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SR FF DMG3 Phir Bhi Saath Hai Hum Part 53 Page 128 (Page 75)

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vidyashree

Wow dj it ws awesome i loved it Thumbs Up so finally ridzy maiya gt to kn her cute doc sid is here yipeeee Party bt dj i dint understd y did atul tel ridzy tat if she do wat sday she ws doing then she wil hv to b sorry 4 tat through out her life   Confused plz continue soon im eagerly waiting to read te next part..


He know that when Riddhima was married to Sid she was concerned for armaan and if today if she is displaying any interest in her ex would one not infer the same history repeating ...........Even Juhi said the same thing ............remember ................

plus Sid was anyways hurt earlier would he not get hurt again and would not that be wrong on part of Riddhima which she would be sorry for rest of her life .....................

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in part 35...loved atul rids convo...hopefully she will get sum akal n just divorce that man....

part 36...wohooo...finally rids knows abt sid..n cant wait for operation to b successful n sid to come out n then....if rids is still there they will meet...or atleast i hope they meet soon...thanks for updating fast n pm...plz continue soon :)


@ red ........my question to you here would that solve a problem ........would Sid like it or would Riddhima do it ????


no it wldnt solve the prob...bt u see 2 that man rids is like a certificate....dat to him sorta proves that shes only his n no1 can have her...u no what i mean...like wat atul said regardin gto arrrrman's behavior at the party...n if rids divorces him..den his so called "brahm" or ego-in a away- will die...he cant say anymore dat rids is his n he will suffer... n rids will be free to go...n sid...he really luvs rids n will be happy if shes happy...tho as a 3rd person pov i dont think it shld matter to him that much b.c rids has given him soo much pain n i feel that sid wont forgive her easily...b/c in a way shes responsible for his n shilpa's separation n all the paint hat  not only him bt shilpa has been thru..n he cant tolerate that....bt ya to ur ?..it wont solve d prob bt it will give pain to hat man...bc of his ego only....im not that evil bt just haaaatte that guy....bt really like the way u think thru ur characters head n try to see wat normal person wld do in such situations...plz continue soon...

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All dialogues highlighted in red are from the FF's previous part while Blue italic are from the serial

Special thanks to Pragzie for checking the rough draft and to ReshuSaluja for checking the draft and selecting the dialogues.


Part 37

 

Riddhima just sat there. Motionless. There was the person whom she had been sensing for last few days. The person whom she wanted to see so desperately just once. Just to reassure herself that yes he is indeed fine. He was there right in front of her eyes. She kept staring at him. Suddenly everything in front of her started getting blurred.  Is this is a dream? She looked down at the document, trying to read. The words appeared all hazy. As she blinked few tears spread over the name Dr. Siddhant Modi which now could be seen clearly. A warm smile spread over her face. No, it's not a dream. She ran her fingers over the name to clear the tear drops off it. She looked up and kept gazing at the figure standing behind the glass window. Sid!!!

She continued to sit there as if in a trance. Images of the time spent together were running in her mind.......... Tears continued to run down her face but the smile refused to leave her lips. happy beautiful moments spent with this man............her man........ were flooding her mind............. 'the day when were got bound to each other in holy matrimony........her man had held her hand for the first time and led her through the marriage ceremony .......who accepted her for what she was 'Meine tumhe tumhare kal aur aaj ke saath accept kiya hai'......their happy times together ........when they first chatted as friends ......... 'Tum haste hua bahoot achi lagti hoo' her man who had always fought for her and brought her back to life everytime. Her man who proudly wanted to take her back home their home 'Tum meri patni ho, I want my wife back' with whom she wanted to live her entire life 'main sirf tumhare saath rehna chahti hu' who never ashamed of accepting his feelings for her 'Aaj jab meine tumhe kiss kiya It felt wonderful aur mujhe nahi lagta ki meine koi galti ki hai' who waited for her 'Mein jaanta hoon tum comfortable nahi ho' and promised her that he will always love her regardless anything 'Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye Riddhima mein tumse bahoot pyaar karoonga' and he did 'Mein tumse pyar karta hoon aur kuch nahi expect karta.' love her without any expectations They lived for each other's happiness and She couldn't help but feel amused at this innocent man whom she harassed a lot at times. 'Tum gussa ho toh mere playstation pe gussa kyu nikhal rahi hoo' 'This is not fair tum aise mujhe ignore kaise kar sakti hoo meri baat toh sunoh' They fought at times.............fought Her expressed changed suddenly ...........the pain that she gave him could be seen in her eyes. 'Meine divorce papers sign kar diye hai jaa kar court mein file kar do ' 'Iss shaadi ke pavitra rishte ka apmaan kiya hai meine' 'Istamaal kiya hai tumne mere Riddhima aur woh bhi itni buri tarah' ..................

Suddenly she heard a voice calling her. Dr. Riddhima..... Dr. Riddhima  .......aap theek ho ?

Riddhima snapped back to reality She looked around to see the two interns were looking at her with concerned eyes.

Intern1: Aap theek ho?

Riddhima: Haan .........haan .........mein theek hoon ...........She again looked down to check the document once again to make sure what she felt, what she had seen was indeed true or just a dream.

Intern2: Aap roo kyu rahi hai? Completely confused what is there in the documents that Riddhima was reacting like this

 

Riddhima just looked at the Intern blankly. She got up and looked through the glass window oblivious of everything around. Her ears were ringing .............

'Istamaal kiya hai tumne mere Riddhima aur woh bhi itni buri tarah' ..................' 'aur jo tumne kiya uske saath .................you god damn used him ........used him for your motives' 'His eyes I have to say Riddhima they really talk ..............its strange there is seems to be so much pain in them ..........' She was staring wide eyed at Sid. Just then one of the interns voice brought her out of her thoughts. 'Ma'am aap bait jayiye .......aur yeh lijiye paani ........' handing a glass of water. Riddhima just looked at the person then looked back at Sid and hurried out of the viewing gallery leaving the puzzled interns behind.

 

Walking with quick but unsure steps she headed towards her cabin. 'Sid yaha ............meine ussi ko mehsoos kiya aaj bhi........woh theek hai ..............par uski aankhen ......... recollecting the eyes she had seen........... troubled yes.........they were troubled filled with pain ...........Nahi ..........shayaad surgery ka stress .............par 'His eyes I have to say Riddhima they really talk ..............its strange there is seems to be so much pain in them ..........' haan yeh sab meri wajah se hai .............' 'you god damn used him.........both of you' 'Koi insaan tumpar aisa asar kaise kar sakta hai ki tumhara waqt tumhari sooch aur tumpar bhi apna haq jama le itna ki tum apne patients aur pati ko bhool javo' 'Aaj bahoon mein liya hai kal'  'Kaise vishwas karo mein tumpar tumne toh dhoka diya hai mujhe' 'His eyes I have to say Riddhima they really talk ..............its strange there is seems to be so much pain in them ..........' 'you god damn used him.........both of you' 'Istamaal kiya hai tumne mere Riddhima aur woh bhi itni buri tarah' The words were ringing in her ears............... She hurried to into her cabin sweat forming on her brow, she collapsed on the chair. With unsteady hands picked the glass of water to take a sip but spilling much of it. Shayaad Atul ne sahi kaha ............. istamaal kiya meine Sid ka ...............  nahi de sakti usse aur dukh koi haq nahi hai mujhe uske baare mein fikar karne ka bhi ...... par sirf usse ek baar dekhna chahati thi tasali karna chahati thi ...........' Atul ne kaha tha aaj mein galati kar rahi hoon ...............usse dekhte hi woh sab yaad aa gaya ...........aisa laga ki kal ki hi baat thi...........lekin yeh galat hai .......... 'Juhi's words started ringing in her ears jo tum kal karne ki koshish kar rahi hoo................ usse milne ki......tumhne nahi lagata ki tum galat kar rahi hoo...............?????? aur agar tumse phir se wohi galati hui toh ..................' 'Abhi bhi shaadi shudha hoon ..............yeh theek nahi ..............kya hua ki armaan aur mein aaj ek saath nahi hai par phir bhi ........... shaadi shudha hoon.............Sid ko yeh bilkul achaa nahi lagega......... yeh sahi nahi hai ............... Sid ko bahoot takleef de chuki hoon aur nahi de sakti ..........Bahoot saaf dil ka hai woh kabhi kuch galat nahi karta nah hi hone deta hai ............usse yeh achaa nahi lagage.............mujhe usse door rehna hi hoga...........haan yahi theek hai...........usse aur hurt nahi karoongi mein ........



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Edited by DJ.. - 01 February 2011 at 9:46pm

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
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I am glad you used what Juhi said in the previous chapter, about his eyes and pain
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Originally posted by Lennie

I am glad you used what Juhi said in the previous chapter, about his eyes and pain


I had specifically planned some of the dialogues for the scenes likes today and those which are going to come up .......Embarrassed

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