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Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 (Page 2)

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
Nice shot but I had one thing... I m from Pakistan but live in USA almost my whole life.. I visit pak every summer n i love it there... N I wouldn't say I would never see the face of my country... I mean no matter where we lived, we always pakis, Indian or whatever... Idk I m making or not... But I try to explain... But anyways really gud one shot n I always <3 armaan n riddihma...

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutie13

Nice shot but I had one thing... I m from Pakistan but live in USA almost my whole life.. I visit pak every summer n i love it there... N I wouldn't say I would never see the face of my country... I mean no matter where we lived, we always pakis, Indian or whatever... Idk I m making or not... But I try to explain... But anyways really gud one shot n I always <3 armaan n riddihma...
hi nope ur absolutely making sense.LOL bbz i had to write this shot from riddhima's POV and just imagine her situation aswell, i have red a lot in news about forced marriages and stuff and trust me they would never like to go to a place where they'd just been escaped after getting into a forced marriage. most of them couldn't escape untill it's too late and they get pregnant or something. 

so u know what i mean. that after getting so much abused and seeing her sister getting murdered she wouldn't like to go that same place.

man if you're asking me, i can never live without going to indiaLOL thanks for ur POV aswell. i appreciate itBig smile and thank you for ur replyEmbarrassed

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
@cutie13- hey i hope u didn't find my OS offending or anything. i am sorry if i hurted ur feelings.

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutie13

Nice shot but I had one thing... I m from Pakistan but live in USA almost my whole life.. I visit pak every summer n i love it there... N I wouldn't say I would never see the face of my country... I mean no matter where we lived, we always pakis, Indian or whatever... Idk I m making or not... But I try to explain... But anyways really gud one shot n I always <3 armaan n riddihma...


well nothing against u but all i want to say is that this is just a story and it doesn't mean that anyone will say like that. just relax and enjoy the story and u are right we all love our country and can never say like that in real. But just take it as a story and don't take anything wrong.

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaani <3
Baby-Gurl that was SUCH an awesome OS! I mean like yeah, this is SUCH a serious topic!
&& it SUCKS being the person in that situation or even being just a PART of it!
You did one HELL of a good job showing Riddhima's character, and her emotions were portrayed such Amazingly!
I Loooooooooove the way you wrote the story, the format, and the wordings!
 && juuuuuust gonna say: I CRIED when her dad cut her head off! I am NOT even kidding!
I saw myself with tears!
Seeeeee, that story touched me!
I think Armaan was HELLA cute in heere! && ii like the way he was sorta Bindaas in the beginning but then started caring for Riddhima just like THAT!
The ending was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO cute!
&& Prom! Goooooosh i've been reading about it SO much these days that ii can't for my Prom!
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeks :P !
ahahaha, anyways Kaminii!
I miss you SOOOOOO Damn MUCH!
&& you need to get your BUTT back onto Yahoo, or the CC or some PLACE where THIS gurl can talk to your Face!
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, && that's really all ii have to say!
You did an amazing JOB!
Oooooooooooooooooooooye meree liye ek OS likh naaa!
Agar haan hainaa tooh baata na!
I think we should write an FF together :D !
Chaaal, chalti hoon!
Taake Care Jaaan <33
MAWUHS (:
iloveyou !

-Jenny!


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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hunder

Originally posted by cutie13

Nice shot but I had one thing... I m from Pakistan but live in USA almost my whole life.. I visit pak every summer n i love it there... N I wouldn't say I would never see the face of my country... I mean no matter where we lived, we always pakis, Indian or whatever... Idk I m making or not... But I try to explain... But anyways really gud one shot n I always <3 armaan n riddihma...


well nothing against u but all i want to say is that this is just a story and it doesn't mean that anyone will say like that. just relax and enjoy the story and u are right we all love our country and can never say like that in real. But just take it as a story and don't take anything wrong.
BHAI CRITICISM IS ALWSYS WELCOMED. ANYWAYSI HAVE WRITTEN ON A TOVCHY TOPIC

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
amazing OS...

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