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Escaping the hell (AR OS) DT NOTE: Page 22 (Page 10)

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 10:01am | IP Logged
W-O-W!  That was awesome!  God!  I almost cried reading the beginning when Riddhima's dad slit Aliya's throat.  That was so freakin' wrong!  How can they even think about getting their 15/16 year old daughters married to men doubled their age?  That's so freakin' wrong!  They should be punished.  I felt really bad for Riddhima when she met that 40 year old budha.  I literally started to vomit when I read that part.  Those men have serious issues.  Armaan is always a life savior.  Loved their encounter and the way Armaan flirted with her.  Riddhima's thoughts were cherry on top.  Did Riddhima ever tell Armaan that her name is Rihana?  LOL.  Poor guy is quite desperate to know her name, isn't he?  LOL.  I liked the ending very much.  Riddhima is a dumbo.  Could she really not tell that Armaan loves her?  God!  She's slow.  Anyways, thanks for the PM.  And madam, aapko apne FFs yaad hain na?  Sinister Love (which I want to be updated right now), My Mr. A, We Gambled With Our Dead Lives?  Inn ko update kab karogi?

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 10:18am | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwww
my dear sexy churel
i just love u for this one
have no words
its beautiful
sachi mein
thanks a ton for the pm

love
pooja

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StinsonIsHere IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sani_Rani

Originally posted by kajen

i can't believe such things still happen in this modern era

i mean a fatehr chopping his daughter's head n people are praising him
its gross
i felt really bad after reading about aliyah's death n rihana aka ridhima tale was like a fairy tale
sweeet n lovy dovy
i loved d the whole concept
n d way u wrote made it more amazing
just loved it
 
 
 
luv
aarti
 
 
p.s-even i want a dictionary like ridhima to praise u LOL
okay ur comment made me laugh then blush.EmbarrassedLOL
yeah that father chopping daughter's head story is true. so stuff like that do happen. seriously it's gross but some people just follow their customs in the name of religion.Angry
haha the love story was quite lovey dovy

about the dictionary, that was so sweet of u man. love u
love
sani
no actually its true i  now really neesd a dictionary coz d writers here
are writing amazingly beautiful things n i m lagging words LOLLOL
 
 
y did u blushConfused
 
i think u deserve al d applauseClap
 
 
luv
aarti

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 10:51am | IP Logged
A very nice OS.
I feel so bad for Aliyah.Such a heartless father.
I really loved the way AR met and their journey began.
I loved this OS a lot.
Very well written.Well done.
Plz come up with more ffs in future.
love Asma

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Great job!! Smile
fantastic update! 
thanks for the pm!! Smile
~Alisha~

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anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 3:04pm | IP Logged

that was simply awsum.....

loved the way u wrote........

fantastic...

n its a fact...in remote areas of...not only in pakistan...its in india as well...n i guess more then pak its common practice in india....... "no offensive guys...a simple fact...im indian myself......but its true..."

n it should be stopped.........

just loved it.........

beautiful end.........

thnx for the pm........



Edited by anumeha_rajat - 28 December 2010 at 3:27pm

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 3:17pm | IP Logged

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G

You write such a fabulous OS and then keep your expectations high for a long comment. Which world do you come from, ma'am? Seriously girl, I am beyond speechless. I don't have the perfect words to say what message this OS has spread out. I have like so much to comment about but words just fall short to explain them. Twinzy firstly I am super surprised to see a pm related to your OS waiting for me in my in-box because I really didn't expect you to write one until January. Is this my New Year gift? (It better beLOL).

Anyways, coming back to the OS. Hun, not only have you written an OS this time but as well spread out a message to all. I don't understand why it seemed to you that it could be racist - Because it's not at all. I feel really sorry to know that these sort of inhuman tortures still exist but no wonder it is a bitter truth. It definitely is a very touchy topic but yet you have written it so genuinely - you are for sure a very talented writer. You started the OS with such a topic that could have ended up hurting people if not written in a proper way but when I read your writing I must say that it has been written perfectly. Not only have you spread a nice message out there to people but as well proved that if people choose the right track, some life can as well end in a fairytale. Yes, it was no less than a fairytale.

Remember while chatting, you weren't sure if you ended the story well and you wanted to know what I thought about it? Twinzy, I believe this was a wonderful ending. 

I love your writing skills but I love you more TongueHeart


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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
Nice OS....loved the way u describe everything ...

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