're rotting in prison now !
Prom scene - even more cute ! Armaan is just adorable !
P.s OMG You named the older sister Aaliyah - its the name i've reserved for when i have kids in like a million years :) !! I LOVE the name !
Looking forward to more OS' and fanfic updates !
 
 
 


Edited by x.sunayna.x - 28 December 2010 at 4:14am

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:00am | IP Logged
awesome os
loved it
loved the concept
fab work
beautifully written
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:01am | IP Logged
hey amazing OS sweety i never ever read this kind of OS ,that was sooooooooo amazing
well thnx for the pm
plz do write more OS
love u
salina

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:04am | IP Logged
I rarely comment on ffs...but ur writing somewhere forced me to tell you that "THIS WAS AWESOME" nd well written..very different concept...

Good Work Sani..Smile A big applause to you for this

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:10am | IP Logged
sani...im at lost for words....i dont know how to leave the long comment u wanted...im overwhelmed with emotions...just one thing...you're amazing :]

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:18am | IP Logged
nice part 

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:25am | IP Logged

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HeyyBig smile!!
Words are less for me to describe how beautifully you potrayed everything. it felt so perfect to be true.Big smile I mean, as if i was just travelling along with them and viewing every scene that you penned down. Seriously, Gal - you have got a talent... and every little thing that you mentioned fitted so perfectlySmile, sooo beautifullyStar.
 
i wish to be that woooden girl "Riddhima"- saved by a boy - Arman LOLLOL Oh Lord, you have made me your fan !! i can't tell you how much i have loved this particular OS .... i demand you to right moreBig smile, of this sort.... Ahhh .... i can't stop smiling at this perfect fairy tale.... my jaw hurts dude! LOL uh see i Blabbering nonsense but i have to tell you that you were Marvelous!! so you get it rightLOL? should i describe more that how good you wereLOLLOL
 
Awsome, fantabulas piece of  Work!!
write again ASP!
Thanks for the Pm
Love MahaEmbarrassed.

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