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Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 (Page 20)

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
res! i told u i will comment!
*edited*
OMG this is well awesome!!!!
i love the entire concept bout forced marriage n escaping!woowww
i felt soo sorry for aliyah!all she wanted was to live a normal life n nt get married to a man double her age!im sure thts good enoguh reason n she had full right to hav those widhes! her death was just brutal! such a evil way to die!how cud a father do something like that?! to his own daughter aswellAngryjust for his reputation! i felt sorry for the mother she had to go through all tht watching the child she gave birth to,brought up die right in front of her eyes! its her own child i understand why she didnt kill her husband right then coz shes scared poor woman she cudnt even bury her daughter properly!Cry n riddhima OMG she just watchd her sister she grew up with die! then she has to marry the man her sister was gonna marry W*FAngryDead thts disgusting the man is such a pervert! urgghhhDead he was literally perving on her n threatening her OMG some pathetic guy!Angry
riddhimas very clever to escape like tht she thought of nearly everything to nt get caught! lol i lovd the way armaan woke her upLOL HAYYEE my armaan! where do i start with him??!!!Embarrassed well im nt gona go in to too much detail or i will go on wiv myselfTonguebut WOWWW!!! i love him!! hes such a flirt lol! wooww hes so caring he just met riddhima n he was travelling n helping her like he knew for ages how sweet!lol i lovd him irritating her along the way! wooww lovd the river scneEmbarrassed
awww lovd him caring for her n soothing her when she was crying!! how sweet!Smile
Thank God! her dad is arrested urghh i hate him!Angry i hope he gets punished for all he did! im glad tht riddhima free of all tht pain n so is her family :) finally her n armaan can be togetherBig smile
awww i loved their confession! it was soo adorable! i loved his line:
miss Riddhima who just got a new life. Will be my girlfriend? Then after a few years my wife? And then after a few years the mother of my kids and then after a few yea'
how sweet!
lol u ended the OS with a funny line!
loved it all Sani! wooww u r amazing at writing
do write some more AFETR u update yur ffs starting with Sinster loveTongueLOL
 


Edited by zARqaa_X - 09 June 2011 at 3:10pm

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
par kamino isse to mein kab ka update kar chuki. comment kab edit karoge?LOL sexy churel is a very impatient soul LOL

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sani_Rani

par kamino isse to mein kab ka update kar chuki. comment kab edit karoge?LOL sexy churel is a very impatient soul LOL
lol dont worry hum edit karenge when we get an update on ETH 2!LOL

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sani_Rani

par kamino isse to mein kab ka update kar chuki. comment kab edit karoge?LOL sexy churel is a very impatient soul LOL
We are impatient aswelll! sexy churail update kitna jaldi dti haina??ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL Yu make us wait, our turn now!ROFL ;D ;P
UPDATE THE ODR ONE ND SINISTR LUV FIRST!!!!ROFLROFLROFL
then we'll give yu big comments pakka!

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chocolatefreak

Originally posted by Sani_Rani

par kamino isse to mein kab ka update kar chuki. comment kab edit karoge?LOL sexy churel is a very impatient soul LOL
We are impatient aswelll! sexy churail update kitna jaldi dti haina??ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL Yu make us wait, our turn now!ROFL ;D ;P
UPDATE THE ODR ONE ND SINISTR LUV FIRST!!!!ROFLROFLROFL
then we'll give yu big comments pakka!
yeahh well done rida! its payback time!Evil Smile
oh n update my mr A n gmabled with our lives too! then we will think bout editing it!Big smileROFLROFL

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
great OS

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OK...

since i already told u tht i LOVE this OS
i was gonna just write a small comment like:
nice OS

haha..well, then i changed my mind
cuz u deserve better!!!
and i thought tht: wait yaar..saniya specifically told me to write LOOONG comments..so well imma try to EXPRESSS..my thoughts on this for u 

so imma still say tht it was a nice OS
but i m gonna add more to itLOL

anyways..
i read the whole thing jus right now..ONCE AGAIN!!
but seriously..cant stop loving it!!!

it has like a mixture of all emotions:
sad, funny, romantic,dramatic,

and yeah it was long..but sooo WHAT!!
the longer the better!!...
and it was jus FAB FAB FAB!!!!

i absolutely LOVE armaan in there
hes sooo sweet and caring!!

and Riddhima as well..or Rihana ..same thingLOL

i like how armaan would say something and then
riddhima would first come up with these hilarious answers in her her mind
and then end up CHANGING THE TOPICLOL

she thinks something else and then says something elseROFL
thts jus PERFECT!!!

and its sooo nice to see tht this is to bring awareness of all tht stuffSmile
cuz ur right!!..it does still happen!!

anywayz..

ughhh..i hated shanky and tht buddha 40 year old..
what ever his name was!!!LOL

but seriously!!!

this is my FAVORITE not ONE OF MY FAVS, but FAVORITE OS of alll time!!!

now i cant wait to read to read teh 2nd one..
so i guess i'll see u on that thread now!! heheLOL
well..once i comment...after readingLOL

see ya
Aashi <3

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