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The Asylum: Mental over Paagal Onu AT Note Page 18 (Page 16)

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
hiyaaaaaaaaa guys....
even i cant wait to see our pagal onu.... Day Dreaming he's da only motivation for me to watch TL rite now cz just like all u guys, me not happy with dis yucky ritesh's marriage motives...... grossssss
 
pagal onu....
where ever u go, whatever u do, i will b rite here waitin for u...
whatever it takes, ooh how my heart breaks, i will be rite here waitin for u

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soaps1

Humara pyar tou har waqt imtehan mey hi rehta hey Ouch

pyaar hein tho intezaar mein bhi mazaa hein nadz....Embarrassed
intezaar ka phal humeshaa meetha hotha hein....Day Dreaming...i hope..Confused
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lubz.TaAnu

Nads: yeh lo: One down, two looong ones to go:

Taani walked into the room as she had done for the past many nights. Her eyes were quickly searching for him and they found him, stood by the window, just staring out of it.

The nurse was there again, watching them as if she was in some kind of movie theatre and she had first row seats. Why couldn't she leave them alone? Why couldn't she leave them both to it?

Taani slowly approached Anurag as he continued to stare out of the window, not realising her presence.

He still hadn't recognised her but Taani knew, she knew that he would. And he it would happen soon. She had that faith.

Taani's eyes went to the wall where she saw the words: "Mishti" written on every part of the walls.

Agar Main Yahaan Chaudan Saal Ke Liye Raha Na, To Yahaan Har Eet Pe, Hum Honghe

Taani wiped her eyes when she realised that she was crying. She approached Anurag and put her hand on his shoulder.

He had always been the one to give her strength when they were facing difficulties. He was always the one to support her when she felt as if she couldn't continue and here she was, struggling to keep herself together when he needed her the most.

Anurag realised someone had their hand on his shoulder and slowly turned his head to see Taani there.

His face was expressionless. He wasn't happy to see her, because he didn't know her. But he wasn't sad because he felt that he wasn't alone.



He saw this strange woman and his Mishti came to mind. Where was his Mishti? How would she be? Why hadn't she come to see him?

He missed his Mishti. He missed her alot. But he didn't know where she was.

Maybe... maybe this woman knew where his Mishti was? Maybe that's why she kept coming back? Maybe she could take him to his Mishti? Yes, this seemed like the best idea.

"Onu?" She said. There it was again, the closeness. His Mishti used to call him that. His Mishti. With her perfect smile. Her perfect nature. She was perfect in every way to him.

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lubz.TaAnu

Thaaank yoou girls. Mashallah I'be been gifted with many talents Smile

Here's the second O.S, as promised:



"Kya hum aaj bahar jaasakte hain?"
taani turned to the nurse.
"Bahar?"
"Haan. Mujhe Onu ko kahin leke jaana hai"
"Lekin kahan?"
"Jahaan hum dono ko pyaar ka matlab patachala" she said

Anurag turned to the woman. She was talking to the nurse but he missed what she had said. Again. He had always seemed to do that.

"Onu? Tu chalegha na?" Taani asked him "hum bahar chalte hain thodi dehr ke liye, haan?" she asked.

It was as if she had read his mind. He had wanted to get out of there for so long. And now he had a chance. Thanks to this lady. Anurag turned to her and she was aware that she had his full attention.

"Chale?" she asked with a smile and Anurag followed her to the door.

Taani heard a noise come from behind her and turned to see Anurag stood there, holding his hand up for her to wait. He ran to the mattress on the floor and lifted it to grab something from underneath it. Taani tried to see what it was from where she was stood but he was in the way.

He put whatever it was in his pocket on his chest and made his way over to her, now ready to go.

"Chaliye" Taani said to the nurse before following him out.
"Aaye"
"Onu, yeh le" Taani said and stopped to take a black shawl out of the bag she was holding. She opened the shawl and put it over Anurag. She tried to cover him completely but he stopped her hand.

Taani looked up at him and




"Jab main teri yaad karti thi to main yahin aati thi"

Anurag looked up at her. Remember him? Why would this woman remember him? He didn't even know her.

Anurag gave the woman a confused look and grabbed what he had picked up before leaving the Asylum, from his pocket.

He looked at it and smiled. Taani turned to see Anurag staring at the kangan and gasped. He kept them.

She slowly approached him slowly as to not startle him and he looked up to see her. "yeh maa ke kangan, hain na?" she asked and he looked at the woman properly before nodding. How did she know? "tune apni Mishti ko diya jab Robbie ki sagaai Jonaki horaha tha na?".Anurag nodded. She must have been at the party."Us din tune usse apni patni mana tha na?" she asked and a wary Anurag nodded. This was becoming strange. Taani sighed. "Kash hum kabhi bare na hote" she said and he looked up at her again. She had beenwatching them in the garden. He had said that to his Mishti. He had said that to her when she asked when they'd grow up? Why would someone do that? Why would someone eavesdrop on someone else's conversation? That's wrong.

"Bachpan main jab ek baar, jab hum yahaan bayte the,Onu ne mujhse poocha ke; Taani, kya do log ek doosre se itna pyaar sakte ke vo apni jaan bhi dehsakthe?" she smiled at their innocence.

Anurag's head shot up. That was no coincidence. The only people that were there when Anurag said that was him. And his Mishti.

So that meant... She was...?

She was his Mishti?

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Thaanks Nads. I'm posting the third one now:
 
Taani turned to see Anurag stood there, with tears silently rolling down his cheeks.

"Kya hua Onu?" she asked rushing over to him. He slipped and his leg banged into a rock. "Onu!" she said worriedly. "tujhe chot to nahin lagi na?" she said inspecting him for marks as he just stood there, staring at her. "Onu?" she said looking at his face and wiped his eyes with her thumb. "tu roh kyun rahe ho? Haan?" she asked "yahaan bayt" she said sitting him on a rock.

Taani sat in front of him and rubbed his foot, trying to eliavate the pain. "ab kaisa hai, theek hai na?" she asked and he nodded slowly. "yeh le" she said reaching into her bag and took out a bottle of water, passing it to him.

He took it in both hands and drank it, watching Taani as she sat there, looking at him. "ab theek hai na?" she asked and he nodded as he gave her the bottle back. She smiled before putting it away.

Anurag presented her with the kangan and she looked up at him. "kya Onu?" she asked "pehnaayegha mujhe?" she smiled as he sat there, holding the kangan out for her to take it. "pehna" she told him but he froze She smiled before helping him by taking his hand and trying to fit it on her hand but it was too small. He looked up as Taani undid it, smiling to herself. Just like his Mishti did that night.

Anurag just stared at the woman sat in front of him. It was her. It was actually her. It was his Mishti. She hadn't forgotten about him. She was with him.

Taani looked up to see him watching her, tears falling down his cheeks. "Onu, tu.." she wiped his eyes for him and he held her hand there, at his cheek as their eyes met and locked. He took his hand from her cheek and attempted to put the bracelet on her wrist. It fit.

He looked up at her and put his hand to her cheek, carressing her. "Taani" he said, almost a whisper. Taani's eyes widened and tears formed as she reached for his hand on his cheek and smiled, holding it there.
"Haan Onu, main. Main aayi hoon. Sirf Tere Liye" she said resting her forehead on his as they both smiled.

 

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Lubz..amazing OS's!!! Big smile

Okay..here's a kind of poem collection/song album called the 'Asylum' written exclusively by me, aka Meg. LOL

The first song is 'No One Loved..the Way He Did'



Throughout the ages, there have been lovers
But no one loved,
The way he did....

She took slow footsteps
As slowly as her life had passed
A kaleidoscope
Of colourful tragedy
A drama untold
A heart so bold
With a courage
Not found in you and me
She stared at him
With tears rolling down her cheeks
Like raindrops falling hard on the earth
Like those who have migrated returning to the land of their birth
For she had returned to the person who taught her how to love
She simply stared.

Some types of love shun the light
They only shine in the darkness bright
They find good in bad
Better in the good
They are always so unique
They are misunderstood...

No one loved the way he did...No one loved the way he did..

He sat there curled up
Rocking to and fro
As erratically as his life had passed
A kaleidoscope
Of colourful tragedy
A drama untold
A heart so bold
With a courage
Not found in you and me
He stared at her
Confused 
His heart mutilated
With space for neither love nor hatred
Just black matter
Floating around
He silently screams
But there is no sound
He simply stared

Some types of love shun the light
They only shine in the darkness bright
They find good in bad
Better in the good
They are always so unique
They are misunderstood...

No one loved the way he did...No one loved the way he did..





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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
lubzyyy  lovely os Clap do write more sweetie..

another fab poem from my lil shakespear Day Dreaming awesome sweetie

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 8:23am | IP Logged
lubz just read third one lovely wow you writing os too great going dear .

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