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Dont Let Me Go . A R || PART 9 PG 90 || 20/June (Page 35)

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
no more? =( i think a valentine update not gona happen then =(
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comment updated on pg 32.......................Smile
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Mariam_

awsome part lali
thanks for the pm
 
yhanks maru for commenting...
 
Originally posted by ammy_ka_ashu

hey update soon and do pm me!
 
hii sure will try... will do
 
Originally posted by _Afrin_

comment updated on pg 32.......................Smile
 
thanks!!! will reply to u soon
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Afrin_

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btw I totally LOVED the VM.................
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sorry sorry sorry........I somehow 4got to edit this comment.....dont know how....LOL
anyways the part was awesome......................loved it..................but i am eagerly waiting for AR to meet...............
cont soon..................................
and again the VM..............i m in love with it...........stereo love......it was perfect on KaSh................Day Dreaming
Afrin

thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank u...
thanx thanx thanx
its okay not a prob... lol i knw m too so waiting for them to meet.. mayb this update ur wish become true Wink thanks will do soon... thaaaaaaanks Embarrassed
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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
I took so long in reading and commenting coz I thought it will be a long part with awesome interaction between the leads but If I have known this before then I have took more long. LOL Just kidding. I read your PS and realize you're right but you should gone more deep in their relation and so in no other part you needed to do that.

Did I said I hate Vivek too ? Why the he dragged her but am sure the person at whom he have pointed it's him.. Right ? Wink

Fantastic 4 are really fantastic and I know you gonna tell more about their bonds in coming ones.

Love that shortest fall scene between the girl and the guy, don't know if he's the one. I really like it and eager to know what happened but then *thud*.

It was all written greatly and especially the fall scene and their bonding. It's an awesome part.

One request, please update fast and complete it soon.

 


Edited by star_fan - 15 February 2011 at 4:17pm
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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 3:37pm | IP Logged
Lalu i am so gonna kill you let me get my hands on you thn you will see  i wont leave you at all wht is this such a small part and no AR scene not once not a single romanctic scene hmph.

Okay enough of threaten i must say the part was really cute but why did Vivek had to come ruin the perfect moment stupid guy and seriously Abhi is more stupid Vivek is clearly telling Riddhima he likes her and he is laughing at it pagal

I like how u changed Samrat n Gunjan character they are cute and hehe love their frndship with Riddhima

I love the part bt it was really small really amazing n awesome part u better update soon with a long part full of AR scenes okay

The vm is so rocking hayye i miss KaSh so much now after watching it do continue soon thanx for the pm.
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Uppar dekho. ^^

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