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SR FF DMG3 Phir Bhi Saath Hai Hum Part 53 Page 128 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 3

Siddhant sat in the car and asked the driver about the destination. The driver nodded affirmatively and started the car.

Driver: Aapko directly waha jana hai ya pehle aap fresh hona chahate hai.

Siddhant (Sid): nahi directly chalenge. Waha pe pahonchna jaroori hai.

Driver: Aap so jaye. Waha pe pahonchene ke baad mein aap ko jaga doonga

Sid: Neend toh nahi ayegi ......mujhe to iss waqt jagneka addat hain. Phir bhi sone ki koshish karta hoon Kal subah bahoot kuch karna hai.

Sid closes his eyes and tries to catch some sleep. Inspite of being tired sleep eluded him. His mind again stated wandering towards the past. Sid's thoughts: Is jagah ko dus saal peeche chod ke age badh gaya .......kuch yaade aur ek dost leke gaya tha mein yaha se.......... He heaves a sigh and closes his eyes in pain and start drifting to sleep.

Sid: Kya kar rahi ho jaana nahi hai ......aaj pehla din hai hospital mein ........mujhe late hona pasand nahi hai...........

The girl still getting ready for the day ignores Sid royally.

Sid screams : SHILPAAAA !!!!!!!!!!

Shilpa comes out of the room. 'Kya hua. Chilla kyu rahe hoo aa rahi hoon. Ab di ki tarah tum bhi Hitler bana chahate hoo.

Shilpa knew any mention of Riddhima softened Sid immediately.

Sid: Ok chalo ab. Der ho rahi hai. Yuvi ko bhi pick up karna hai .............

Shilpa after leaving Sanjeevani completed her internship in India itself and then moved to US to join Sid on his suggestion.

Both were still nursing their wounds. Both helped each other try to ease each other's pain. After all both were the victims of the same people whom they thought were their own.

Sid found a good friend in her always. While for Shilpa Sid always remained her di's husband her jeeja apart from being a dear friend.

Sid: SHILPAAAAAAAA!!!!

Sid wakes up with a startle. He thought it seemed just like yesterday. He wipes the sweat from his brow and looks out of the window. Yet again the question returned to his mind. Why was he being called??? Was she not there? Does she even know? Should I ask her?


Link to the next part


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/37517062

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-Nags- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update  buddy😊
Pragzie thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Bro,
loved the update..how i love SidShi..i am glad they both were their for each other to nurse each others's wound and with every update the suspensej ust keeps on building up..
as usual great part keep it upπŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi DJ,
 
Lovely update, So Shilpa is in US with Sid............Good. and Pls make it a bit longer.
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Posted: 13 years ago
DJ ........u love clifffhanger..............god u increase my curiocity for next part......plzz reveal soon whose that person whom sid is going to meet........πŸ˜•

update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwww wat a mystrilicious update.....⭐️
both update 2 n 3 is superb as expected.....😊
hope it shall b lil longer nxt tym.....πŸ˜›

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Posted: 13 years ago
DJJJJ😈

u know my comment, do u want me to write here?😑😑
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Posted: 13 years ago
I might give atleast min 1 more update today .......

trust me i shall give short updates but atleast min of 2 everyday ......... it works better for me and transitioning between scenes et al

@ monty i don't like cliff hangers myself but this is the build up phase hence a lot will be left to be known only later ........

@ ALLi

n case cliff hangers are irritating (at least to me they are really) then I would suggest read 3 to 4 parts at one stretch from now on .........that may work better ........... I feel its better for me to update rapidly instead working on it for a week and give you a page or two to read in one shot

let me know all how you want it


1 to 2 page update once a week

or short updates 2 to 3 times a day
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Posted: 13 years ago
DJJJJJJJ
Tadpa Tadpa k maarne ka irada hai kya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Wid every update d suspense is building up
SidShi 😍
Dey were there 4 each other.. good :)

Can't wait to know what happens next..
And Phuleeezzz make it a bit longer :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ DJ πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....ofc da 2nd option n dat is......2,,3 updates daily......