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The Asylum: Mental over Paagal Onu AT Note Page 18 (Page 13)

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Day Dreaming A lovely oneshot, Meg.. Love love it..... And the poem was cuteBlushing

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@Manasi: Wow ! Love ur work ! Clap the both siggies are too cute ! Embarrassed

@Meg: Aww... such a cute OS ! ClapClap Love it ! WinkClap

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Count me innn! Approve He looks so hot, haaayeee. ROFL

Pagal Onu all the way! Big smile

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And awesome OS MegThumbs Up

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Megz One-Shots

 

New Year Special

 

Tu Na Jaane Aas Paas Hai Khuda

 

Sorry for being so late with you new year treat..it's just that I wasn't expecting such an overwhelming response to my writing..(Read requests adding up to at least a 5000 or 6000 word count) I also need to concentrate on writing in other forums..not to mention non-fan fictions…yeah I'm one busy writer! So I request you to be patient and don't worry..I'll make up for that boring weekend soon enough. ;)

 

The biting cold, accompanied by stormy rains was driving everyone in Kolkatta crazy. And yet Taani Bannerjee could care less about the weather. She had to leave the city, leave her Onu lying alone in the asylum, for a concert abroad. She had decided it was time she moved on-moved on from all those painful memories, and made a new beginning. But Onu would always be a part of her life, whether she wanted it or not. She could only hope that one day he would emerge out of his shell. Till then she only had to wait-for him.

 

As she was packing her bags, she came across many photos of her and Onu together. Onu smiling, laughing, flashing his teeth, making faces, grimacing, annoyed, dancing with her-every form of his was there. And finally one last haunting photo, taken before everything went wrong, on their last outing together at the waterfall…Onu staring at his and Taani's reflection in the water, and holding her hand. And only that photo elicited a single tear from her cheek, but the grief in that teardrop was enough to outweigh a million tears.

 

As she was being driven to the airport, she decided to make a last stop at the asylum. She had already phoned, and as usual, the warden was waiting for her, a sad expression on her face. Such a young woman, so beautiful, and yet to torn by tragedy. There had been no change in Onu, she informed. Taani only nodded her head. She was escorted to the cell, where she found Onu, rocking to and fro, staring with a blank expression at something non-existent.

 

'Onu,' whispered Taani sadly, 'I'm going.'

 

He looked at her strangely. The weird lady in the sari was back. Goodness knows what she wanted now. She looked sadder than ever, despite the fact that she was not crying. He ignored her and continued staring at the wall.

 

Taani sighed. 'Here's some mithai for you…' He turned and looked at her and gave her an acknowledging nod. It broke her heart, his indifference towards her, as he gobbled up the mithai. Was that box of sweets the only significance of her in his life? Didn't he love her anymore? Was that why most people were abandoned when they went mad, because they lost the capability to realize what true love is?

 

And then she looked around, at the numerous Mishtis scrawled in the wall, his unkempt look, the four walls of the asylum cell imprisoning him, and knew that this all was, in a way for her. Everything he had done was for her..he had truly loved her till his last breath, and even now when he was devoid of all life, he still loved her. And yet he did not know that the girl for who he had done all this was now standing right in front of him…

 

Haalaton se haar kar
Kahan chala re
Haath ki lakeer ko
Modhta marodta
Hai hausla re
Toh khud tere khwabon ke rang mein
Tu apne jahan ko bhi rang de
Ke chalta hoon mein tere sang mein
Ho shaam bhi toh kya
Jab hoga andhera
Tab paayega dar mera
Uss dar pe phir hogi teri subah
Tu na jaane aas pass hai khuda
Tu na jaane aas pass hai khuda

 

And yet she would continue to be by his side..for hope was always there.

 

 

Just like the biting winds carried over voices from one side to another…every bad situation in life would carry over hope…

 

Just like the rain swept away everything in it's path, it would leave a rainbow behind, the way darkness left behind hope…

 

And hope would be his salvation…and the true answer to her test of love…

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I know this is more of a Taani story than Paagal Onu..but remember..Taani and Onu are two bodies...two different personalities..but the same soul..the same essence..and in the same way...i guess..even she is as important a part of paagal onu's story as he is....Smile

don't throw joota chappals at me for making a mess out of such a beautiful song...LOL

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loved the scene.it's awesome

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.it's awesome

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