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Posted: 13 years ago

Morning after Suhaag Raat

 

(Archana has taken her birth, but Manav is still sleeping.)

 

Archana- Manav utho na

Manav- uthne ka kya dogi

Archana-chup chap utho ..fresh ho jao ghumne jana hai

Manav- nahi mujhe neend aa rahi hai..kuch aisa karo ki neend toot jaye

Archana- thanda paani dal doon

Manav-are kareeb to aao

Archana-chhi gande

(Manav archana ke gile baalon ko pakad ke apni ore khinch leta hai and tries to kiss her)

Archana-nahi baba..subah subah yeh sab ..chhod do na

Manav- dekho good morning kiss ache se na ki jaye to pura din bekaar jata hai..samjhi

Archana-mujhe bachhi samajh rakha hai kya?

Manav- nahi kal raat jo jo hua usko dekhne ke baad main tumhe bachhi kaise samajh sakta hun

Archana-chhi..

 Manav-waise tumhe achha nahi laga kya

Archana-dekho mera dimaag kharab mat karo

(manav forcefully drags archana and kisses her on her lips)

Archana- ab bas bhi karo na..aap ka dil nahi bhara kya

Manav- na ..bilkul nahi..jee chahta hai tumhe aise hi baahon mein bhar ke tumhare honthon se honth mila ke baki ki zindegi aise bita doon

Archana-ab jane do na

Manav- jane keliye aayi thi kya mere paas

Archana-bahut natak ho gaya..ab chalo brush karo..bathroom jao..fir mujh se baat karo

Manav-ek condition pe

Archana- kya

Manav-aaj hum kahin nahi jayenge..pure din isi kamre mein rahenge..suhaag din manayenge

Archana-bilkul nahi..

Manav- to main tumhe aise hi pakad ke rakhunga..bed ke upar se na main khud uthunga na tumhe jane dungaa

Archana-aap ko nasta nahi karna..paani nahi peena

Manav-tumhare yeh gulaabi honth aur nashili aankhon ko jee bhar ke pee lene ke baad kis kambakht ko bhala bhuk ya pyaas lagti hai

Archana-to aap aise chhodoge nahi..

Manav- matlab tum meri shart ko manti ho..ki aaj kahin nahi jana bas din bhar kamre mein rehna

Archana- achha baba..ab chhodo to..

Manav- waise maine tumhe 5 minute pehle apne baahon mein se azad kar diya.tum hi mere seene mein lipti padi ho mere honthon ke sath apne honthon ko mila ke

(archana sharma jati hai and gets up)

Manav- ha ha ha

Archana- ab haso mat gande

Manav-fir se lip lock kar lo meri hasi band ho jayegi

Archana-bahut smart ho gaye ho lagta hai..jao bathroom jao

Manav-tum bhi chalo

Archana-chhi

Manav-tumne kaha tha pure din mere sath rahogi

Archana- abhi sath hi hun na baba

Manav- waise archana kal raat ko..yaar tum to kamal nikli yaar..wow..itni kashish tum mein hogi mujhe pata nahi tha

Archana-abhi aur kashish dekhoge..chalo pehle bathroom..

Manav- wow sath nahayenge kya

Archana-haan bilkul

(Archana manav dono bathroom tak jate hain.  Manav ko andar dhakel ke archana closes the door from outside.)

Manav- archana yeh cheating hai yaar

Archana- aadhe ghante ke andar fresh ho ke aa jao

Manav-par tooth paste mil nahi raha

Archana- wash basin ke left side mein rakha hai

Manav-soap nahi hai

Archana- wall mein dekho..right side

Manav- garam paani nahi hai

Archana- left wala tap kholo

Manav-meri archana nahi hai idhar

Archana-jyada natak baazi nahi..main tumhara wait kar rahi hun ..dekho time waste mat karo apna..bathroom se chillaoge to suhaag din kya khaak manaoge

Manav- wow tum bhi interested ho suhaag din keliye

Archana-haan of course

Manav- yahoooooooooo…dil tham ke baithe raho main aata hun jaldi

(Manav comes out after sometime. He is in a towel)

Manav- chalo shuru ho jate hain

Archana- nasta nahi karoge

Manav- dekho bekaar ke kaamo mein time waste karna samjhdaari nahi hai

Archana-mujhe bahut bhuk lagi hai aur maine breakfast order kar liya hai

Manav-jab tak breakfast nahi aata kyun na kisses se kaam chalaya jaye

Archana-ohhh..main preshan (pareshan) ho gayi..

(manav tries to hug archana)

Archana-dekho aapka towel utar jayega

Manav-wohi to main chahta hun

Archana-bas ab bahut ho gaya..chhodo na..yeh naasta leke abhi tak aaya kyun nahi

Manav- ab nakhre kam karo darling

Archana- aaj pura dina mujhe aise hi tang karoge?

Manav-haan isi ko suhaag din kehte hain

Archana- dekho ab bahut ho gaya..chalo ghumen chalte hain

Manav-par aaj to room mein hi din biatana tha na..

Archana- wo main jhooth bol rahi thi

Manav-ab tumhari khair nahi…

 

(archana runs away and manav chases her and things go on like this….)

 

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Posted: 13 years ago
🤣🥳The chase is on!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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good one SD bhai.
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@ akash and monica
i think this story made u 🤣
 
but believe me my intention was to write a romantic story😉
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to aap ka romantic story ban gaya comic story🤣
keep it up SD bhai😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
lol very funny can anyone tell me how to dislike dis thread....i lyk manav n archana bcoz of thr sweet nd simple behaviour.....n u made it sexy....just try 2 make this conversation more romantic....ye archana manav ka style nae hai yaar....lol
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This content was originally posted by: kanu_143

lol very funny can anyone tell me how to dislike dis thread....i lyk manav n archana bcoz of thr sweet nd simple behaviour.....n u made it sexy....just try 2 make this conversation more romantic....ye archana manav ka style nae hai yaar....lol



yeh SD bhai ka apna style hai yaar.....you don't expect ArMan style in his writings.
you should read the previous posts of SD bhai. he wrote so many excellent posts.
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Posted: 13 years ago
naughty romantic comedy, SD bhai 🤣
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that was really fun to read. I could actually visualize it so clearly.

romantic phandas 1 AD style - kya baat hai

our mannu practical as ever - honeymoon ka paisa pur vasul karna hai 👏aur apni archana investment ka loss pe loss banate ja rahi hai.😡

ver good SD.  my first visit to one of your threads. very entertaining.

betcha he does not get to catch her eh? well until the raat rolls by again. their itineary is too busy with all sorts of phiantrophic pit stops😆

Hope

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This content was originally posted by: kanu_143

lol very funny can anyone tell me how to dislike dis thread....i lyk manav n archana bcoz of thr sweet nd simple behaviour.....n u made it sexy....just try 2 make this conversation more romantic....ye archana manav ka style nae hai yaar....lol

 
hi Kanu
 
once upon a time not very long long ago I used to portray ArMan in their natural way like Ji..ji...woh main...main woh .........but now a days i have changed my style. but of course i will try to write a bit more romantic Arman night with pavitra effects (in karanjkar house to allow more comedy)
 
thanks everybody for liking the post.