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Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 (Page 11)

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
Amazing

i can't believe the father actually killed hi 16 year daughter


thanx 4 the pm

update soon


Kamal

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kamal_23

Amazing

i can't believe the father actually killed hi 16 year daughter


thanx 4 the pm

update soon


Kamal
you know am so glad that first time u wrote something diff on ur commentsBig smile
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
ek dum bindass 

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 6:20am | IP Logged
oyehoyye killer OS
Wen i started reading i was lyk itne emotional itne sad OS YEH sani hi writer hai kya i was expecting koi comedy type hogi isko kya hua yaar i was abt to quit then i thought ammy ki entry tak dekhte hu then came sTUPID MORON KHOTA ur signature
Awesummm os dear

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zara-20k

oyehoyye killer OS
Wen i started reading i was lyk itne emotional itne sad OS YEH sani hi writer hai kya i was expecting koi comedy type hogi isko kya hua yaar i was abt to quit then i thought ammy ki entry tak dekhte hu then came sTUPID MORON KHOTA ur signature
Awesummm os dear
oye hoye sani par bharosa to rakhti yaarLOL well jab mein kuch serious topic par likhne behti hu tab i so get into it but u know as am sani and couldn't help but put some stupid moron in it.LOL
par os acha laga naWinkLOL
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:22am | IP Logged
wow!!! the way you managed to pen down the rainbow of emotions makes the essence of this oneshot... kudos hun :) i dunno bout anyone else.. but the bits of hindi/urdu dialogues that armaan spoke somehow pulled his whole character together for me... kudos for attempting such a sensitive topic as well.. hope to read more of it soon :D
exams after hols? snap.. me too.. u wrote this while revising for bio... m reading it while revising for chem... haha... :P 
good luck n hope to read more after u finish with exams :D 
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:24am | IP Logged
hey dear
awesome one shot
very well written
loved it
do write more
take care and thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Fighting wid exmaz
but read it coz cudnt control!
gimme some time i'll surely update ma commentLOLLOL

You wrote it superb
THUMBS UP

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