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Enemies to Lovers-RM & ArSh| Pt15 Pg54 Apr11 LAST (Page 49)

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Part 12, Page 45

Part 13

Standing in front of the mirror, Rahul checked himself for the thousandth time.


"Do I look alright Armaan?" Rahul asking checking his right side profile and then his left.


"Haan dude you look good! Now moveeeeee! You have been hogging the mirror for the last 2 hours!" Armaan says shoving him aside.


"Haan haaan ok" Rahul says tiptoeing behind Armaan and checking himself out.


"By the way.. why are you soooo into how you look? Are you taking someone?" Armaan winks.


"Uhh no.." Rahul says moving away.


"Spill it Rahul.. you know you are horrible at lying na" Armaan says standing beside Rahul.


"Well Muskaan.. she's different na lately?" Rahul says smiling.


"Yup she is!" Armaan says understanding "She's such a bubbly and vivacious girl nowadays!"


"Haan so.. I don't know.. maybe .."


"I never thought this day would come" Armaan says laughing "Rahul falling for Muskaan?? Is the sky gonna fall?" Armaan asks in fake shock.


"Ya whatever! It's not like thatttttttt!!" Rahul rolls his eyes.


"Ya suree.. it's not like thattt.. it's like thiss" Armaan says drawing air hearts.


Rahul just sticks his tongue out at Armaan and walks out.


"Where are the girls yaar?" Rahul asked looking at the enterence.


"Kabir is bringing them here..I know who you're waiting for" Armaan winked.


"Whatever ok.." Rahul rolled his eyes.


They waited for a while and finally the girls and Kabir were there.


Armaan and Rahul's eyes were wide open looking at the girl.


"Gorgeous" Armaan whispered looking at Shilpa in the white dress he had given her.


"Beautiful" Rahul stared at Muskaan.


"Hey guys..." Kabir said bringing them back to reality


"Ok we'll be back in a while" Kabir said taking Nisha somewhere.


"Muski in sari? You look stunning" Armaan said giving her a side hug.


"Thanks Armaan, you look dashing too" She winked.


"Don't I always?" Armaan smirked "Ohh umm Shilpa..come with me" Armaan said grabbing her hand. Winking at Rahul, he left them alone.


"Armaan leave me" Shilpa said pushing off his hand.


"Hmm someone is naraaz huh" Armaan said looking at Shilpa's cute angry face. "May I ask why?" He asked wrapping his arm around her waist.


"Nothing" she replied looking away.


"There is something" he whispered in her ears making her shiver.


" look really beautiful" Rahul smiled.


"Thanks look nice too..I your sherwani" she smiled back.


"Thanks..wanna get something to drink?" he asked. "Sure" she replied.


"Armaan you didn't even tell me how I look in this dress" Shilpa pouts.


"Is there even a need to tell?" Armaan asks staring at her beautiful face.


"Umm.. nahi batana hai toh mat batao" Shilpa says looking away.


"You look gorgeous, mindblowing, stunning! Like an angel" Armaan says with his palm on her cheek. Shilpa turns redder and redder by the second as he compliments her.


"Ab Muskaan ki sari ki tarah laal mat ban jao" Armaan says kissing her cheek.


"What would you like?" Rahul asks Muskaan, but in the back of his mind he is worried about this coming for a drink idea.. cause he knows how Muskaan is around drinks.


"Just some coke.." Muskaan smiles.


"Bas? With nothing else in it?" Rahul asks, a little shocked.


"Haan.. tum coke main paani milake peete ho kya?" Muskaan asks skeptically.




"Then why did you ask me such a silly question?" Muskaan rolls her eyes.


"Two cokes please" Rahul tells the bartender.


"Nice party huh" Muskaan says after five minutes of waiting for Rahul to start a conversation.




"Dance with me?" Armaan says offering his hand to Shilpa.


Taking his hand, Shilpa follows him onto the dance floor gracefully.


"Oops, my sari" Muskaan got up holding onto her sari from the shoulder as she felt it falling off "I'll be back Rahul" Saying that she rushed to one of the rooms to fix it.


Rahul followed her thinking she might need some help.


"Ughh I would never wear a sari again" She mumbled as she tried fixing it.


"Need help?" Rahul asked standing at the door.


"Uh Rahul tum...umm yeah please if you can" She gulped as he walked in.


"You wore it for the first time huh" he chuckled while taking the pin from her hand.


As their fingers brushed, Muskaan's heart skipped a beat.


Rahul took a deep breath and placed his hand on her shoulder to pin the sari so it doesn't fall off.


Muskaan closed her eyes as his hand brushed against her neck.


"Armaan, are you going back to Chicago?" Shilpa asked as they danced.


"No, I'll stay at my cousin's place..." He smiled.


"Would you miss me if I go back?" he asked getting closer to her face.


"Of course I would.." She replied looking deeply into his eyes.


"There you go..." Rahul said after fixing her sari.


"Thanks Rahul" she smiled nervously and walked out. "Aahh I wanted to kiss him..." she thought.


"Muskiii come here..kahan hai yaar I was looking for you" Kabir said going up to her.


"Let's go eat na.." Nisha said.


"Yeah we're hungry and we're going to can join us" Kabir offered.


"Of course I dying to eat Indian food" Muskaan grinned.


"I'll join you guys as well..." Rahul said coming from behind Muskaan.


"Armaan Shilpa kahan hai?" Nisha asked looking around.


"Dance floor pe romance kar rahe hai" Kabir chuckled.


"Whats so funny in that? They are so adorable..Armaan is such a sweetheart..aur ek tum ho..not romantic at all" Nisha said rolling her eyes.


"Acha?" Kabir placed a light kiss on her lips shocking her.


"Kabir khana khane ke baad romance karna...ab chal" Muskaan said walking towards the food and others followed.


Kabir texted Armaan to come for dinner.


"Omg I love all the food that here" Muskaan said.


" don't even know the names do you?" Kabir asked.


"Of course I do...haina Shilpa? Shilpa knows too" Muskaan grinned.


"Uh no I don't" Shilpa replied biting her tongue.


"Ok I'll tell you Shona..." Armaan said.


"Oye hero, Shilpa ko Shona kabse bulane laga be?" Muskaan asked curiously.


"Jab hum dance floor pe the na tab se" he said kissing Shilpa's hand.


"Ok gonna name the food and prove Kabir wrong.." Muskaan said looking at the food "Thats Biryani, that green thing is uh daal? yeah daal, the orange thing is chole batura, that thing right there is paneer butter masala, that's malai kofta" Before Muskaan could continue Kabir stopped her.


Rahul, Armaan and Nisha burst out laughing while Shilpa stood there confused on why they were laughing.


"Muski,  you named everything WRONG" saying that Kabir burst out laughing as well.


" sorry" saying that Muskaan ran off to the terrace.




"Shit man, I made fun of myself? Ughh only cause of that Rahul...and I don't even know if he loves me...that AWESOME" she thought, hitting her head.


"Muskaan.." Rahul says uncertainly as he watches her reprimanding herself silently.


"What do you want??" Muskaan asks flinging around, ready to pounce on anyone messing with her.


"Are you fine?" Rahul asks, slowly heading her way.


"Uh.. tum.. yaa.. I'm alright" Muskaan says messing with her hair.


"Why did you do all that in there? I mean like act like you knew all that stuff?" Rahul asks standing in front of her.


Muskaan fumes hearing him bring up the inside matter again.


"Tumhari entertainment ke liye! Hass rahe the na tum?" Muskaan says rolling her eyes "Duhhh I was doing it to impress you" she admits.


As Shilpa is walking away with her plate of food, she sees Armaan following her empty handed.


Gesturing to his hands with her eyes, she asks what's up using her hand. "Kyaa?"


"Food.. you aren't eating?" she asks.


"Dono same plate se khayenge na Shona.. pyaar badhta hai" Armaan says sweetly.


"You're soo filmyyy Armaan" Shilpa says giggling as she looks for a place to sit.


Rahul smiles hearing that, "and why were you trying to impress me?" Rahul asks.


"Rahul I thought you were smarter than this!" Muskaan says in frustration "Cause I love you of course!!" Muskaan shouts.


He feels his heart jumping in glee at her confession, but wanting to annoy her again, and wanting to hear her confession again he asks "What did you say?"


Sitting in the corner, Shilpa holds up a spoon to Armaan's slightly parted lips.


"Yummm Shona! This food tastes thousand times better coming from your hands" Armaan says taking a spoonful and lifting it to Shilpa's mouth.


"Armaan you watch a lot of bollywood films kya?" Shilpa smiles.


"Haan.. sometimes when parents watch I just sit there" Armaan answers.


"Oh God!!! Why did you have to make this good looking guy deaf?? I guess kuch na kuch defect hona tha right?" Muskaan asks having a conversation looking up at the sky.


Pulling him closer by his collar Muskaan shouts "I LOVE YOU!!!" again.


"No wonder" Shilpa whispers to herself.


"Kuch kaha?"


"Nahi nahi" Shilpa says feeding him again as they continue their sweet talks.


"I love you too" Rahul says looking her in the eye.


"You still couldn't hear me??" Muskaan asks, ready to punch him now, but stops as his words register in her mind.


As she looks towards the ground trying to figure out if she imagined his confession or he said it for real, Rahul smiles understanding her dilemma.


Lifting her chin up slowly Rahul whispers the three magical words again.


Muskaan looks up in shock, then raises her eye brow at him, then a smile lightly breaks on her face, and finally she settles in a light blush.


"You do?" she asks fluttering her eyelashes.


"I do" Rahul says chuckling inwardly at her childishness.


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Thank you, Thank you, Thank you all sooooo much for your continued support and encouraging words! Even though we don't reply to comments, we certainly do read each and every comment :)
Please keep them coming! Embarrassed

Also we want to clarify to our readers that this is an ArSh + an RM ff, so we will write both their scenes equally! :)

- Reema & Shilpa

Edited by sweet.melody - 27 March 2011 at 1:50pm

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MysticalRealm IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 6:28pm | IP Logged

Guys RM confession was UBER cute!!

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KaSh_luv IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 6:48pm | IP Logged
awesome update! it was soo cute!
aww RM...confessed....

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KaSh-Maneet-Fan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
loved RM
soooooooo cute
loved da confession
ArSh were adorable
loved da filmy lines
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm 

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neha-rockss IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
awww cute part...............
lovng ARSH romance nd yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
finally RM confessed hehehehe
thanx 4 d pm........
-screwed.UP- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwww so cute
arsh moments were so romantic n lovely
loved the sweet rm confession
thnx for the pm
do cont soon
Radhika Shah IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
Great part...!
angullgrl91 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
awesome part

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