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SR FF DMG3 Phir Bhi Saath Hai Hum Part 53 Page 128 (Page 56)

DJ.. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sidma_love

DJJJJJJJ

I luuubbbbed dis part Embarrassed
D way u explained d deep meaning behind every dialogue is just amazing ClapClap

And Ridz Maiya ki Jai Hooooooooo ROFLROFL
I mean Koi itni confusion k saath kaise jee sakta hai ?? How ?????? LOL LOL

Can I say I luv Juhi ?? LOL LOL
I loved dis line ' She never somehow like dis person but after hearing what all had happened .... She could not tolerate dat person anymore ' LOL LOL LOL

But wait where is dat psycho Horman ??? And what's his new passion ??????

Eagerly waiting 4 d next part...

Continue soon....




Juhi was an accidental character that I put in jusout to have a convo about the new case............but then it just happened.............in fact while writing this i was constantly coming up with witty oneliners or sarcastic comment which i so wanted to put but then refrained myself ........

some of them i used to use when Riddhima used to really irritate me LOL

as for the person whom you want to know about you will know ...........soon

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged
aaaaawwww DJJJJJ budddyyyy!!  You nailed it!! LOL
I swear if any A____R fans read this update they will seriously get insecure.
 Because you have explained each and every word and deed of Riddhima with such perfection anyone would blindly  believe this is what will really happen 10 yrs later!!
Hats off to you, i must say this update was for sure worth waiting!! Hug

One request!! Now that you have cleared Riddhima's thoughts you better don't make us wait this long for an update! LOL

Cheers and Good luck!! Thumbs Up

Update Soon!! Now really cant wait for SR meeting Embarrassed

P.s for me "Juhi" is the old Juhi from Sanjeevani Big smile


Edited by miss_cullen - 07 January 2011 at 5:29am
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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 7:56am | IP Logged
DJ very interesting. I really liked the way you combined Riddhima's words, actions and her thoughts. Yeah I agree she is one confused soul and for that she only has to blame herself for being so indecisive even when her soulmate was in front of her. I really was not very happy with Armaan's character also because in the end he came across as a obsessed lover. It is one thing to love a person but  it is entirely different if you stalk her and treat her as a trophy. As far as I am concerned I think Riddhima may have married Armaan only because it was the forced on her and not because she really wanted it. Many times we do some things because that is what is expected of us and most of our family and friends just push us towards it. Riddhima was also in a similar boat. Everyone including Anjali, Keerthi just expected her to go back to Armaan because they thought she was with Sid only due to marriage. But alas they never knew that Riddhima was way too involved with Sid on emotional level. Now I really am looking forward to see how you take the story forward. And yeah I really wish and hope the creatives of this stupid show read your FF. They would know how to think about a character and more importantly how not to murder a story. Kudos and good work.

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 9:24am | IP Logged
hey DJ it was a big roller coaster ride of emotions...
very well written

ab to jaldi se hamare bichde premiyon ko mila do...plzzzzz
itzzzz just a chota sa suggestion if u could also add up sme lite moments too to other wise very intensly interesting plot.....
waitin 4 d next update
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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged
OMG!!!! DJ it was an awesome update yaarClap
 
u have justified all the dialogues  in propoundlyClapClap
 
i loved Juhi's characterEmbarrassed..bechari puri tarha se confuse ho gayye thi riddhima ki baat sunta suntaLOL
 
awww sid and juhi main kafi similarities haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...
 
continue soonEmbarrassed
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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Its a freaking Awesome updateClap
DJ.. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vidyashree

Dj i loved ur long update Clap ...te way u hv summed up everythi tat happened in b/w te three ws amazing Thumbs Up and ur rit riddhima is te most confused person ufff i dont kn how juhi tolerated confused queens convo lolzROFL....u hv justified ma cute sids character i loved it Embarrassed and tat kutta is such a looser i hate him y te hell ridz married him Angry... Bt im happy tat atleast nv ridz hs realised tat sid ws te person who always stood next to her and always supportd her Clap plz continue soon Big smile


if you see even in the serial she always realized that she was her true support system...............

logic was defied we cant do anything about it ...........

as for juhi i really wanted to put some real witty one liners but was bored to write them and then again redirect to the complete long story Ouch
Sehru_life IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
bro i loved it 

it was long and nice 

update soon and pm meSmile

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