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hey nice part

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NICE CONCEPT Star
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                                           part 1

a girl is sleeping in her room like there is no tension in the world
a lady mid 40 came that room n open the window n see her daught who is sleeping with a pillow over her face. she smiled at her n tried to awake her




P: ridz beta uttho subha 8 baaj gayye today ur 1st day at college bhul gayyi kya?

 hering it she just jerkrd herself n sat on the bed n told

Ri: mom i m late why u didnt woke me before

P: look who is saying? now go n freshenup mai tumhari breakfast lagati hoon

IN CANADA its night time

a handsome guy is working on his LT (yeah none other that out ARMAAN) suddenly a garl ( mini skirt wali) came n snatch his LT
n said

THE GIRL: whats all this? u r going to india but u didnt info me it
u always said u love me its ur love n turned other side folding hands
on her chest. armaan get from his possition n turned her towards himself n said

Ar: i m still saying i love u i love u very much nikki but its imp
u noe ATUL he is all time IDOT he loves a girl but have to gutt to tell her parents so i m going there to help him only n i will be bak soon

Ni: i m not beleaving u. tumhara koi bharosa heni hai agar tum hai india me koi pasand aa jai then
u will not come.

hearing it Armaan's face fall down n she cut her tougue she noes she press the wrong nerve

Ar: u noe in my life i love only 3 women mom, dadi  u. i will be bak n for me love immosible

Ni: lets see what destiny preserve for u by the way when is ur flight late na ho jaao

Ar: there is still 4 hurs n i m done will leave soon n he will be bak soon too saying it they huged eachother n armaan kissed her forehead

IN IDIA

Ri: oh god i m late pehla din late good going ridz

Riddhima stopped in her tracks as she could again hear someone calling out her name. She wanted to turn around and see who it was, but at the same time didn't want to take the risk of more late but she has no option but to stop coz thaty sound tis comming closer than a a handsome guy came up to her and asked, "Riddhima?"

Ri: Yes, I am Riddhima," she said with a puzzled expression.

the Guy: I am Rahul and I just happened to be at the parking lot next to ur car , when I saw you drop your ID card  as you rushed out from there as u cant enter ur class without it
 
Ri:A visibly embarrassed Riddhima thanked him and also apologized for having caused him the trouble of running after her

Ra: by the way i m ur senior as i m last year in my graduation

There was something very warm and likeable about this guy that exuded very positive vibes

Ra: Alright then, let me take leave of you  Hope to see you people soon

IN CANADA at AIRPORT

Ar: INDIA i m comming MOM i m comming but dont noe why i feel everything will change soon. just hope this changing is for positive not negetive coz i have no gutt to face those things again. i will have to alart if mom tries for my marriage i have to deny hope mom will not do it again. i cant love anyone just cant

in the mean time his name announced n he headed toward the plane. in plane all female eyes turning towards the entrance With his grey eyes, great physique and tall demeanour, he is a Greek God to say the least.he just smiled n seat on his seat

IN INDIA

in the class a curly hair girl came n seat beside riddhima n start her chatterbox

Mu: hello ji mai muskaan aur tumhara naam kya hai?

Ri: Hi i m riddhima gupta.

Mu: in her mind kitna boring naam hai then told nayi ho yaha

Ri: yaha sab new hai right????

MU: hehehe LOLLOLLOL( her fav way to lough) friendsSmile

Ri: friendsSmile

FOREVER suddenly they heard a name voice n its RAHUL n they
turn toward the door after seeing Rahul, Muskaan was shocked to
say anything.

Ri: tum yaha kaise? tum to senioe ho na?

Ra: actually i was passing from here n see u moreover no teacher
si thoughtr kicome n make friendship with u

then she remembered Muskaan, who on the other hand was simply staring at Rahulready to kill look. n Rahul is naughty smile on his face

Ri: Muskaan he is

her intro left imcomlete as

Mu: oyee khote tu yaha meri pichee pichee challa ayya
saram nehi atta tujhe itna pitne ke badh vi ohi harkat

ridz is Shockedshocked to listen it n said

Ri: what??? tumne Rahul ko pitta but kuyn?

Ra: hold ur toungue muskaan mei nehi tu mera pichaaa kiya
mai yahaka student pehlesehi hoon tu nayi ayyi n turn towars ridz n said riddhima tum uski baat matt suno iyye bachpan se hi pagal hai

tum do no ka kuch nahi ho sakta ridz said



its 1st part plz press the like tub n comment suggesion critise everything is granted


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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 6:05am | IP Logged

awesome part

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Edited by ri-za - 28 December 2010 at 6:15am
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awesome part Clap
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 6:29am | IP Logged
nice part....update soon
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 6:38am | IP Logged
hey nice part
loved it
do continue sooon
with luv and regards
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heyyy dear,
nice part
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