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Dont Let Me Go . A R || PART 9 PG 90 || 20/June (Page 36)

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
Nahin Lalu pehle Neeche dekho

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by star_fan

Uppar dekho. ^^
okay dokie humpty dumpty
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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tzahra

Nahin Lalu pehle Neeche dekho
chiii zaru soch kar bolo... lol LOL
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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by star_fan

I took so long in reading and commenting coz I thought it will be a long part with awesome interaction between the leads but If I have known this before then I have took more long. LOL Just kidding.
u know i have a reading prob LOL so i am gona break the msg to two with on about ur being LATE and the rest in the other.. okay so u being late.. u should be kidding common i told its a bond one n ur th one who say im like ekta so hahaha... well u will get to see the awesome interaction between the leads very soon.. Embarrassed next time be soon so u will get soon sweet romantic supriss..

Edited by .Lali - 17 February 2011 at 2:23am
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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by star_fan

I read your PS and realize you're right but you should gone more deep in their relation and so in no other part you needed to do that.

Did I said I hate Vivek too ? Why the he dragged her but am sure the person at whom he have pointed it's him.. Right ? Wink

Fantastic 4 are really fantastic and I know you gonna tell more about their bonds in coming ones.

Love that shortest fall scene between the girl and the guy, don't know if he's the one. I really like it and eager to know what happened but then *thud*.

It was all written greatly and especially the fall scene and their bonding. It's an awesome part.

One request, please update fast and complete it soon. 
now back to this.. hehe i am always rite dude wat u on abt dono u twiny well now do u?? Angry LOL
okay boss i will go deeeeeeep into it but then it would have been a long part na...
 
hehe same boat! u will see im not saying anything... i hate him toooo how can he show so much rite on her.. when she herself ignoring him. sure cause its not easy to tell their bond that quickly the small crushes fights and all that lol
 
You wait and watch i mean readwill get to clear all ur confusions soon..
THANK U master ji... u should win the best critics award lol.. i will if u comment fast...! Sleepy
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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tzahra

Lalu i am so gonna kill you let me get my hands on you thn you will see  i wont leave you at all wht is this such a small part and no AR scene not once not a single romanctic scene hmph.
Nahiii how could u! lol i told its the reveeenge cause no one read the ff so y should i write long long parts.. lolz u will get ur demand done very soon im not like the cvs u see dnt take long time to make ur wish come true.. hmph to u tooo! LOL
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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tzahra

Okay enough of threaten i must say the part was really cute but why did Vivek had to come ruin the perfect moment stupid guy and seriously Abhi is more stupid Vivek is clearly telling Riddhima he likes her and he is laughing at it pagal

I like how u changed Samrat n Gunjan character they are cute and hehe love their frndship with Riddhima

I love the part bt it was really small really amazing n awesome part u better update soon with a long part full of AR scenes okay

The vm is so rocking hayye i miss KaSh so much now after watching it do continue soon thanx for the pm.
Good! thaaaaaaaaaaank u finally lol.. well he is a stupid guy ruining all The Moments dnt worry there is more to come Wink u will see y later n yeh abhi is stupid lol pagal admi he have to protect her but no ''pulling the leg'' along with the jerks lol...
 
okay meri ma next time will give u a good part with something long okay?? but u have to promise to give ur comments soon not at the last moment
 
Thanks jaanu u said that earlier too thankkk u... Embarrassed
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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:27am | IP Logged
An update will be comming sooooooooooooooon

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