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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Nice concept Manjari.. It will be fun.. To read.. Add me in da pm list.. But dere is 1 confusion??? Is gunjan will married sumone else???

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:48am | IP Logged
nice concept manju
cont soon

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:54am | IP Logged
wow dear wonderful concept just do continue soon we all would love to join ur this FF also and thanks for pm 

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 9:57am | IP Logged
i'll simply say two things-
 
1. ur gone crazzy............damn crazzy....LOL
reason- apne baaki ffs updt karti nahi ho! neither LWU nor COA!
despite COA is gonna end ur starting wid a new one!LOL!
bt nyways, im gonna wait for other ffs also 2b updated!Wink
 
2. im a die-hard fan of urs
reason- ur simply a fab writer.ClapClapClap..yaar aise ideas dimaag mein aate kahan se hain tujhe??? i guess dimaag hai b tera?? LOL!
ok jokes apart, i love d concept....as m still confused, bt as u updt d 1st part, i'll undrstand evrything!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
love you!!
 
n do i need 2say tht add me in ur pm list???


Edited by ria_lovesajan - 27 December 2010 at 9:59am

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 10:04am | IP Logged
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edited....
heyyyyyyyyy mismultitalented....i guess toh mujhe tera tariff karne ke liye force kar rahi hai....AngryWink
hats off 2 u yaar how do u manage
i guess ur ff icon of everybody(dont b shockd haan)Wink
n coming 2 d concept........kya kahoon yaar..
its superbbbbbb n awesomeeeeeeeeee 
itz really diffrnt n unique...
n aise ideas sirf tujh jaise logon ke dimaag main hi aayenge...
d concept is damn gud n intrsting..cant wait 2 read more..Tongue


Edited by SM_317 - 27 December 2010 at 10:19am

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 10:12am | IP Logged

PART 1

 

Hey Guys!

Thank You Sooo Much For Encouraging Me! I loved all the comments I have got till now! This is very different and I want to make this work!
@ Guys: Some of you'll had this issue about gunjan being married or not. Atm there is nothing like that! they are kids..
I had mentioned this is their whole life! so atm, no husband wife issues!
 
This is my first Update.. Just keep reading. At first Im 100 % sure you wont get a thing! But as you read further you will understand better! Its very short as Im too nervous to write anymore!

NOTE: There are many spelling errors and gramatical mistakes.. they are supposed to be there.. its how 7 year old kids talk! Their spellings are not perfect nor is their language!

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CHAPTER 1(A)

 

To Samrat,

            You are invited to my 7th birthday party on teusday the 8th of April in my house. We are having a magician and you can come to my house at 2 o'clock. It is over at 5 o'clock. I hope you will come

From your best friend Gunjan.

 

To Gunjan,

             Yes I will come to your birthday party on wensday.

Form Samrat

 

To Samrat,

            My birthday is on Tuesday not Wednesday. You cant bring sandy(a dog) to the party because mum says so. She is a smelly dog.

From Gunjan.

 

To Gunjan,

             I do not care wot your stupid mum says sandy wants to come.

Form Samrat.

 

To Samrat

             My mum is not stupid you are. You are not aloud to bring the dog. She will brust the balloons.

From gunjan.

 
To Gunjan,
 

Then Im not Coming!

Form Samrat.

 
To Samrat,
Fine!

From Gunjan...

_________________________________________

Dear Mrs. Shergill,

I just called by to have a word with you about my daughter gunjan's bday on the 8th of april. Sorry you werent in, but Ill drop by again later this afternoon and maybe we can talk then.

           There seems to be some sort or little problem with Gunjan and Samrat lately. I think they're quite not on talking terms. I hope you can fill me in on the situation when we meet. Gunjan would really love if he came to her birthday party!

              I'm looking forward to meet you!

See you then,

Pooja Bhushan.

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To Gunjan,

I would be happy to go to your birthday party the next week. Thank you fro inviting me and sandy!

Form Samrat your frend.

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After the Birthday.

To gunjan,

Thanks for the great day at the party. I am sorry sandy brust the balloons and ate your cake. She was hungry. I think you were right I should not have brot her.

Samrat

To Samrat

Thanks for the present. Its ok about what sandy did. Mum says she needed a new carpet anyways. Dad is a bit mad though. He said the old one was fine but mom thinks the house smells of poo now, and its not armaan! (Gunjan's younger brother).

       Look at miss casey's nose. It is the biggest nose I have ever seen. Ha ha ha.

Gunjan.

To Gunjan,

        I no she has a big snot hanging down too. She is the ugliest alien I have ever seen. I think we should tell the police we have an alien as a teacher who really has a smelly breathe and ---

(Oh Oh, Miss casey saw them passing notes)

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Dear Mr. And Mrs. Shergill,

         I would like to arrange a meeting with you to discuss how samrat is progressing in school. Specifically, I would like to talk about the recent change in his behavior along with the problem of his note passing in class. I would appreciate it you would call the school and arrange a meeting.

Yours Sincerely,

Miss Casey.

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To Samrat,

I hate the fact that we dont sit together anymore.. its so sad.. Im stuck in beside this girl called palak, who keeps digging her nose and wiping it on her dress!

By the way, what did your dad and mum say about miss big nose??

From Gunjan

To gunjan,

Mum did not say much but she kept laffing i dont no why. It is reall boring up the front of the class. Smelly breathe miss casey keeps on lucking at me. Have to go.

Samrat.

To Samrat,

You always spell KNOW wrong! Its KNOW not NO.

From Gunjan!

To Gunjan,

Sorry miss perfect. I no how to spell it!

Samrat

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 10:13am | IP Logged
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**edited**

i know im really unressing very fastShocked...par tumhari nervousness dekhkar karna pad raha haiOuchROFL..lolz was just kiddingLOLHug....
coming  to ur update:
it was superb .....tu faltu mein chinta karrahi haiApprove....
i totally loved it
u wrote it really wellClap....
wow yaar it was sooo cuteEmbarrassed....chota sa sammmy aur chota sa gunjanEmbarrassed...i loved the friendship betweenEmbarrassed..kitna pyaar se gun sam ko correct karrahi thiEmbarrassed.was too gudClap.n unka cute sa nok jhokEmbarrassed regarding sandy was superbEmbarrassedHug........n seriously the spelling errors is superb ideaClap
their conversation regardin miss casey was superb..totally kiddish ..seriously u r a natural writer i don't know y ru tensedConfused....the whole part was sooo cute..n sammy calls gun miss perfectBlushing..hayyeeeee..i wish he would have called me that....n how cutely he makes mistakesBlushing
yaar totally the part was rockingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancing.....now cheer up n stop worryinHug
do continue soonEvil Smile..im seriously getting addicted to ur ffsApprove......n thanx for the pmHug

Luv ya
Insane GhostROFLHugDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancing



Edited by deepti_mohit - 27 December 2010 at 10:49am

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 10:20am | IP Logged
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yaaa me d 2nd oneParty..shocking na...Wink

heyyyy paagal(multialenetd)
wow yaar....amazing start....
loved it....d concept was damn intsrting...n u updated both d cs n 1st part in one day..
it was sooooo cuteeee n sweet...
sajan as kids r sooo adorableDay Dreaming
loved their cute nok jhoks...
n spelling errors u wrote was veryyyyy cute n natural...
im sure koi bhi aisa ff pehla kabhi nahin likha hoga...
d concept n everything is soooo diffrnt n unique....
u wrote it very very very well yaarClap
im already luving dis ff...
just cant wait 2 read more....n dont worry main tera tariff sirf ffs main hi karti hoon...WinkLOL
lovely part!
love uu
smartypants...


Edited by SM_317 - 28 December 2010 at 2:27am

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