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SR FF DMG3 Phir Bhi Saath Hai Hum Part 53 Page 128 (Page 19)

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by indian_beauty

DJ....sorry for replying so lateEmbarrassed

But Awesome update Clap
She still feels HIS presence she cares for HIM and still thinks about HIM

God....so many cliffhangersAngryLOL

it's getting really very interesting....continue soonSmile


aree kya kare these cliffhangers are just breaks re bahoot ayenge

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nine2

wow..thats was really good...bt too much suspense n i have no patience..n u need to reveal this very very very soon...i hope nothing has really happened to shilpa n then ridz...who was she thinking abt..at first i thought she was thinking abt sid bt then after her convo w/ anjie i think it might be Arrrrr-man . bt i really hope not...cant wait for ur updates plz cont. soon....n thanks for the pms :)


thand rakho thand .............

story is unfolding now .............

shilpa and riddhima .......you will soon understand ...........hints deta rahoonga ...........actually nahi .....LOL

Sid ya armaan ....... God I hate writing his name in this FF also ........but kya kare ........ ek character hai use karna padega
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by docnuss

wow wat an amazing way of writing.......BEAUTIFUL......Thumbs Up
ds past-present scenes is indeed a new thing,,,n havnt really noticed it in FF writing on ds forum.....well done bro.....i enjoyed reading all da 3 parts....Embarrassed





i am sorry there will be many past present soooo

just try to keep track if i mess  up somewhere let me know


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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lennie

I wonder how this will unfold and who Anji was talking about and what has become of Riddhima's life????

this mystery will take a long time to unfold .......... Riddhima was herself a big mystery LOL
 
 
I love how Shilpa knows Sid, and knows that he probably wont be able to accept anyone in his life, trust and faith is gone  See the way I see Shilpa is because of what she faced in earlier life she know what life is all about......... hence she can be a true support to Sid ............ its not that trust faith is gone in Sid life atleast in my FF but the fact is that He now looks at life in a different perspective.................... actually i wanna show a change in Sid's character but do not know how to portray itConfused
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DJ..

Originally posted by nine2

wow..thats was really good...bt too much suspense n i have no patience..n u need to reveal this very very very soon...i hope nothing has really happened to shilpa n then ridz...who was she thinking abt..at first i thought she was thinking abt sid bt then after her convo w/ anjie i think it might be Arrrrr-man . bt i really hope not...cant wait for ur updates plz cont. soon....n thanks for the pms :)


thand rakho thand .............  I cant...even when i read books i read beg. ending..middle n then ending...n i say i love mysteries..lol

story is unfolding now .............

shilpa and riddhima .......you will soon understand ...........hints deta rahoonga ...........actually nahi .....LOL How mean!!!!
Sid ya armaan ....... God I hate writing his name in this FF also ........but kya kare ........ ek character hai use karna padega  Me too thats why i wrote Arrrrrrrrrrr-man...shows my emotion in there...lol..ya u really dont have a choice...bt hey when u get a chance through another character....u can write ur true feeling frm bottom of  ur heart...lol... :D
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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 2:38am | IP Logged

Part 8

 

Sid: Aur kitna time lagne wala hai .......

 

Driver: Aur 3 ghante lagenge

 

Sid: Paani hai kya?

 

Driver: Nahi saab ek kaam karta hoon koi hotel mile toh waha pe ruk kar le leta hoon .................

 

They continue driving towards their destination. Sid looks out of the window to see the passing scenery. '10 years ago I left this place. It has been a long journey since then.' and his thoughts again start drifting into the past.

 

Shilpa: unhe kehne ya bata ne ki koi zaroorat nahi ............

 

Sid: Par woh tumhari behen hai............. Kya tum nahi chahati ki woh tumhari shaadi pe aye

Shilpa: Chahati thi ....... infact abhi bhi chahati hoon ki di aye ........ lekin shayaad woh mere saath koi rista nahi rakana chahati..........nahi toh saab saach jaane ke baad ek baar bhi nahi poocha mujhe................. Poora ek saal intezar kiya unka aane ka.......... Socha ki woh ayegi aur mujhe gale lagayegi ..............poori zindagi tarasi hoon unke pyaar ke liye ...............lekin Unhe toh sirf ek armaan chahiye apni zindagi mein...............aur waise bhi aye toh bhi unke saath armaan bhi hoga ...........mein nahi chahati ki woh aye ............jis aadmi ne............jaane do ............ chodo

 

Sid could understand how miserable Shilpa felt. He had told armaan about Shilpa being Riddhima's sister and requested him to break the news to her. Yet nor armaan nor Riddhima ever contacted Shilpa. First he used to think that she must have not accepted the fact and used to get upset. But later he kind of made peace thinking that it is for the best. Riddhima would never be able to come to terms with her guilt of what she did to her sister. Shilpa indeed at one point loved armaan. Yet he always contemplated whether did armaan really tell Riddhima the truth cause he knew that armaan was not one of those people who would come clean with facts. Like Riddhima had mentioned to him 'armaan kabhi kuch nahi batata'. He had bounced this thought with Shilpa and today again to convince her he brought this possibility up.

 

Shilpa: Agar armaan ne nahi bataya hai toh bhi ab kuch farak nahi padta............. woh chaha kahi mar gayi ........... aur waise bhi mein nahi chahati ki unhe guilty feel ho ya phir ............taras kha kar mujhe milne aye ........ ya phir sirf ek formality ke liye............ jaane do na Sid ..........Shilpa was now visibly irritated.

 

But Sid was not going to let this go by easily as he always wanted that Riddhima be there for the rituals when Shilpa gets married. Afterall some family member needs to be there to perform the same.

 

Sid: Par phir bhi Shilpa koi ghar ka hona chahiye na koi bada jo ye sab kar sake

 

Shilpa absolutely irrated with the Sid's reasoning 'Kyu tum nahi ho ............ ya phir tum bhi ab apna nahi mante ya phir kabhi mana hi nahi'

 

Sid: Shut up Shilpa ........... meine kab kaha ki tum apni nahi ho........... agar Riddhima tumhari behen bhi nahi hoti toh bhi hamara rishta kabhi nahi badalta...............Theek hai toh phir kanya dan ki rasam mom dad ko karne ke liye kehte hai ..............Happy .......

 

Shilpa: Nahi ............

 

Sid surprised at her answer 'Tumhare dimaag mein koi aur hai ya phir ye vidhi nahi karvani'

 

Shilpa: Haan .........karni toh hai par actually mein chahati thi ki tum mera kanya dan karo ...........Agar Riddhimadi aur tum saath hote toh tum dono karte na .............. aur jaise tumne kaha Riddhimadi ke hone na hone se hamare riste mein farak nahi padega ..........toh phir .............

 

Sid was moved by Shilpa's gesture He quickly wrapped her up in his arms to give a warm hug.

 

Sid thinking woh ek din tha aur aaj ................

 

The driver halted the car near a dabha.

 

Driver: Sir aap ko kuch aur chahiye

 

Sid: Nahi ..............

 

Driver: Aap ki permission ho toh kya mein fat se ek chai pee loon kya

 

Sid: Haan haan bilkul ...........thinking for a sec .........actually chalo mein bhi ek chai pi leta hoon .............bahoot saal ho gaye aise chai peye ........aur phir thoda stretch bhi karloonga ............ baaite baaite tange akad gayi hai .........


Link to the next part

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1573841&PID=37583500&#37583500

 



Edited by DJ.. - 31 January 2011 at 4:00am

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 2:55am | IP Logged
Dj  Hug 
thank u so much for accepting my request....u had exactally wrote which i thought ....shilpa's kanyadaan. Embarrassed
dhabbe pe chai.......iss dhabbe ki chai se to sid ki kitni yaadein judi hain....Cry 
can't wait for next update...Smile
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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 3:10am | IP Logged
SidShi my angels Day Dreaming

Loved SidShi convo
Their bond is special Embarrassed

its getting interesting wid every update ..
Can't wait to know what happens next...

Continue soon....

PS - can't comment on ur Blog through my phone
Will comment once I get on my computer :)

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