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Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 (Page 16)

punamluvshilpa Goldie
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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 10:37am | IP Logged
hey...nice ff ,totally different....and shayad tum nahi janti india mein bhi abhi bhi apne se 10-15 years older se saadi hoti hai....hope riddhima ka arman achcha ho.....burna reality mein koi arman nahi milta...anyways plz.cont after ur exam.....bye...
 
punam

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Hey .
This was awesome ... Very sensitive topic but handled so well. Yeah it's sad but true that the forced mrg and that too with a man double of your age is still happening now a days. when everybody talks about how the country should progress and do well , they forget to think about the people.

You wrote it very nicely  and i loved Arman in this story. The way he made Ridhima comfortable and then the story progress is mind blowing. The end was cute.. Hawwww He still didn't know her real name .. LOL

Keep writing ...

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sani_Rani

Originally posted by arlover_aditi

Originally posted by Sani_Rani

@aditi- am going to town now, so i'll reply to ur hot anger blasted comment after come homeLOL
looolllzzzz trying to get my wild wifey back just cracked me upROFL ur too good bbz. love u and mr a will be updated after exams. teeheeLOL
love
sani

lol sure thing...take ur own sweet time! apna kya hai...hum toh fokatiya hain! LOL
lol ty ty...! *bowing* LOL love u too sweetheart...!! n ya...give me a warning before kicking me outta here for giving stupid comments k? ....kya hai na....i need to be prepared for that! :P
loads of love!
take care!
aditi!
u know u cracked me up at the bus stop while i was reading this post thru my phone. my sister was like wat r u laughing at. muje jhoot bolna paraLOL
apni to jaise taise thori aisa ya waisa kat jayegi aapka kya hoga janabe aliWinkLOL

lol hahah...happens happens...u r lucky that ur sister was der with u....once i just cracked up reading sum1s msg on my cell....n i was standing alone...so obviously ppl started looking at me in a weird way! LOL i so wanted to scream "what?? cant u see m reading msgs? for heavens sake...m nt mad ya" LOL bt thn i just shut up...n started walking trying hard nt to laugh again! Tongue
hayye....humara kya hoga yeh toh khud bhagwaan bhi nahi jaante...toh hum aapko kaise batayein? WinkLOL

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Rockstar is back with a bang..
and wrote a LONG one shot..hmmm...impressive.. ;P
will be back to edit the comment.. :-D

Edited:

hey Rockstar you rock babeThumbs Up..so the subject is a sensitive issue about forceful marriage. I have not much information regarding this, so can't comment in detail but yes I enjoyed the love story as the backdrop very much. there was a cuteness, naughtiness and an innocence in Riddhima's character which I found very adorable. Poor Armaan still couldn't get her real name that was fun.LOL..  and this was followed by your touch of humor which made the love story quite entertaining..loved it..Big smile

thanks for the Pm and I hope your exams are going well..
do write more but don't forget about your FF's also..

Love Superstar..Smile




Edited by Caramel_21 - 02 January 2011 at 7:04am

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 11:48am | IP Logged
@mel- will be waiting to know ur opinion.Big smile

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 6:02am | IP Logged

Jaaannnaaaaaa *jhappiizzz*

soorrryyyyy , couldnt replied pehle *holding ears*
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AWESOME OS
WOOWWWWW
 
you know , i knew that famillies forced their children  to marry budhez ,
but never knew that they could behave like that with them, i mean he killed his daughter , just because she REFUSED to marry a KAMINA ?!
and W*H , he then walked proudly on her :@
i so so soooo wanted to burn him right there
 
Poor Rihana oooppsss sowwiizzz Riddhima , she such a BRAVVEEEEE kudi looveeeddd her a LOT
the way she escaped the "HELL" and then meeting her priinncee hayyyeeee that was <3
 
but i wont lie , i got heelll scared when , they came down from the truck, the budhez were infrount of them :O
i was like "OH NO !" but thankkkk GOD the bullet didnt touch her *sigh*
 
Armaan has been so so sooooo SWEET even the word sweet isnt enough to describ him, he has been reallyy brave, and PERFECT
the way he protected her, helped her, flirted with her LOL <3
 
SUPPEEERRRRRBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB
and then the sho sho shooooooooo awesome and hatke confessionn <3
 
OUTSTANDIIIINNGGGGGGGGG OS <3
 
*bahut sarrrii jhapppiiizzzzz*
 
done maine comment karliya ab to maaff kar sakti ho na ?! ^^
 
par jana seriously that was the BEST OS everrrr <3 <3
 
Love, Nina ^^
 
oyyeee anddd
H A P P Y   N E W  Y E A R
GOD bless you a lot
and may this new year brings you a lot of Happpiinnneeesssss and peace ^^

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
comment edited above

sorry for such a late reply.. :-)

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 5:12pm | IP Logged
Ssssaaaaaannnnnniiiiii Jaaaannn!!!

WHAAAAAAOOOOOO WWHHHAAAAAOOOO WHAAAAOOO dude chill with the amazing one shots now will ya?? Lykkee jeez everytime I frikkin read ur work i end up with yhe stoopidest smile ever and then cursing my self about howw stoopid I was for thinking I can actuaalyyy use the word awesome for u coz thats the worlds Largest understatement ever!!! Immaa mean i dont even noe if that even frikkin makes sense but all imma trying to sayy is that I totallllyyy amazing loved it! Immaa mean i donno if my opinion even matters but who yhe heck caresss??? All I noe is that ur amazing and beautiful from inside out!! N ur one shots are aabsolutely FANTASTIC!! n ily!!

Jinszzuuu!!

P. S. Sorry for short comment but my vocab list is short!!!

P. S. S. Who is this ALI ????
I wannnnaaa noe!!!!!!!!! Dude I want like fulll story!!

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