Manjari's OS Gallery--*I love You*(SaJan) - Page 20

Originally posted by: -BlueFairy-

Manjari Superbbbbbbb Oses dear okay 1st am going to comment for heartbroken

The way you described their emotions of samrat during the the time of heartbreak was just Perfectttt 👍🏼and Gunajn  supporting him during this situation 😳It was a Beauuuuutiful OS yet touchy and heartbreaking 😭I lireally had tears while reading this one 😭.But Must say Manjari it was an Awesome OS and the ending was really painful but you penned it very nicely ⭐️  ⭐️  ⭐️

 

The thoughts of being a father

Well I really loved reading this one and it was an adorable OS and I loved reading the feelings of Samrat as a to-be-father 😳  ⭐️.His thoughts about his children was sooooo Cute 😍 😳.and the ending scene was Just perfect and glad to see that his wish came true 😃.Reallly Nice work Dear and cont soon 😳

nice mayur ff

Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

Tum kiya ho yaar!!!  now mayur OS 😲 NICE WORK !!!

Originally posted by: chilluppp

HEART BROKEN

 

ok

amazingggggggggggggg concept dear

fabbbbbb endiong

just loved the way u have written it

was a lil different from ur writting style

or i felt that

 

but hats off for writting so well

it was a lil mature tidkoo

isn't it

but to nae sudhry gy

but really instead u r too young to handle such subject u have writtedn it amazingly

Originally posted by: chilluppp

THOUGHTS ABOUT BEING A FATHER

 

manjariiiiiiiiiiiiiii

u killed me damn

God

it was just....................

there is no word that can do justice to it yar

 

awwwwwwwwwww

my sammy boy

he was just too adorable

loved the way u have written the story

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

hats off for writting so well

 

again to apny age sy mature likh rahy hy

still its veryyyyyy well written

u have done full justice to the plot

 

loved each n every sentence of samrat

the way he was reacting

last scene was really awwwwwwwwwww

when he holds his baby

it was touchy one na

loved it the most

 

n dialogues weere just superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

really jitna bolon kaaam hy dear