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Dont Let Me Go . A R || PART 9 PG 90 || 20/June (Page 29)

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by star_fan

Hmm.. From where should I start ?
Well it's..


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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Lali

 
 
Originally posted by SPINKaShFanatic

This person hasn't commented till nowTongue do somethingTongue
 
Dude u really think i can do something about that... She never listens i told u na... ur hitler and my gabbar.........oops i never said that Wink LOL


Wish I had read this early then I definitely not regretting commenting right now. Angry
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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Lali...Viru will love Jia only if this FF is a happy ending..!am not acpting sad story *shake head*
u na...u r such a CV type fan....fulltoo like themAngry

Aww srsly...u r such a Brilliant WriterBig smile and well no need for u to say no...or shy this away...bcz u knw u areLOLnautankiROFL

U do your exam well...in meantime am gonna wait :-/ 

aww... make it a masti fun romantic FF Day Dreaming
awww i really made u smileBlushingaww am so happy wiv myselfROFL
i ddnt knw u were ill?Disapprove u theek now?Confused exms tension ki vaje se?

i knw nbdy can say anything to HitlerROFL


Oh well...Sorry Maham....but WE ARE LIKE THAT!ROFL

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by star_fan


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Originally posted by star_fan

Wish I had read this early then I definitely not regretting commenting right now. Angry
 
Finally the day i been waiting for... will check ur comment luuurrrvv u for this Tongue
hehe srry gabbar i mean mahu lol u knw us na LOL

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 5:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by star_fan

Hmm.. From where should I start ?
Well it's definitely amazing part, in sense of the way it was written.
Honestly, you have improved a lot and no doubt I could say you are amazing writer.
The way you have written have grace, decency and a beauty in it and all these things have given an mind blowing look to your story.
Each scene was written greatly.
Not much about story I should be commenting right now coz the couple haven't met yet.
That guy with whom she bumped twice was 'The Guy' ?

Update soon.. I will NOT be waiting. Sleepy
I am very pleased that you enjoyed reading the part.. eventhough i still dont accept that i am an amazing writer but thank you very much for the compliment and your kind words. Thank you soo much I hope i will continue to be great like you described and continue to entertain you with the story. Ofcourse you will have to wait and see as the story progress further to know what will happen and if it was 'The Guy'
 
Sure will try to... But after mid Feb of course. Thanks!!

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SPINKaShFanatic

Lali...Viru will love Jia only if this FF is a happy ending..!am not acpting sad story *shake head* ...
 
LOL me no fan of CVs please... I just like to stick to my decisions, OK meri maa the stroy will have a happy ending KUSH!
 
Awww thanks jaan lol I knw I am an OKAY SHOKAY type but not an amazing writer... lol nautanki is jai hobbie na...
 
Thank you! hehe sorry but u have to
 
I will make this FF Masti and FULTO ROMANTIC u havent seen my romantic scenes have u lol im proud of them lol.. and no worries this is no sad ff cause i myself hate sadness
 
still not very well 7 days bed rest lol naa not any tension just the virus flu... Cry
BTW u talk too much u r not viru u should have being Basanti,,, Haila Jai n Basanti Blushing ROLF ROFL
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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
ROFLohh Gosh...i knw am such a talkative gal...evry1 knws at home..Gosh dnt eva call me Basanti...in frnt of Deep u knw...she always call me BasantiDead and i hate tht nameAngrycall me Jai..or Veeru...Embarrassedbcz Nori once dreamt of KSG calling me Veeru..his Veeru Blushing
Thank u SOOOOOOOO MUCH...Now am srsly KHUSH thts its gonna be a HAPPY ENDINGEvil Smile
Virus fluErmmmy buddies at cllge calls me VirusStern Smile
U take care..GWSHug

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SPINKaShFanatic

ROFLohh Gosh...i knw am such a talkative gal...evry1 knws at home..Gosh dnt eva call me Basanti...in frnt of Deep u knw...she always call me BasantiDead and i hate tht nameAngrycall me Jai..or Veeru...Embarrassedbcz Nori once dreamt of KSG calling me Veeru..his Veeru Blushing
Thank u SOOOOOOOO MUCH...Now am srsly KHUSH thts its gonna be a HAPPY ENDINGEvil Smile
Virus fluErmmmy buddies at cllge calls me VirusStern Smile
U take care..GWSHug
lols ooops sorry didnt knw u hate that name LOL i'll stick to veeru then lolz u n u dreams...
Evil ladki btw the stry just started n i just posted the 1st part n ur already talking abt the ending y? is it that bad??  OMG ur something lol hey virus.... wats up? dude u need to teach me all ur comical tectiques so i can use them on my FF Embarrassed LOL
Thank u!!!

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