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SR FF DMG3 Phir Bhi Saath Hai Hum Part 53 Page 128 (Page 29)

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DJ..

Originally posted by miss_cullen

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this is seriously gooood stuff!! i am sooo loving it!!Clap especially ur super quick updates!! Thumbs Up Since you are stressing on constructive criticism i have one Embarrassed please don't feel bad it's just that my curiosity and impatience is killing me... Confused i feel you are dragging it a wee bit...! Confused May be i felt it because SR haven't met yet! Confused I soooo badly wanna know what's going on! Where is Armaan!AngryWhat happened to "phorever couples"Dead and what will happen when SR finally meets!! Embarrassed  Pleas please don't feel bad because I REALLY LOVE THIS FF and i really feel, by the way it's heading, this really has the potential to be the script of DMG 3!! Thumbs Up  KEEP UPDATING!! Hug


I am not at all feeling bad ............this is exactly what I was looking for .........what you guys really really feel .........yes even i feel i am dragging it a bit ............but you know what I have to cause

A I need to clarify what happened in the past years with Sid and Shilpa ............
B I want to actually build up properly for Riddhima
C armaan ......you will know whats with him soon ..........
D I am going step by step you will realise i am leaving clues .............big ones...........at least I feel so that is why I am updating fast so you don't loose track I am not saying I am writing a script for DMG 3 like you mentioned but i am writing them in scenes so if possible try to visualize as a serial scene by scene and hence I am shifting between scenes.........Plus i am updating fast cause you read two three parts together and not need to go back and forth reading .......
E I am not highlighting too much as you as a reader if you can understand what clues I am leaving and where the story is going then yes i am successful or else all is a waste ...........

Time and again I have mentioned that SR are not going to meet till many more updates or else the whole essence will be lost .............

I am really really happy you mentioned what you mentioned

and thank you soo much for those lovely words of the script Embarrassed


Ahh you are right!! it should always be slow and steady!! i really wish it was a book so that i can read it in one shot!! Wink So my buddy! keep going and i will impatiently wait for ur updates!! Embarrassed

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DJ..

Lennie .......

I would like to thank you for reading my FF inspite of our yesterday's conversation

You really have no clue how touched I was today when I see your like comment on the FF

I really really appreciate it

Thank you !!!


DJ, i will always read and admire your writing, and itsn an honour reading this and discussing it with you
 
I didnt leave a comment, coz i didnt know what to say coz each part is leaving something - esp as we did discuss yesterday on this
 
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first of all bro i am loveing this ff
 
and other ting yes i am waiting to no what happen in past years
 
but keep updating
 
and pm me Smile
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lovely update buddySmile
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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 9:41am | IP Logged
DJ....I'm loving ur FF so much...even though I really hate cliffhangers...I love ur FF....it's just too interesting n really very good
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this is becoming more and more interesting...but i hate cliffhangs yaar so plzzz update soonEmbarrassed

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Question hai shoot karo ............I will try to answer if I can without disclosing the key points.........LOL


Part 15

 

Sid: Pohoch gaye kya .........

 

Driver Nahi saab .............todha time aur time lagega...........

 

Sid: aree 1 ghante pehle toh bola tha ki pohoch jayenge ............

 

Driver: sorry ek galat turn le liya .........

Sid: Kitna baaja hai ........

 

Driver: 7 baaje hai .......

Sid: Looked out of the window .......... 'In saalo mein sab ne mere saath chod diya'

 

Sid: Tum yeh kya kar rahi hoo yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat hai...............

 

Shilpa: Mein ab yaha pe aur nahi rahena chahati......... Door jaana chahati hoon ............is jagah se Vishal ki yaadon se.........

 

Sid: Yeh kyu nahi kehti ki tum mujhse tang aa chuki hoo kyu ki mein tumhari baat nahi maan raha hoon ..............

 

Shilpa: Nahi Sid .........yeh roz roz ke tension se mein ab door rahena chahati hoon ............Aur mere samne Rohan ka future hai ............jo mujhe nahi lagta yaha rahe kar mein sawar sakoongi ........Tumhe mere liye bahoot kuch kiya hai .......lekin ab mein tumhe aur pareshani nahi dena chahati

 

Sid: Pareshani ...........tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum dono mujhe pe bhoj ho..............Rohan ko mein ek din bhi nahi milu toh mein toh unsettled feel karne lagta hoon ............

 

Shilpa: Exactly aur uski wajah se tum apne haat aye huye ache oppurtunities gawah rahe hoo

 

Sid: But that is not my priority My priorities have changed...............

 

Shilpa: Tumhare priorities have not changed before and have not done so now also .............tum kabhi Riddhima ko...............

 

Sid lashes out in anger 'Riddhima .....Riddhima .........Riddhima .........tum log har baat ke liye Riddhima pe kyu aa jate ho ..............

 

Shilpa: Kyu ki jab tak woh hai tumhare jehen mein tab tak kuch nahi ho sakta ............... kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai ki ....................tum mere liye yeh sab sirf Riddhima ke khatir kar rahe hoo......

 

Enough ................ shouted Sid ........... Tum jaana chahati ho na .........jao please jao...............

Shilpa: Tum kabhi badalna nahi chahate................

 

Sid: You know what yes 'Mein kabhi nahi badloonga' Fact remains that the person I loved most in my like is Riddhima. Fact remains that Rohan and you have become my top most priority in life regardless you were or not Riddhima sister. Par agar tumhe aise lagta hai ki nahi ............toh i really can't do anything............ Please leave...........but ek baat yaad rakna Rohan ko mujhese door karke tum achaa nahi kar rahi hoo.................I am never going to forgive you for this.................... Actually you know what tum dono behene............ Sid uss din bolte bolte ruk gaya lekin ............. ek bohoot bada sakam de gaya ...........

 

Sid thinking after that we hardly spoke. I used to call Shilpa to talk to Rohan but kabhi kabhi lagta tha ki thop raha hoon khud ko uss par ................Phir mein apne kaam mein busy ho gaya ............khud ko occupied rakhne ke liye kaam mein khud ko doobo diya ............... aaj ek successful neurosurgeon hoon .............. lekin yeh successful aur zindagi bhatne ke liye koi nahi hai ..........

 

Link to the next part


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1573841&PID=37658090&#37658090


Edited by DJ.. - 31 January 2011 at 4:08am

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Shilpa left Sid's house Shocked

' Mai Kabhi nahi badaloonga'
Does it means ' HE will keep loving Riddhima ' ?? Wink

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