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Dont Let Me Go . A R || PART 9 PG 90 || 20/June (Page 44)

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tzahra

Cutest part was between Armaan n Khushi hehehe Ridz is her didi ooh how embarassing but now i knw y were u asking for the dialogues hehe sweet dat u used those dialogues in ur ff which are hell superb dialogues love it

ooh y is Ridz being called Khushi hehe he was asking for her name and she was telling him her name i mean Rdz name LOL dat scene was really funny

Do continue the next part soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz thanx for the pm.
Hehehe thaanks u get it now oh god i thought i said it earlier too that i cnt continue any further without the dialouges.. n u knw wat i did? next morning found the scene and went on word to word n wrote it lol..
 
u will seeeeeeeeeeeeeee dnt worry too much over it ur little brain cnt take all that.. n wait till i update.. lolz
 
thanks will see mayb as soon as mahu comment will update the next part :P tc

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
res...

will comment soon
i promise =)
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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Monu_

res...

will comment soon
i promise =)
Monu u better do!!!
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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 7:25am | IP Logged
nice part
luvd it

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by krazzy4armaan

nice part
luvd it
Thank u soo much!
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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged
im late i know , soooowwiizzzzzzzz
acha so part 2 and 3 are like WOOOWWW
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part2

I just loveee the way he was and she was also affecting him/her :P
sooo cuutteee, and arrghhh yeh Vicky bhi naa abhi ana tha kia issey bhi :(, lol i loovveed shona's reaction at this as well , poor girl

Sam/Riddz are just adooorraabblleeeee

i was like ROFL when riddz said "but i hate you" to vicky LOL
that was tooo gooodddd ;P

ooohh yaa what did abhi meant by not to far ?! lol and like she said she is not a gum ROFL

part3

Awww so so sooooo cuuttee jana my fav scene "the bohot bohoott khubsuraat" awwww <3
love that scene too corree and reading it was like *sigh*
too goodd ^^

aww naughty sweetyyy Khushii , aww she's shoo cuutteee, loved her scene with Armaan , that was so adorable <3

and ROFL poor him lol " KHUSHIIIIII" lol nope sorry sweetheart thats the wrong name, but she tuurrnnedddd yeaaaaaaa ^^

plz plz plzz update soonnn , i cant wait for the newt parttt <3
*siigghh*

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Love, Nina ^^


Edited by -Nina- - 20 February 2011 at 10:53am

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Nina-

im late i know , soooowwiizzzzzzzz
acha so part 2 and 3 are like WOOOWWW
Love, Nina ^^
lol good if u knew hehe... seriosuly its not a prob.. at least u reply Oh thaaaaank u soo much!
glad u luved both the parts and enjoyed it soo much... i lurv  u soo much! hehehe thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks
i can reply to u in lot more details but im in a hurry right now so i just wanna say thaank u for the comment n u knw wat hehe im nt saying it now cause wanna keep it a suprise Wink

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Lali

Originally posted by _Afrin_

comment updated at pg 38...........Smile
 
Will read and comment
 
Originally posted by _Afrin_

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hello!!!!!!!!!!!! this time I m little early ha..................LOL
anyways superb part.......................loved it....................finally our hero properly enter the story.................
ur description of Arman was soooooo good that I could actually imagine............Day Dreaming
hmmm so it seems attraction is there from both sides..............awwww Arman was so cute......trying to know Riddhim's name...........loved the convo between him and khushi..............
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz try to update the next part soon along with a new VM...............LOL
now i m going to watch ur stereo love again.................i simply loved it.................
thanx for the pm..........
Afrin
 
Holaaaaaaaaaaa lol yes u were n suprise suprise LOL
Thank u soo much! thaaaaaaaaaaaaaank u.. hehe yeh the proper entry of his liked it na?
aww glad its good like it when ppl can actually imagine what i write
yeh let see how long it will last for Wink
I will try to update very sooooooon hehe yeh but not my work tho Big smile
lolz if u can find it cause i took it off hehe tc...


ur welcome.......Smile
yaaa I liked his entry veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much.............Day DreamingDay Dreaming
and btw why did u remove that vm............Disapprove
but anyways I found in in YT.............Wink





Edited by _Afrin_ - 20 February 2011 at 1:35pm

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