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Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 (Page 11)

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
ek dum bindass 

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 6:20am | IP Logged
oyehoyye killer OS
Wen i started reading i was lyk itne emotional itne sad OS YEH sani hi writer hai kya i was expecting koi comedy type hogi isko kya hua yaar i was abt to quit then i thought ammy ki entry tak dekhte hu then came sTUPID MORON KHOTA ur signature
Awesummm os dear

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zara-20k

oyehoyye killer OS
Wen i started reading i was lyk itne emotional itne sad OS YEH sani hi writer hai kya i was expecting koi comedy type hogi isko kya hua yaar i was abt to quit then i thought ammy ki entry tak dekhte hu then came sTUPID MORON KHOTA ur signature
Awesummm os dear
oye hoye sani par bharosa to rakhti yaarLOL well jab mein kuch serious topic par likhne behti hu tab i so get into it but u know as am sani and couldn't help but put some stupid moron in it.LOL
par os acha laga naWinkLOL
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:22am | IP Logged
wow!!! the way you managed to pen down the rainbow of emotions makes the essence of this oneshot... kudos hun :) i dunno bout anyone else.. but the bits of hindi/urdu dialogues that armaan spoke somehow pulled his whole character together for me... kudos for attempting such a sensitive topic as well.. hope to read more of it soon :D
exams after hols? snap.. me too.. u wrote this while revising for bio... m reading it while revising for chem... haha... :P 
good luck n hope to read more after u finish with exams :D 
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:24am | IP Logged
hey dear
awesome one shot
very well written
loved it
do write more
take care and thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Fighting wid exmaz
but read it coz cudnt control!
gimme some time i'll surely update ma commentLOLLOL

You wrote it superb
THUMBS UP

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:57am | IP Logged
aww u guys are all so sweet. aankho mein aansu aa gaye mere toLOL

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 9:05am | IP Logged
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hey dr sani basket rani Wink....first tell me KAHAN GAIB THEI.Angry.....
missed u nd ur FF....OS.Cry...
now  to ur OSTongue ......
hmmmm.......kya kahoonConfused .....really nice nd sweet story with a very sensitive bakground ......
yea dis used to happn ...still happns bt ppl r gettng awareness ...
..TRUTH IS ALWAYS BITTER ....may be ppl do get offended ....nd dis is nt only da case in pakistan ...bt in india bangla desh too ..im pakistani my self.....nd im okie with dis OS becuz i  kno abt dark side of our society
basically  problm wid dis mind set is dat ..... they seem to change outwardly....moving in a good society .....developing  kno how of how act as a civilized person ....bt they wat they cant change is dre mental state ....da rural ..nd fuedlistic  upbringing jst penetrates in dre soul ...nd no matter how modern dey become ...they cant leave it behind....
DAUGHTER ARE PRIZED POSSESSIONS.....bt they are not tobe  thrown away nd treated like sm usesless ..lifeless  being .....
bt sad thng is ....even now dey are bartered.....
OYE STOP ME ......i can go on nd on .....LOL
loved loved loved it ......really nice
started off on a serious note .....nd i was checkng nd re chnkng ....if its really written by u ....SANI KYUN ITNNI SERious hoo rehhi hai ....kya hoo gaya hai ....
bt then SSG perh kar sakoon aya ....sani is okie alright ...nothng happened....
ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap.........
MAY ALLAH BELSS U MORE .....keep spreading happiness
 
 


Edited by diyaa1pk - 29 December 2010 at 1:34pm

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