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Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 (Page 4)

shreyshrey Senior Member
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 12:22am | IP Logged
amazing os.....
u should really write more of these os' with a social awareness message...
 
it was great!
 
love
shreya

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 12:34am | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwesome os yaar
d first prt was reallly touching
fabulassssssssssssssssssssss
do rite more
thanx a ton 4 d pm

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 12:57am | IP Logged
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 1:33am | IP Logged
this is simply awesome!!!!!!!

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 1:36am | IP Logged
Edited*Tongue

hey my sexy churel kamini jannemaan of heaven princessHug

OMG!!!ShockedShocked....Firstly i got a HUGE shock after i saw U wrote a oneshotShocked
And second shock i got when i finish reading this Oneshot...Big smile
it was Heavenly awesome manClapClap
I am telling u..This is the BESTESTESTESTEST oneshot i ever readBig smile
I am lack of words right now but hope u can understand my feelings my kamini jannemaanWink
I loved the way u protrait the condition of Girls Early marriageEmbarrassed
This is a wrong practice and The riddhima of ur OS reflects it Damn awesomelyClapClap
And How her Dad Killed her Big sis was like DAMN man..Angry
How could a father do that with her Own childAngryOuch
I got emotional in that Part...Cry
And then came our superman Armaan to the rescueWink
OMG!!!...he was BEYOND DESCRIPTIONDay Dreaming
When he stepped in I was feeling like Finding water in a desert...exactly like riddhimaEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
And how he saved her was out of the WorldTongue
And i love riddhima's inner mind talkingsLOLLOL
Above all I LOVE EVERY BIT OF THIS ONESHOTBig smile
And i LOVE u even more for writing an awesome oneshot like thisBig smile
Hats off to u Jannemaan....StarStar
Thanks for the PM

love you
Prinzu
Embarrassed




Edited by Prinnia - 28 December 2010 at 2:41am

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arlover_aditi Senior Member
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 1:44am | IP Logged

m so glad u wrote this one shot sani...n there is nothing to be taken in racist way...its all about humanity u see...even some of the indian villages have child marriage n all....and thats so not right...if sumthing terribly inhuman is happening in our society we have the right to voice against it...n this os is sumthing i truely love...with all my heart!  Clap

n here comes the famous "m elder so m always right" mentality...gawd...seriously...i dun understand y elders tend to think that way...just coz we r kids doesn't mean we will always be wrong...and the relatives well...they just wana have fun of wtv is going on...sumtimes i wonder y our parents get so much affected by wat others r saying...coz all of us knw...that for them its just another drama...not like they really care!

he actually killed his own daughter just coz some shyty things others had to say? Just coz it hurt his male ego? I can't believe hw any1 can be this heartless. Not even a bit of regret or sorrow for wat he did? And the others were cheering n clapping? Whoa…cool….all these ppl do they even know wat they are dng? God ya Allah won't ever forgive such ppl…!! :|

Riddhima was lucky enough to be saved from this torture…all this can be changed…women can live their life the way they want to only if all women come together to fight against the injustice against them. They say na..god helps those who help themselves. Smile

And lastly…the way armaan supported her…took her out of the mess…was really touching…keep writing such beautiful one shots sani! Clap Clap Big smile

 

Loads of love!
take care!
aditi!

 

 



Edited by arlover_aditi - 28 December 2010 at 1:45am

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 1:47am | IP Logged

awesome os...........too good.....ClapClap
nd d concept is just fab....ClapClap
i hate dat  such things still happen in this
modern era..AngryDead
but i knw these things still happens.......Shocked
nd i so wnt to kill riddhima's dad.......Angry
i mean a father chopping his daughter's head n people are praising him...mentally sick people....
DeadConfused
Ouchrihana aka ridhima nd armaan love was like a fairy tale in ur os
........EmbarrassedTongue
sweeet n beautiful
............Tongue
i loved d the whole concept

n d way u wrote made it more amazing

just loved it...............Tongue

 
 
luv
jannat.........Embarrassed

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 1:51am | IP Logged
mindblowing update

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