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AbHer OS: Anniversary Special -Updated on Page 1

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 3:03pm | IP Logged

Hello everyoneHug

Today is the very first anniversary of our beloved show "Yeh Pyar Na Hoga Kam"PartyDancing.And its a matter of great joy for all of us.So on this very special occasion I thought of giving a small gift to my lovely family.

 
I am, therefore, making an attempt to write an OS on AbHer for the first timeEmbarrassed. My hands were shaking while writing it as our great OS/FF writers have created such master-pieces that this little effort of mine seems to be very insignificant in front of them. Still I hope you guys like it for when it comes to AbHer we can like anythingEmbarrassed.Your honest comments are welcomeBig smile.
 
 
Well I am making certain changes in the story.The backdrope is that AbHer are residing in VP house.Dadi brought them home after marriage so that she could make conspiracies against Leher(I am removing Bua-Alok-Surili from the story). Dadi used her evil tricks on Leher but she atlast won TN's heart(CVs totally spoiled his character but I am assuming him the old TN who was somewhat strict but nice at heart).Although
Dadi didn't accept Leher wholeheartedly yet she had to stop her evil plans against her because of TN.The Mathurs also forgave AbHer & they both are leading a happy life now.
 
 
Scene 1
 
 
So the scene is that Leher is going to her mayka for some days. She is getting ready in her room.Suddenly she sees Abeer's reflection in the mirror. He is looking at her & seems to be upset. She knew why he was sad.
 
Leher:  "kya hua Abeer?"
 
Abeer:  "Tum sach mein ja rahi ho?" (he sounds sad)
 
Leher:   "Nahi hum toh yun hi mazak kar rahe the"
 
Abeer:   "SACH!!!" (he becomes happy for a moment)
 
Leher:   "Abeer.....tum bhi na....itne dino se tumhe pata hai ki hum apne ghar jane wale hain toh phir aaj theek jate waqt hi yeh sawal kyun puchh rahe ho?"
 
Abeer:  (whining like a child)  "Mat jao na humein chod ke"
 
Leher:  (she couldn't resist smiling at this & moves towards him)   "Kya bachchon ki tarah behave kar rahe ho.....bas kuch hi dino ke liye toh ja rahe hain hum."
 
Abeer:  "Kitne dino ke liye?"
 
Leher:   "aa...yahi koi 15-20 dino ke liye"
 
Abeer:  (shocked) "15-20 dino ke liye???.....tumhara dimag toh theek hai.....hum toh mar jayenge itne dino mein"
 
Leher:   "Abeer.....tumhe pata hai shadi ke baad ladkiyan apne mayke ek-ek mahine ke liye jaati hain...hum toh phir bhi sirf 15-20 dino ke liye ja rahe hain"
 
Abeer:   "Haan toh aisa wahi ladkiyan kartin hain jo apne patiyon se bilkul pyar nahi kartin aur unke pati bhi nahi karte isiliye toh chod dete hain ek mahine ke liye mayke mein" 
 
Leher:  "Aisa sirf tumhe lagta hai Abeer.....tum samajh kyun nahi rahe....itne dino ke baad toh sab theek hua hai aur shadi ke baad hum pahli baar apne ghar ja rahe hain....maa papa kitni basabri se humara intzaar kar rahe honge....aur phir tumhare sath to humein zindigi bhar rehna hai to kya kuch din hum apne maa-papa ke saath nahi rah sakte?..."
 
Abeer:  "Ab tum humein emotionally blackmail kar rahi ho....hum samajhte hain Leher ki tumhari kitni ichchha hogi apne maa-papa ke saath rehne ki....par hum kya karein....shadi ke baad kabhi tumse door nahi rahe....yeh pehli baar hai ke tum humse door ja rahi ho"
 
Leher:   "Are..toh kaun sa London ja rahe hain hum....bagal mein hi toh ja rahe hain na"
 
Abeer:  "Haan...bagal mein hi toh ja rahe hain na (imitating her).....keh toh aise rahi ho jaise hum sara din tumhare ghar ke bahar khade rahenge ke kab madam balcony mein aayein aur kab hum unka deedaar kerein"
 
Leher:   "Haan...tum chaho to aisa kar sakte ho" (she says naughtily)
 
Abeer:   "Mazak mat karo Leher....are kum se kum pehle to chhat pe hi mil lete the par ab to woh bhi nahi kar sakte....kambakhat deewar jo khadi ho gayi hai dono chhaton ke beech mein"(angrily)........ek second (in a thoughtful mood)....deewar toh hatayi bhi ja sakti hai na"
 
Leher:  "Kya matlab?"
 
Abeer:  "Matlab saaf hai Leher....hum samjhate hain...dekho woh deewar kyun khadi ki gayi thi...isiliye na ki dono pariwaron ke beech dushmani thi par ab toh sab theek ho gaya hai na toh phir iss deewar ki kya zarurat?...hum aaj hi do premiyon ko juda karne wali iss deewar ka naamo-nishan mita dete hain"
 
Leher:  "Abeer tum pagal ho gaye ho kya....aaj hi hum mayke ja rahe hain aur tum ho ki....sab samajh jayenge ki tum deewar kyun hatwa rahe ho"
 
Abeer:  "Haan toh samajh jane do na"
 
Leher:  "Abeer pagal mat bano....Maa,Bauji,Dadi sab kya sochenge humare baare mein..."
 
Abeer:  "Yahi ke unka lalla kitna chahta hai unki bahu ko (he winks)"Wink
 
Leher:   "Abeer har waqt mazak achha nahi lagta"
 
Abeer:   "Hum mazak nahi kar rahe Leher...tum itna kyun sochti ho...are sab ko pata hai ke shadi se pehle hum dono chhat pe chhup-chhup ke mila karte the...aur ab to humari shadi ho gayi hai...jab hum dono ki sasural pados mein hi hai toh isska fayda uthane ka poora haqk hai humein"
 
Leher:   "Abeer....tum aisa kuch nahi karoge"
 
Abeer:   "Hum bilkul aisa hi karenge....kya ho jata hai tumhe kabhi-kabhi(in an irritating voice)...ek toh tum humse door ja rahi ho aur jab hum iss judai ko thoda kam karna chahte hain toh tumhe usmein bhi problem hai...tum bilkul bhi pyar nahi karti humein(he pretends to be upset)"
 
Seeing him upset Leher moves forward & encircles her arms around him.Embarrassed
 
Leher:  "Naraz ho gaye humse?....achha baba theek hai tumhe jo karna hai kar lena"
 
Abeer:  "Sach!!! (he has a huge smile on his face)"
 
Leher:   "Haan sach....magar jo bhi karna hai humare jane ke baad hi karna"
 
Abeer:   "Tum uski chinta mat karo...hum tumhare jane ke baad hi karenge"
 
They both hug.He kisses her on the cheeks & she gets shy.Embarrassed
 
Leher:  "Achha suno apna khayal rakhna...khana time pe khana aur..."(he cuts her short)
 
Abeer:  "Tumhe ye sab kehne ki zarurat nahi hai Leher...hum milemge na roz raat ko chhat pe...tabhi puchh lena ke humne khanna time pe khaya ki nahi"
 
Leher:   "(blushing) tum bhi na"
 
Then they both leave for Mathur house.
 
 
Scene 2
 
Abeer returns from Mathur house. TN & Sudha were having tea. He walks to them.
 
TN:  "Are lalla...chod aye bahu ko?"
 
Abeer:  "Ji bauji"
 
Sudha:  "Chai piyoge lalla.."
 
Abeer:  "Nahi amma...hum peekar aye hain"
 
TN seems to be in a good mood & Abeer didn't want to miss this chance.
 
Abeer:  (Hesitantly) "aa...bauji....hum apse kuch baat karna chah rahe the"
 
TN:  "Bolo"
 
Abeer:  "Bauji...aa...woh darasal...hum soch rahe the ke upar chhat pe jo deewar kahdi ki gayi thi dono gharon ke beech mein...kyun na hum use girwa dein"
 
TN turns his eyes towards Sudha & smiles slowly.Sudha does the same. He, then, pretends to be serious.
 
TN:  "Kya baat hai lalla...aaj achanak tumhe uss deewar ko girane ki kyun sujhi?"
 
Abeer:  "Nahi bauji..hum to kaafi dino se soch rahe the ke ab jab dono gharon ke beech dushmani hi nahi rahi to deewar ki kya zarurat...par humein fursat hi nahi mil rahi thi"
 
TN:  "Haan...hum toh bhul gaye the ke tumhe aaj hi fursat mili hai" (he speaks slowly)
 
Abeer:  "Ja...ji...kuch kaha apne???"
 
TN:   "Nahi nahi kuch nahi"
 
Abeer:  "toh phir (looking at Sudha)....hum aaj hi baanke se keh ke girwa dein deewar?"
 
TN:   "Theek hai lalla...ab jab tum ne soch hi liya hai to karwa hi do ye kaam"
 
Abeer:  "Theek hai bauji...hum chalte hain phir" (he becomes super duper happy & goes from there addressing Baanke)
 
TN:  "Panditayan....hum sab jante hain ke yeh tumhara lalla kyun deewar hatwane ki baat kar raha tha"
 
Sudha:  "Jaane dijiye na...ye hi toh umar hai bachchon ki yeh sab karne ki"
 
TN:   "Woh toh hum jante hain par ek baat apne lalla ko samjha dena....sardiyan shuru ho gayin hain....raat ko chhat pe thand hoti hai....bahu se keh dena ke kuch garam kapde pehan ke aaye chhat pe"
 
Sudha:    (Smiling) "Theek hai hum keh denge" 
 
Later on Baanke calls some labourers & the wall is removed. Abeer calls up Leher & asks her to come to the roof in the night when he gives her a missed call.She agrees.
 
 
Scene 3(Chhat Pe Mulaqat): coming soonEmbarrassed


Edited by AbHer_neha - 29 December 2010 at 5:23am

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
NEHAAAAA  Hug.....thank uuuuu my beti.....just what i needed today.....was feeling so low......missing YPNHk and AbHer badly......your OS made me all Big smile.......it was awwwwesome  Day Dreaming......love Abeer in his lovable Lalla mode.....can so imagine this scene......waiting for the upcoming chhat scene.....plzzzzz update soon  Smile





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Neha....I loved it....Really brought back a lot of memories...Thanks a lot....It was wonderful..



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wowwww neha....dat's wonderful...loved all of abeer and leher talk abt chath...thanks for dis gift om my most beautiful...i'll always remember dis day for whole of my lyf....missing YPNHK/ABHER/YARAV...thanks for dis os neha...waiting for part3....!

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Awww Neha !!!! Your First Attempt was Brilliant ....Thumbs Up
Just Loved it totally.... Brought back those memories....Heart Imagining how Abeer would speak... with those expressions and hand movements from GK ! awwwDay Dreaming Or How Leher would react... Scene with TN and Sudha .... really cute !

My Fav. line from the two scenes was..

jab hum dono ki sasural pados mein hi hai toh isska fayda uthane ka poora haqk hai humein"

Hahaha ! LOLLOL So Cute !

Do Update soon.Big smile

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Thank a lot guys for all your encouragementHug.....so here is Scene 3 

Scene 3
 
In the night when everyone falls asleep Abeer gives a missed call to Leher.He was already on the chhat & was eagerly waiting for Leher.Within few minutes she enters the roof. She gets surprised for a while as there was no wall between both the chhats.
Her memories take her to olden days when they both used to meet on the roof. While her thoughts are conjuring up the images of those sweet days she is interrupted by Abeer.
 
Abeer:   "Kya hua Leher...kahan kho gayin?"
 
Leher:  (She smiles)  "Kuch nahi....aaj itne dino ke baad bina deewar ke dono chhaton ko dekh rahe hain to purane dino ki yaad agayi"
 
Abeer:   "Sahi kaha tumne....aaj hum bhi bahut dino ke baad tumse aise mil rahe hain....last time kab mile the hum yahan?"
 
Leher:  "Jab woh dilkhush garden wala incident hua tha"
 
Abeer:  "Haan..aur tum kitna udaas thi uss din....iss chhat ne kitna kuch dekha hai na....humare pyar ki gavaah rahi hai yeh chhat....are kya hua" (he sees Leher shivering in cold)
 
Leher:  "Bohat thand hai na Abeer"
 
Abeer:  "Ab jab tum garam kapde pehan kar nahi aogi toh thand to lagegi na...hum jante the ke tum aisa hi karogi...ruko ek minute (he gives her a shawl)...yeh lo odhlo isse"
 
Leher:  "So sweet of you Abeer (she takes the shawl)....are yeh toh kuch jaana pehchana sa lag raha hai"
 
Abeer:  "Lag toh humein bhi raha hai...jara dhyan se dekho"
 
Leher:   (looking at the shawl carefully) "Abeer...yeh toh wahi shawl hai na jo tumne hume tab diya tha jab hum dono ko saari raat chhat pe guzarni padi thi...Rashmi ki shadi mein"
 
Abeer:  "Bilkul sahi pehchana apne...yeh wahi shawl hai...yaad hai na woh raat tumhe..kitni mazedaar thi na"
 
Leher:  "Mazedaar!!...humari liye toh tension wali raat thi"
 
Abeer:  "Leher hum dono ki kismat kitni kharab thi na...jab saari raat hum dono ne chhat pe bitayi tab humare beech aisa kuch nahi tha na...agar hota toh raat aur bhi mazedaar ho jati...hai na" (he grins)
 
Leher:  (blushing at this) "Bas yahi sab sochte rehte ho tum (she covers her with the shawl)...yeh sardiyon ka mausam hume isiliye achha nahi lagta...kitni thand ho gayi hai na"
 
Abeer:  "Lekin hume toh yeh mausam bahut achha lagta hai...jaanti ho kyun"
 
Leher:  "Kyun?"
 
Abeer:  "Kyunki inhi sardiyon mein toh tum humse milin thi Leher"
 
Once again she recalls the last winter season when she shifted to Lucknow & met Abeer. The thought brings a sweet smile on her face
 
Abeer:  "Achha Leher yeh batao ki aaj date kya hai"
 
Leher:  "Aaj (after thinking)....29th hai na"
 
Abeer:  "Aur mahina kaunsa hai?"
 
Leher:  "December"
 
Abeer:  "29th December...kuch yaad aya?"
 
Leher:   "Aaj kya hai?" (confused)
 
Abeer:  "Bhul gayi na tum...hum yaad dilate hain....aaj se theek ek saal pehle aaj hi ke din hum dono issi chhat pe pehli baar mile the"
 
She is reminded of that day when she saw Abeer on the chhat for the first time.Suddenly the AbHer tune begins to play in the background & they both look at each-other smiling....remembering their first meeting.They were lost in each-other.
 
Leher:   "Abeer" (she breaks the silence)....tumhe yaad tha aaj ka din"
 
Abeer:  "Woh din humari zindigi ka sabse khushgawar din tha...usse kaise bhul sakte hain hum...aur aaj ussi din ki pehli saalgirah hai jise hum tumhare saath celebrate karna chahte the....tumhe pata hai humne tumhare liye ek surprize plan kiya hai aaj"
 
Leher:  "Surprise!!"
 
Abeer:  "Haan lekin uske liye tumhe humare saath uss kamre mein chalna hoga (he indicates towards his chhat wala room)
 

Leher:  "Nahi Abeer hum wahan nahi ja sakte agar kisi ne dekh liya toh"

 

Abeer:  "Are kaun dekhega itni raat ko sab so chuke hain"

 

Leher:  "Abeer agar kisi ko pata chal gaya toh sach mein bahut buri insult ho jayegi humari"

 

Abeer:  "Leher...koi insult nahi hogi...are woh humara kamra hai...hum apne kamre mein hi toh ja rahe hain"

 

Leher:  "Lekin hum iss waqt apne mayke mein hain"

 

Abeer:  "Leher...tum phir shuru ho gayin....are itna toh tum shadi ke pehle nahi dartin thin jitna ab darne lagi ho....dekho Leher jo surprize humne tumhare liye plan kiya hai uska kya hoga...plz chalo na....koi nahi dekhega"

 

Leher:  "Tum hume marwaye bina manoge nahin....theek hai chalo" (she had to agree)

 

Hum abhi hazir hote hain ek chhote se break ke baad
"Kit Kat break banta hai" LOL
 
 


Edited by AbHer_neha - 29 December 2010 at 5:10am

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Welcome back after the breakBig smile
 
 
Scene 3 continued
 

They both move towards the room.When Leher is about to open the door, Abeer stops her. 

 
Abeer:  "Leher ruko....pehle apni aankhein to band karo....varna surprize ka maza kharab ho jayega" 
 

She closes her eyes & he takes her into the room.Abeer asks her to open the eyes.To her surprise the room was well decorated with flowers & candles.It was really a pleasent surprise for her. 

 
Leher:  "Abeer....(she looks around)....yeh sab kya hai....tumne kiya yeh?" 
 

Abeer:  "Aur kaun karega...yeh room humne apne haathon se sajaya hai tumhare liye....kaisa laga humara surprise" 

 
Leher:  "Hum bata nahi sakte ke hum kitne khush hain Abeer (she had no words to express her happines)....humne socha nahi tha ke tum kuch aisa bhi kar sakte ho" 
 

Abeer:  "Humara naam Abeer Vajpayee hai...log jo soch bhi nahi sakte wo hum kar dete hain (he says proudly)....waise tumhe pasand aya na" 

 
Leher:  "Bahut pasand aya"
 

Abeer:  "Ek surprize aur hai Leher" 

 
Leher:  "Ek aur surprise...kya" 
 

Abeer:  "Pehle tum yahan toh baitho...(he makes her sit on the footend of the bed)...aur apni aankhein dubara band karo" 

 
When she closes her eyes he takes out a payal from his pocket.
 

Abeer:  "Ab apni aankhein kholo"

 
Leher:  (she opens her eyes & becomes surprised agin) "Abeer...yeh toh humari payal hai...yeh tumhare pass kahan se ayi...ye toh kho gayi thi" 
 

Abeer:  "Achha...kab khoyi thi?...kahin uss din toh nahi jab tumne apne chacha ke ghar shift kiya tha" (naughtly)

 
Leher:  "Haan...par tumhe kaise mili ye payal"
 

Abeer:  "Jab tum truck se saamaan unload karwa rahin thin tab humne tumhein dekha...hum tumhara chehra toh nahi dekh paye par tumhari kaali ghani zulfein aur tumhari meethi awaz ne hume apna deewana bana diya...tabhi tumne awaz lagayi - "Zara haath lagana toh".....bas phir hum kyun peeche rahte humne saamaan uthane mein tumhari madat ki...saamaan uthate waqt humne bahut koshish ki ke tumhara chehra dekh lein...par nahi dkh paye...socha saamaan rakhne ke baad hum tumhein dekhenge par tum kab chali gayi pata hi nahi chala...lekin apni ek nishani chod gayi...bas tabhi se yeh nishani humare paas hai"

 
Leher:  (having a huge smile on her face)  "Toh tum pehle din se humare peeche lage the"
 

Abeer:  "Bilkul...bahut papad bele humne...tumhara dil toh bahut baad mein aya hum pe"

 
Leher:  "Aisa nahi hai Abeer...jab humne tumhe pehli baar dekha tha tab humein bhi kuch kuch hua tha (she bends her eyes with shyness)..par kya karein chachi ne tumhari itni taarif ki humse ki humne socha ki tumse door rehna hi bhala (she laughs)...lekin aakhir mein hum apne dil ke haathon mazboor ho gaye"
 

Abeer:  "Aai hai kya baat hai (he becomes super happy)....achha woh sab chodo....ye batao ki humne tumhare liya itna sab kiya tum humare liye kuch nahi karogi"

 
Leher:  "Kya karein bolo"  (she says sweetly)
 

Abeer: "Ek gaana ga do humare liye"

 
Leher:  "Kya...gaana....itni raat ko...koi sun lega"
 

Abeer:  "Koi nahi sunega...darwaza band hai awaz bahar nahi jayegi"

 
Leher:  "Par...."
 

Abeer:  "Par war kuch nahi (cutting her short)...dekho humne bhi to suhagraat wale din gaya tha gaana aur hum to kitna besura gaate hain tum to itna meetha gaati ho...plz ga do na ek gana humare liye"

 
Leher:  "Achha theek hai....par kaunsa gaana gayein?"
 

Abeer:  "Koi bhi jo tum humein dedicate karna chaho"

 
Leher:  "Jo tumhe dedicate karna chahein" (she raises her eyebrows)....hmmm (she thinks for a moment)....soch liya kaun sa gana gana hai"
 

She stands up, walks over & starts singing looking at him lovingly-

 
"Agar tum mil jao....zamana chod denge hum...

Tumhe pakar zamane bhar se rishta tod denge hum...

Agar tum mil jao...." 

 
 
Abeer walks up to her smiling.She entwines her fingers with him -
 

"Bina tere koi dilkash nazara hum na dekhenge

Tumhe na ho pasand usko dubara hum na dekhenge

Teri surat na ho jismein woh sheesha tod denge hum

Agar tum mil jao...."

 

She then rests her head on his chest & sings this stanza-

 

"Tere dil mein rahenge tujhko apna ghar bana lenge

Tere khwabon ko gahnon ki tarah khud par saja lenge

Khuda se bhi na jo tute woh rishta jod lenge hum agar tum..."

 

 
 

By the time she finishes the song & looks up to Abeer, she finds tears in his eyes.

 

Leher:  "Kya hua Abeer...tum ro rahe ho"

 
Abeer:  "Kuch nahi Leher....bas yun hin...tumhe pata hai Leher ki ek pyar karne wale ko sabse jyada khushi kab milti hai...jab use yeh pata chalta hai ki jise woh itna chahta hai woh insaan bhi use utna hi pyar karta hai....hum bas yahi chahte hain Leher ki tum humsha humein itna hi pyar karti raho"
 

Leher:  "Yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai" (she wipes his tears)..."Hum humesha apne jaanu ko aise hi pyar karenge...muah (she kisses him on the cheeks)"Embarrassed

 
Abeer holds her tightly, rubs his cheeks against hers & begins to kiss on her face passionately.Blushing
 

Leher:  "Chodo Abeer....ab jane do humein bahut der ho gayi hai" (she tries to make herself free from his grip)

 
Abeer:  "Nahi Leher abhi mat jao....kuch der ke liye tum yeh bhul jao ke tumhe wapas jaana hai...bas itna yaad rakho ke iss waqt iss kamre mein sirf tum ho, hum hain aur yeh khobsoorat si tanhayi....sirf iss ek pal ke liye ruk jao warna ye pal hath se nikal jayega"
 

Leher couldn't deny him. She wraps her arms around his neck.He puts his hands on her waist & starts caressing it.She feels a tingle of excitement at his touch. He makes his grip more tight & moves his face close to her.Their lips were just inches apart now......you can imagine what would have happened next WinkBlushing

 

Thanks for reading it.I know it was too long but I always wished for a long romantic scene between AbHer. So its just a result of that.LOL It could be much much better if it would have been written by any of our OS/FF writers, still hope you guys enjoyed it. Plz do leave your comments.

 

 



Edited by AbHer_neha - 29 December 2010 at 8:42am

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 5:49am | IP Logged

neha dis scene 3 was d best of other 2...i could imgaine abeer and leher in it....if d show comes back...den i would want to see dis scene on TV....performed by gaurav khanna and yami gautam.....!

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